【正文】 e has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve bee interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to bee one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.【解析】【分析】本文一篇話題作文。，過(guò)渡自然，語(yǔ)法正確，富有邏輯性。包括時(shí)間、人物、事情經(jīng)過(guò)和事后你的感想。吉林省實(shí)驗(yàn)中考模擬）B）初中生活馬上就要結(jié)束了,三年的初中生活一定給你留下了很多揮之不去的回憶。此處play an important role in, e true, give up, such as等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。【點(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為第一，三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I want to be……，studying hard is……，we need……，That39。s the key to success for all scientists,such as Madame Curie and Darwin.What I have list above is my answer to how to bee an inventor,and that is what I39。How to Bee an Inventor?With the development of science and technology, inventions have played an important role in the society and even changed our world. As a student in middle school, I want to be an inventor like Edison. But how can I let my dream e true? In my opinion, 【答案】How to Bee an Inventor?With the development of science and technology, inventions have played an important role in the society and even changed our world. As a student in middle school, I want to be an inventor like Edison. But how can I let my dream e true? In my opinion,First,studying hard is the basic is clear that only when we study hard to acquire the knowledge about the science and technology can we fulfill the need of ,interesting is the best can we imagine a child without passion of exploring will get progress in innovation Third,we need the spirit of creativity which provides us different thoughts to solve the 39。要求：1. 80詞左右，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。甘肅中考模擬）發(fā)明創(chuàng)造改變了世界。以及狀語(yǔ)從句等；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。句型：When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins；Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)敘述為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么；時(shí)態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述建議時(shí)，描寫(xiě)具體，條理清晰。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勎覀兠媾R的主要環(huán)境問(wèn)題是什么，為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期望。北京中考模擬）環(huán)境保護(hù)人人有責(zé)， 如果我們每一個(gè)人都能珍愛(ài)美麗地球 保護(hù)自然資源，相信我們的家園會(huì)越來(lái)越美好。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體。內(nèi)容上首先要介紹這個(gè)音樂(lè)機(jī)器人，其次表達(dá)為什么“我”要介紹這個(gè)機(jī)器人，也就是對(duì)它的喜愛(ài)。s songs ,and it will play their songs immediately. You can also ask it about weather or even your problems in study. Besides, it can remind you of important dates and so on.I am so amazed at my music robot because it makes my life more enjoyable and convenient. I really love it!【解析】【分析】這篇書(shū)面表達(dá)主要描述爸爸最近給“我”買(mǎi)的音樂(lè)機(jī)器人。我還有其他本領(lǐng)……參考詞匯:small, clever, ask it about weather, problems in study, remind you of important dates, convenient要求:1. 參考提示, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 語(yǔ)句涌順, 意思連貫, 書(shū)寫(xiě)工整；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)個(gè)人真實(shí)信息；Good morning, everyone! Here, I’d like to introduce the music robot my father bought online. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Good morning, everyone! Here, I39。下圖是關(guān)于這個(gè)音樂(lè)機(jī)器人的廣告, 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所提供的信息寫(xiě)一份發(fā)言稿。5．（亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致，在文中使用了時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，定語(yǔ)從句，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。遼寧中考模擬）（B）根據(jù)要求完成大作文,詞數(shù):80100 We Get from Sports 的短文,應(yīng)該包含以下要點(diǎn):1,學(xué)生參加體育運(yùn)動(dòng)的興趣不同,理由各異.,通過(guò)運(yùn)動(dòng)來(lái)放松自己.,希望運(yùn)動(dòng)能使自己更強(qiáng)壯.，希望運(yùn)動(dòng)使自己減肥和保持健康,苗條..:文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的名字和學(xué)校的名字,不計(jì)入詞數(shù).:keep slim （保持苗條）What We Get from SportsStudents in our school have one thing in mon an interest in 【答案】Students in our school have one thing in mon an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to bee stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫(xiě)作主要是談?wù)撟约簩?duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)的觀點(diǎn)和看法，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)要包括：。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意積累，牢記一些常用句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。+形容詞+word、should、in同時(shí)，文章還使用了一些常用的句式和短語(yǔ)，如：祈使句的使用、we【點(diǎn)睛】這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Travel Safety is very important to everyone._______________________________________________________________【答案】Safety is very important to everyone. Middle school students are like precious flowers – so their safety is being a focus for us all.First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the light is red. Secondly, we should eat healthy food. Don’t eat junk food. Eat more fruits and vegetables. Eat less meat and eggs. Finally, be careful not to hurt yourself while you are playing outside. It’s dangerous to go swimming by yourself, so don’t go swimming without permission. These are some important safety tips to remember.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文。內(nèi)容提示：：遵守交通規(guī)則，不闖紅綠燈等；：吃健康食物，不吃垃圾食品等；：進(jìn)行體育鍛煉時(shí)，不要弄傷自己，不私自下河游泳等。中學(xué)生年齡較小，學(xué)生安全更是人們關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)。3．（We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What39。變化使用多種句式讓文章更有亮點(diǎn)。同時(shí)要注意使用合適的連接詞和較高級(jí)的詞匯。變化使用多種句式讓文章更有亮點(diǎn)。在發(fā)表你的看法的時(shí)候，寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候要注意要點(diǎn)的全覆蓋，不能有遺漏或省略，同時(shí)要注意使用合適的連接詞和較高級(jí)的詞匯。記敘自己的一次旅行，審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，敘述事實(shí)的時(shí)候以時(shí)間為順序。A Trip to BeijingDuring the May Day Holiday，I______________________________________________________________【答案】During the May Day Holiday, I went to Beijing for a visit with my parents. We left Tianjin at 7:30 on the morning of May 1st, and we took the BeijingTianjin Intercity Railway to get there. It was a fast and fortable journey and it took us about half an hour to arrive there. To our joy, the weather was pleasant.