【正文】 作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。9．請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)Zhang Ying的一些表現(xiàn)的提示用英語寫一篇短文，把她介紹給你的外國朋友Mary。TimeGood habitsBad habitsIn the morningGet up earlyEat junk food for breakfastIn classAsk some questionsQuarrel（爭吵） with herclassmates sometimesAfter schoolAlways exerciseGo home lateIn the eveningHelp her parents with houseworkWatch TV or play putergames for more than an hour要求：語言要通順，表達要正確。文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。詞數(shù)不少于60個英語單詞。文章開頭結尾已給出，不計入詞數(shù)?！敬鸢浮縊ne possible versionDear Mary,I’m very glad to introduce（介紹） my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14yearold girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises （for a long time）. After supper she helps her parents with housework. （She is really a good girl. ）But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn’t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays puter games for more than an hour in the evening. （This makes her parents unhappy. ）I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?YoursHuang Deshun【解析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。寫作中注意將張穎的情況介紹清楚。根據(jù)材料可知，本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第三人稱進行敘述，寫作中主語時態(tài)及主謂一致等問題。注意不要遺漏要點，做到語句通順。為了使意思更加連貫可適當使用連接詞。【亮點說明】本文在寫作中使用了很多固定句式，如：be glad to do sth高興做某事；a lot of許多；get up起床等。本文中時間詞如After supper，Sometimes，in the evening等的巧妙使用，使得本文看起來邏輯清楚，條理分明。在學習中，我們應注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.考點：考查提綱類作文10．近期某英文報紙就“Snowplow Parents（掃雪機式父母）”這一話題展開討論?！皰哐C式父母”的特征是不惜一切代價為孩子掃除他們生活中遇到的一切障礙，解決一切困難，以便他們可以輕松擁有成功的人生。請從下表的兩種觀點中選擇一種觀點，并結合此觀點闡述自己的看法，用英文寫一篇短文投稿。觀點理解不理解父母出于對孩子的愛才這么做。父母控制一切，孩子沒有自由。自己的看法自己的看法要求：詞數(shù)：6080詞。短文應包括所選觀點中的要點，可適當發(fā)揮。短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關信息。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文I really can39。t understand the snowplow these parents,they control clean all the obstacles in children39。s this case,they think children have a successful life ,Children have no freedom to do is the worst thing in their life.In my opinion,parents shouldn39。t do all the things for they also need the experiences in their these experiences play an important role in a successful this way,they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in ,they sometimes can gain friendship and more love in their lives.【解析】【詳解】：本文是一篇話題作文，要求就“Snowplow Parents（掃雪機式父母）” 這一話題展開討論，并根據(jù)表格中所給出的提示內(nèi)容選擇一種觀點，結合此觀點闡述自己的看法。在解答寫作這類試題時，要根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結尾，將主要句型、關鍵詞語草草記下，形成提綱，然后再動筆寫作。： 本文時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第三人稱，輔以第一人稱。文章首先說明不理解掃雪機式父母的原因，接下來說明自己的觀點，并闡述自己觀點的原因。：短語：in one39。s lives，in this case，in this way，in trouble。句型：高分句型一：Inthiscase，theythinkchildrenhaveasuccessfullifeeasily．Inthiscase在這樣的情況下；這句話意為：在這樣的情況下，他們認為孩子會更加輕松擁有成功的人生。高分句型二：they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in trouble.beintrouble陷入麻煩，這句話意為：當他們陷入麻煩時他們知道他們需要他們自己盡力去解決問題。