【正文】 態(tài)以一般將來時態(tài)為主。3. 高分亮點：短語：school gate；invite sb. to do；a lot of；plan to do。d better …；I39。7．李華的英國筆友Jessica來信說, 她想了解中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)。內(nèi)容須包含以下所有要點：1. 中秋節(jié)的時間；2. 中秋節(jié)的傳統(tǒng)習俗及慶祝方式：全家人一起吃飯, 賞月, 吃月餅等；3, 我最期待的活動。Dear Jessica, I39。m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to you. The MidAutumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories.For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作是以書信的方式向筆友介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)，要用一般現(xiàn)在時來寫。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)，主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如get together，enjoy the full moon， share our stories等。8．現(xiàn)在智能手機（smartphone）越來越普及，很多中學生都有智能手機。提示：在生活中你用智能手機做什么？智能手機對你的生活產(chǎn)生了怎樣的影響？你對中學生使用智能手機有什么看法？______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：The smartphone is being more and more popular nowadays .I also have a smartphone .I usually use it to send text messages, play games,watch videos, listen to music and learn English .It is very useful and convenient. In fact,the smartphone makes my life colorful. However ,every coin has two I spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams. So I think we students should use our smartphones properly and don’t use them too much .We should pay more attention to our studies.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇英語短文，談一談你對智能手機的看法。首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。9．請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)Zhang Ying的一些表現(xiàn)的提示用英語寫一篇短文，把她介紹給你的外國朋友Mary。文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。文章開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入詞數(shù)。寫作中注意將張穎的情況介紹清楚。注意不要遺漏要點，做到語句通順?！玖咙c說明】本文在寫作中使用了很多固定句式，如：be glad to do sth高興做某事；a lot of許多；get up起床等。在學習中，我們應注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.考點：考查提綱類作文10．近期某英文報紙就“Snowplow Parents（掃雪機式父母）”這一話題展開討論。請從下表的兩種觀點中選擇一種觀點，并結(jié)合此觀點闡述自己的看法，用英文寫一篇短文投稿。父母控制一切，孩子沒有自由。短文應包括所選觀點中的要點，可適當發(fā)揮。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文I really can39。s this case,they think children have a successful life ,Children have no freedom to do is the worst thing in their life.In my opinion,parents shouldn39。在解答寫作這類試題時，要根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結(jié)尾，將主要句型、關鍵詞語草草記下，形成提綱，然后再動筆寫作。文章首先說明不理解掃雪機式父母的原因，接下來說明自己的觀點，并闡述自己觀點的原因。s lives，in this case，in this way，in trouble。thisthinkhavesuccessfuleasily．Incase在這樣的情況下；這句話意為：在這樣的情況下，他們認為孩子會更加輕松擁有成功的人生。betrouble