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你的情況熱愛閱讀,學(xué)校閱讀俱樂部的成員。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,文章以一般過去時(shí)態(tài)為主,謂語動(dòng)詞用了過去式,尤其是注意了不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞過去式的形式,如found, kept, got, were, spoke等。還需注意的是英語表達(dá)和漢語的習(xí)慣不同,不能逐詞去翻譯,應(yīng)從句子整體考慮,使用簡(jiǎn)單句的基本句型,如主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。廣東中考模擬)書面表達(dá)以下圖畫呈現(xiàn)了林濤和梅梅在公園里發(fā)生的事情。3. 詞數(shù):80個(gè)左右?(開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))To: PeterFrom: Li Hua Subject: A Role Model in My Daily LifeHi! Peter,How is it going? You’re asking my role model in my daily life. Well, Anything new at your school? Yours,Li Hua 【答案】How is it going ? You’re asking my role model in my daily life. Well, my role model in my daily life is my teacher, Mr. Green. He is very friendly to us and he has a good sense of humor. He is patient with all the students in class and tries to make his class interesting. We never feel bored. He teaches us how to think by ourselves and helps us solve the problems at school. He is like a father to us. Mr. Green sets a good example for me in my life. He is such a great teacher and I’m proud of being his student. I hope to be a teacher like him when I grow up. Anything new at your school? Yours,Li Hua【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,以“A Role Model in My Daily Life”為主題,給我的筆友Peter 寫信,介紹我日常生活中的榜樣。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。勸父母不能酒后駕車。文章時(shí)態(tài)要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí),人稱主要用第一人稱。13.(Our society is developing fast. People are getting busier too. As a result, people try to relax in their free time. We students have different ideas of spending our free time._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Our society is developing fast People are getting busier too. As a result, people try to relax in their free time. We students have different ideas of spending our free time.Some classmates like surfing on the Internet and watching TV. They think they can get plenty of information through the Internet and make them relaxed. Besides,it is easy for them to municate and play with classmates and even strangers without going outside. Others think they should get close to their family,nature,and read a lot. In fact,they are not only good ways to get along better with family members,but also open up their mind and increase their knowledge.I think we should do sports after school in order to keep healthy. What39。寫作亮點(diǎn):這篇文章講了自己最喜歡的玩具槍,描述玩具槍的時(shí)候有適當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)節(jié)補(bǔ)充,例如a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth(用黃布包著的玩具槍),這里用到了過去分詞作定語,作者還描述了玩具槍的功能(small plastic pills),順便還描述了自己小時(shí)候玩槍的經(jīng)歷,準(zhǔn)確使用了時(shí)態(tài)。人稱是第一和第二人稱英語作文一般是三段式第一段:開篇點(diǎn)題,交代寫作目的——保護(hù)眼睛的重要性,以及提建議第二段:文章主體部分——保護(hù)眼睛的措施:①不要長時(shí)間讀書看報(bào);②不要在太強(qiáng)或太弱的光線下看書;③堅(jiān)持做眼保健操。從小保護(hù)好眼睛很重要。短文有如下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn):首先短文內(nèi)容完整、充實(shí),敘述具體,詳細(xì),作者描寫了自己做飯給媽媽慶祝生日這件事,符合題目要求。作文是開放式的,題目中只給了主題,具體的寫作內(nèi)容,需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力去補(bǔ)充。第三部分:總結(jié)全文。請(qǐng)你給大家講一個(gè)最值得你回憶的故事。s……等句式的應(yīng)用。作為一名中學(xué)生.假如你夢(mèng)想當(dāng)一名發(fā)明家,應(yīng)該怎樣做才能實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想呢?請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的漫畫提示,以“How to Bee an Inventor”為題,寫一篇短文。提示詞語: pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示問題:● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?Now there are many environmental 【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins. I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better place to live.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀:該題目屬于說明文寫作,寫作時(shí)要把我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問題是什么,為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么,以及你的期望全部包括?!驹斀狻窟@是篇材料作文。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,句子通順,行文連貫。It’s同時(shí)適當(dāng)使用連接詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示,寫一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生安全的英語作文。注意所使用的語法規(guī)則的準(zhǔn)確性和合理性。s more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum.On early morning of the second day, we went to walk up the Great Wall. It was one of the most famous wonders in the world. Millions of tourists from all over the world visit it every year. After that, we took the underground to the city center, Wangfujing Street .At that moment, we all felt very hungry, so we decided to try Peking Roast Duck. In my opinion, Beijing food was very delicious.During this trip, I not only tried the delicious Beijing food, but also learned more about the Chinese traditional culture as well as the long history of China. Though I felt tired after the trip, it was a meaning