【正文】 them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants. I believe everyone39。s contribution （貢獻） can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【解析】【詳解】本文是一封倡議書,倡議大家保護大象。文章共分為三個方面的內容，首先描述大象想在所處的現(xiàn)狀，然后說明出現(xiàn)這種狀況的原因，最后為了保護的大象我們應該如何去做。時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時。提出倡議時可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建議的句子。寫作時注意不要使用太復雜的句型，以免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，為使句子具有連貫性，可以適當使用連詞。本篇文章內容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比較級和最高級；Firstly,…. Secondly,…等詞的使用使文章具有層次性，條理清晰。并且一些連詞的使用，比如so, or, but等也使文章具有連貫性，是一篇不錯的文章。9．中學生在成長過程中經常會碰到一些煩惱。假設你是李華，請根據(jù)下表提示，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在班會上談談你遇到的煩惱以及你自己的做法。你的煩惱你的做法個頭不高，相貌平常不必在意，相信自己父母不理解，朋友少學會溝通，友善待人學習壓力大，課外活動少……（自主發(fā)揮，至少兩點）要求：1. 詞數(shù)100左右，開頭及結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。2. 所寫內容必須包括表格中所有的信息，并作適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮。3. 不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等相關信息。Hello everyone,Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. That’s all. Thank you!【答案】Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.I am not very tall and very mon. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to municate with others very well.I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the afterclass activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.That’s all. Thank you!【解析】試題分析：本題是一篇給材料作文，要求用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在班會上談談你遇到的煩惱以及你自己的做法。要求從個人外貌特點、與人溝通及學習壓力等方面進行寫作。要包含表格中所有的信息，并作適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮。短文用第一人稱形式，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。寫作亮點：短文開頭直奔主題：我想要談談我的煩惱及怎樣處理他們；后面三段分別從外貌上的煩惱、與父母交流上的障礙、學習上的壓力幾方面分別談論自己的煩惱及處理的方式，生動具體，條理分明。文中的不定式作賓補、作定語、作賓語用得準確恰當；and連接的并列句、并列謂語等等都使短文顯得簡捷生動?！究键c定位】 考查提綱類作文。10．書面表達“Life is like a box of of never know what you are going to get next.”Forrest Gump 中文譯名：《阿甘正傳》“Hope is a good thing. Maybe the best of things and no good thing ever dies.”The Shawshank Kedemption 中文譯名：《肖申克的救贖》“We are all running very hard. We are all dream chasers（追夢人）.”President Xi Jingping以上材料告訴我們：生活是豐富多彩的，有快樂幸福也有傷心失落。但既然選擇了遠方，便只顧風雨兼程。所以在學習和生活中，我們要滿懷希望、努力奔跑、追逐夢想。請以Dream Chaser為題，談談你自己的觀點。要點提示：，并努力讓它成為現(xiàn)實；，使自己不斷強大；，積極參加社會活動；。寫作要求：，可適當發(fā)揮使行文連貫； ，字跡工整，詞數(shù)不少于80；，不計入總詞數(shù)；。Dream ChaserAs we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel ______________________________________________________________________________【答案】As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset. In order to make our dream e true, firstly we should set a practical goal. But just having a goal is not enough. More importantly, we need to study hard to make ourselves stronger. Besides, as teenagers, it is necessary for us to take part in more social activities. We can learn a lot from each other by joining in those social activities. However, there will be many difficulties in both our daily life and study, so please keep patient and be brave to face these challenges. Finally, all our efforts are meaningful and one day our dream will be achieved.【解析】【詳解】：這是一篇材料作文。主要說明要有自己的目標，努力實現(xiàn)目標應做到勤奮學習，使自己不斷強大；正確面對困難，積極參加社會活動。：例文用第一人稱來敘述主要內容；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主，主要講述如何實現(xiàn)自己的目標（Firstly,…More importantly,…Besides,…Finally,…）。承接文章開頭，句意完整，避免漢語式英語，敘述條理清晰。：高分短語：feel satisfied；feel upset；e true；set a practical goal；both…and…；keep patient。高分句型：It is +adj. + for sb. +to do sth.；there be句型；祈使句；need to do sth.。