【正文】 的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。假如你是李華，請你根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)的要點提示，并結(jié)合你的家庭實際情況，給你的英國筆友Sam寫一封信，向他介紹一下你的家規(guī)，并向他展示一個溫情智慧的中國家庭。家規(guī)是中華民族傳統(tǒng)文化的重要組成部分。12．（開頭為自己沒有回信而感到抱歉，接下來介紹我在蘇州的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況，最后告知下次給他寄一些照片。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。m sorry……，.People here are……，My school starts at……，It’s famous for…….，There’s……，I will send you……等句式的應(yīng)用。t written to you till am really busy with the course and making new friends these here are kind and friendly .I am getting on well with them.My school starts at 8 finishes at 4: school,we can do some sports to classes in China are not live ones in texts are easy.Suzhou is a beautiful ’s famous for its pretty ’s lots of delicious local food enjoy my life in Suzhou because I can experience a lot here. I will send you some photos next time. Take care!YoursMax【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，給我的英國同學(xué)Simon給寫一封電子郵件，介紹我在蘇州的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況。t written to you till now. I will send you some photos next time. Take care!YoursMax【答案】Dear Simon,Thanks for your . I39。Dear Simon,Thanks for your . I39。，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使全文連貫、通順。m interested in your life in Suzhou. Would you please tell me the following information?Is everything OK with the school you study in?What are your English classes like?Is there anything interesting in Suzhou?Do you enjoy your life in Suzhou? Why or why not?Looking forward to hearing from you.Best wishesYours,Simon注意：。To: maxbritainFrom: simonbritainSubject: Life in SuzhouDear Max,How are you? I haven39。江蘇中考模擬）書面表達假如你是在蘇州學(xué)習(xí)的英國交流學(xué)生Max，你的英國同學(xué)Simon給你寫了一封電子郵件，想了解你在蘇州的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況。 （5）注意檢查：單詞拼寫、語法、動詞時態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。注意表達的順序。（2）列好提綱和要點及需要的重要短語或句型。要學(xué)以致用?！军c睛】書面表達要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達意思的能力。下午4點，我們離開青龍寺，下午6點回到家。中午我們在山腳下野餐。上午9點我們到了那里。我們早上7點乘公共汽車去了那里。本文提綱：上周末我和幾個同學(xué)去了青龍寺。要運用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。認(rèn)為閱讀材料，認(rèn)真審題，確定主題，認(rèn)真閱讀所給提示，所給提示就是本文的提綱要點，根據(jù)要點適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，列出提綱。要求：1 參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮2. 語句通順，意思連貫， 書寫工整3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實信息4. 字?jǐn)?shù)：不少于70字【答案】Last weekend I went to Qing Long Temple with some classmates. It was sunny on Sunday. We went there by bus at 7:00 . On the bus we talked and laughed, we were so happy. At 9 . we arrived there. We enjoyed flowers, took many pictures and flew kites in the morning. At noon we had piic at the foot of the hill. In the afternoon we climbed the mountain. At 4:00 . we left Qing Long Temple and at 6:00 . got home. We were so happy, though we were tired.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，話題是假如你是李華，上周末你和幾個同學(xué)一起去了青龍寺（Qing Long Temple）游玩，請根據(jù)以下提示內(nèi)容，寫一篇游記，介紹一下你愉快的周末。西安市鐵一中學(xué)中考模擬）假如你是李華，上周末你和幾個同學(xué)一起去了青龍寺（Qing Long Temple）游玩，請根據(jù)以下提示內(nèi)容，寫一篇游記，介紹一下你愉快的周末。短文中較好的句型和短語有：I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.、To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday、Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned、Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears等。其次短文里使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般過去時、第一人稱敘述，注意了謂語動詞過去式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動詞的過去式。文章分三段，第一段用一句話引出話題；第二段詳細(xì)描寫了事情的過程；最后一段寫了自己的感受?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求描述了自己做過的一件引以為豪的事情?；蚴褂闷硎咕?、非謂語動詞、感嘆句等特殊句式結(jié)構(gòu)。寫作時應(yīng)注意英語表達習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用較常見、易于把握的簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。審題可知，體裁是記敘文，記敘一件自己做過的事情，且是能讓自己感到自豪的，故文章應(yīng)使用一般過去時，人稱以第一人稱為主。 【答案】One thing I felt very proud ofI will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears. I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of為題，介紹自己曾經(jīng)做過的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。請以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of 為題用英語寫以寫一篇短文,描述你曾經(jīng)做過得引以自豪一件事情。河南中考模擬）“苔花如米小,也學(xué)牡丹開。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。而First of all,/ Second,/ Third,/ Fourth,等詞語的運用，既豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，更使短文很有條理，是本文的亮點。t litter. Second, the method of saving water and electricity. Third, use shopping bags instead of plastic bags and try to take public transport. Fourth, recycling waste products and so on.I hope our home will bee better and better.Thanks for listening!【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如dirtier and dirtier，the punishments from nature，It39。Hello, everyone!The earth is our home, so we should protect it well. Thanks for listening!【答案】How to Protect the EarthHello, everyone!The earth is our home, so we should protect it well.However it bees dirtier and dirtier: polluted rivers and lakes, growing deserts, the destruction of the forests and wildlife. All the bad things are the punishments from nature. It39。4） 回收利用廢品等。 2） 節(jié)約用水、用電的方法。2. 采取措施，保護環(huán)境。請你根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇演講稿。四川雅安中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達。If it’s convenient for you是由if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句。句子that I cannot go to the history museum with you on Saturday 。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達具有條理性。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________