【正文】 注意：，并適當發(fā)揮。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。16．（浙江中考模擬）書面表達假如你是Amy，德國的交換生Sara下周即將來你家寄宿，昨天你收到她的來信，在信中，她詢問如下信息：1．你家情況；；3. 她要承擔的家務勞動；4. …現(xiàn)在，你就她提出的問題給她回信，也預祝她在你家過得開心！要求：1. 文章必須包括圖片中主要內容，可適當發(fā)揮；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關信息；3. 字數(shù)約110詞。What can you do for your school?As we all know we will leave school in June. So this week our class hold a class meeting. We discussed about what we can do for our school. All of us gave our own ideas.【答案】What can you do for your school?As we all know we will leave school in June. So this week our class hold a class meeting. We discussed about what we can do for our school. All of us gave our own ideas. Students in Group 1 thought that we could present our used books and school things to the students in Grade 7 and Grade 8. Especially, we can give them to the poor students. They need our help. Students in Group 2 thought that we could raise our pocket money. The books in library are old and little. So we can use the money to buy some new books for the school library so that more students can get more and latest information from books. Students in Group 3 thought we can plant some plants and flowers in the school. That may make our school more beautiful. Anyway, we have studied here for three years, we love our school. We hope our school will be better and better and we should study hard and one day our school will be proud of us.【解析】【分析】本片書面表達要求學生寫出一個班會會后的總結。try to do sth努力做某事。事故原因女孩騎車時闖紅燈，因此她對事故負有責任。開頭介紹了今年端午節(jié)慶祝時間，接下來介紹端午節(jié)的由來以及慶?；顒樱詈髿g迎大家一起體驗這個傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。用到的短語可以有：speak in public 在公共場合說話，worried about 擔心，encouraged me to 鼓勵我去做…，take part in the activity 參加活動，was shocked by 被…震驚，let her down讓她失望，encouragement and pany 鼓勵和陪伴，made such great progress取得如此大的進步。短文中較好的句式有More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the 。文章內容中敘述的情況不一，時態(tài)不能統(tǒng)一，根據表達的需要使用正確的時態(tài)，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。廣東中考模擬）書面表達假如你是李明，你的英國筆友Jack來信詢問你的家鄉(xiāng)是否有霧霾天氣，情況如何。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據題目要求描述了自己做過的一件引以為豪的事情。 【答案】One thing I felt very proud ofI will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears. I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以One thing I felt very proud of為題，介紹自己曾經做過的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。修改潤色。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。請以Helping Others Is Helping Ourselves 為題寫一篇短文。目的是宣傳和弘揚中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化。最后向Bill提出問題，結束全文。陜西中考模擬） 假如你是李華, 你的美國筆友Bill給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件, 想了解你的夢想職業(yè)。動筆前應根據材料內容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)和關鍵單詞等問題。：例文采用三段式：用第一人稱來敘述故事內容：時態(tài)采用一般過去式為主，敘述過去的經歷，敘述完整清晰。上海市澧溪中學初三期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Yesterday once more”.（以“昨日重現(xiàn)”為題寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標點符號不占格。初寫短文。根據要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。天津中考模擬）書面表達86. 如今，中學生的學習時間長，壓力大。這里要分為三個小節(jié)：小節(jié)1：過去我的學習和生活是什么樣的——有肯多課余時間做自己喜歡的事情。 提示：less free time，much homework，more pressure，get into a good high schoolmore exercise，lose weight join the English Comer，improve English a lotcolorful and meaningful，learn more knowledge注意：1）詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結尾已經寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；2）回復須包括所有藥店，可適當發(fā)揮，使全文連貫、通順；3）文中不得提及真實的人名、校名等相關信息。在學習中注意總結牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。2．廣東實驗中學中考模擬）書面表達農歷五月初五，我們學校將舉行“弘揚中華傳統(tǒng)文化——端午節(jié)The Dragon Boat Festival”一系列主題活動，請你邀請外國友人Amy來校參加。江蘇中考模擬）書面表達?！币罂芍疚挠矛F(xiàn)在完成時、一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱是第一人稱。用一般現(xiàn)在時。（2）開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。構思提綱。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。）The following is for reference only（以下表達僅供參考）used to be.../make sb do sth/in my heart/have a deep influence/remind sb of sth【答案】例文Yesterday once moreIt goes without saying that our life is full of a variety of memories. Among all the persons I have met, the most unforgettable person is my father.I used to be such a shy and silent girl that I couldn’t say any words in public. Whenever teachers asked me to answer questions, my heart would beat again and again and say nothing but to look down. Once, I tried talking with my father frightenedly. He listened to me all the time with bright smile and encouraged me to be brave. He told me, “ you don’t have to be perfect but when you do your best, you make your parent proud.” With the support of my father, I gained so much encouragement that I determined to be a more confident person. In one word, Father’s love like water, deep and soft, which makes great differences in my life.【解析】【詳解】：該題目屬于記敘文寫作。請根據下面的內容提示，寫一篇日記。只要平時積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分數(shù)?！驹斀狻渴紫然卮鹇殬I(yè)是教師。內容提示：1. 楊時去拜見老師程頤一老師在睡覺一楊時在雪地等一老師醒來發(fā)現(xiàn)楊時在門口2. 通過介紹這個故事, 發(fā)表你的看法或者觀點。8．（增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性?！蔽覀兇蠖鄶?shù)人雖然微不足道,但也能有所作為。為提升作文檔次，穿插使用并列句或復合句，如賓語從句、狀語從句等。語言得體，語法規(guī)范，句式結構以簡單句為主，也使用了時間狀語從句、并列句、非謂語動詞等復雜句式結構。題目中列出了三個要點，我們應根據這些要點提示，來組織語言，充實內容。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，作者根據表達需要使用了一般過去時、一般將來時態(tài)和一般將來時態(tài)，動詞形式變化準確，語法規(guī)范。需要包括的要點有：；，至少要寫兩條原因；，要有細節(jié)，說出時間、地點、人物以及具體發(fā)生的事件。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。時間星期五早上七點地點中山路和幸福大街交口事故過程。重點句型：（1）While the light were changing to red, a girl who was riding a bike suddenly appeared the street. 當紅燈變紅的時候，一個騎自行車的女孩突然出現(xiàn)在街上。第一小組把我們用過的書本和學習用品贈送給七年級、八年級的弟弟妹妹， 尤其是家庭貧困的同學。在語言上要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在能力范圍之內，選擇句式時要賦予變化，這樣才可以更好的駕馭?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。My name is Susan. There are many rules in my 【答案】My name is Susan. There are many rules in my family. My parents want me to clean the room every day. I am not allowed to play puter games in my free time. I can’t go out on school nights. I must go to bed by 10 pm. I think my parents are too strict with me. Sometimes