【正文】 國(guó)家主席習(xí)近平多次強(qiáng)調(diào)良好家風(fēng)家規(guī)的重要性。要點(diǎn)提示：三條家規(guī)尊老愛幼，禮貌待人誠(chéng)實(shí)守信，不斷學(xué)習(xí)按時(shí)作息，杜絕熬夜你對(duì)你家家規(guī)的看法......簡(jiǎn)單闡述你是如何受益的......寫作要求:，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使行文流暢、通順；；。Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of our Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of you Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow. First, you should respect the old and love the young. You are also supposed to be kind to other. Next, it’s a good habit to be honest and keep your words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.In my opinion, every family must keep rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture. What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，向山姆介紹你的家規(guī)并向他展示一個(gè)溫情的中國(guó)家庭。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be supposed to, be kind to, keep your words, what’s more, in one’s opinion, develop bad habits, be rude to, be strict with, make a difference to以及it is a good habit to be honest中it作形式主語(yǔ)?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。初寫短文。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。修改潤(rùn)色。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。湖北中考模擬）書面表達(dá)為響應(yīng)我市“創(chuàng)建國(guó)家衛(wèi)生城市”的號(hào)召，6月3日，5000多名市民以綠色出行的方式參與了“生態(tài)隨州——環(huán)白云湖健步走”活動(dòng)。主題Let’s build a green city together具體做法方式益處、徒步出行避免交通擁堵，減少空氣污染，不隨地吐痰讓城市變得干凈舒適美化城市，保護(hù)環(huán)境你的建議聯(lián)系自己的生活實(shí)際提出幾條具體的合理的建議。實(shí)際上就是要求書寫一份倡議書。動(dòng)筆前先要注意認(rèn)真閱讀材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容；文章必須包括要點(diǎn)中所給的信息，并補(bǔ)充兩條個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)。高分句型一：We can avoid the traffic jams and reduce the air pollution by riding bikes or walking. 通過騎自行車或步行，這樣就可以避免交通阻塞，減少空氣污染。高分句型二：In my daily life，I can pick up rubbish and put it into the dustbin wherever I go. 在我的日常生活中，無論我走到哪里，我會(huì)撿垃圾，把垃圾放進(jìn)垃圾箱里。14．（作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該怎樣做呢？請(qǐng)寫一篇有關(guān)交通安全的短文（100字左右）內(nèi)容提示：遵守交通規(guī)則，如走人行道/過斑馬線。勸父母不能酒后駕車。參考詞匯：sidewalk 人行道 zebracrossing 斑馬線___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】With more and more cars ing into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents。s business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .We can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc。s business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。此處e into, such as, for example, tell sb not to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。靖江外國(guó)語(yǔ)學(xué)校中考模擬）書面表達(dá)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇介紹我的朋友張陽(yáng)的短文。每周花七個(gè)多小時(shí)閱讀各種類型的書，因?yàn)椤?yōu)秀事跡上個(gè)月把零花錢捐給了希望工程未來夢(mèng)想1. 希望成為連接家鄉(xiāng)到上海路段的高鐵總工程師2. 每個(gè)人為保護(hù)環(huán)境都可以做一些改變。Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of highspeed railway connecting my hometown to Shanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw rubbish everywhere.【解析】【詳解】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。而He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。16．（回顧過去，我們一定想特別感謝某人，或者有些我們感到特別遺憾的事情，或者是一些令人難忘的時(shí)刻。需要包括的要點(diǎn)有：；，至少要寫兩條原因；，要有細(xì)節(jié)，說出時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物以及具體發(fā)生的事件。這里可以寫感謝自己的母親在初中鼓勵(lì)我參加演講比賽。17．（以 How to improve learning efficiency 為題，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。參考詞匯：效率 efficiency注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2. 語(yǔ)言通順，句子連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3. 詞數(shù)80左右，文章的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。要求以How to improve learning efficiency 為題，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。在寫作時(shí)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示，寫一