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18.(河南中考模擬)書面表達(dá)每個人都有自己心愛的物品,相信你也擁有一個自己心愛的物品吧!請以“A(n) _____ I have”為題,描述一個或一件你心愛的物品,并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿模约八嬖诘囊饬x。要求是給七年級新生的學(xué)習(xí)生活提幾點建議,所以人稱主要用第二人稱,時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時。had better not do ,也可用到should等情態(tài)動詞或祈使句?,F(xiàn)在請你根據(jù)所給提示內(nèi)容,用英語寫一篇參賽短文?!军c睛】本文思路清晰,時態(tài)運用要正確,敘述清楚條里,層次分明,所用句式句型比較高級,像If we don’t let off fireworks, cleaners don’t need to clean up so much rubbish everywhere./ They think Chinese people have been used to letting off fireworks since hundreds years ago. / I think we should follow the rule because good environment is more important than anything else.。如果我們不放煙花,清潔工就不需要到處清理那么多垃圾。要運用合適的連接詞或過渡詞,使文章具有連貫性。如,火災(zāi)……3.……(發(fā)揮至少一點)1.千百年來已經(jīng)習(xí)慣燃放煙花2.沒有煙花,過春節(jié)更無趣3.……你的觀點……(自擬至少兩個觀點)Dear Major,We have had a discussion about whether to let off fireworks at Spring Festival. All the students in our class give the ideas. 【答案】Most of the students don’t agree to let off fireworks at Spring Festival. They think fireworks produce so much smoke that it can cause serious air pollution. What’s more, people like letting them off at midnight, it is always so noisy outside that many people can’t sleep well. Also, it may cause big fire if people aren’t careful enough. Some children like playing with fireworks, so it’s dangerous for their eyes. If we don’t let off fireworks, cleaners don’t need to clean up so much rubbish everywhere.On the other hand, some students don’t agree. They think Chinese people have been used to letting off fireworks since hundreds years ago. Moreover, Chinese traditional culture is missing. We should protect it. People will feel less interested than before without fireworks.I think we should follow the rule because good environment is more important than anything else. Protecting environment is protecting ourselves.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。有了提綱,我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。 He is _________________________________________________【答案】Li Lei is a very good student. He is good at studying and ready to help others so he gets on well with his classmates.Last week a new student called Wang Gang came to his class and Mr. Zhang made him sit next to Li Lei. But Wang Gang is weak in learning and loves talking in class. This made teachers angry Some of the students wouldn’t like to make friends with him. But Li Lei helps him study and stops him talking nonsense in class. After some time, they made great progress together.If I share a desk with this slow student like Wang Gang, I will help him patiently and learn from each other.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文,介紹李磊如何幫助差生王剛以及如果你的身邊有和王剛一樣的差生,你會如何做。還要注意在行文中使用一些常見的短語,會給習(xí)作增色。對他人微笑使人與人更親近,帶來友誼。在寫作時,要注意理順要點,防止漏寫;注意緊扣主題,連句成篇,要層次清楚,要點分明,中心突出。要求:—120 詞,開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。:要點是否齊全,適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。一杯茶可以使人放松和精力充沛。本文提綱:茶是中國文化的重要組成部分。開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。請你根據(jù)表格信息寫一篇題為Chinese Tea的英語短文,向英國交流生介紹中國的茶文化。s more,others use electronic products,such as mobile phones,microearphones to pass on the answers. There are many reasons for students to cheat in the exam.Some students are too lazy to work hard.They want to get good grades in order to enter a good high school or a good university.Some students have too much pressure from their parents and teachers.They only want to make them happy.In my opinion,it39。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。構(gòu)思提綱。要求:1. 思路清晰,觀點明確,語法正確,有說服力;2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱;3. 80詞左右?!靖叻志湫鸵弧縎he takes good care of her mother who has a serious 。遼寧初三) 生活中總有些不經(jīng)意的事讓你感動,總有些平凡的人讓你難以忘記。【詳解】根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知,這是一篇書信類文章。第一段點出文章主題you asked me how I planned my summer vacation, now, let me tell you all about it。短文中需要作者自己補(bǔ)充的內(nèi)容完成得也不錯這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要,意思也很連貫。s worse, they have changed my password(密碼) so that I can’t use it. There has been a cold war between us for over a week. What should I do?Yours,Wang Ping要求:1.語言表達(dá)要準(zhǔn)確,語意要通順、連貫;2.詞數(shù)80100左右,電子郵件的格式、開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,但不計入總詞數(shù)。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無誤。3. 詞數(shù)不少于60。請你根據(jù)下列提示用英語寫一封倡議書。山東中考模擬)假如你是學(xué)生會主席, 你校學(xué)生會打算以“保護(hù)環(huán)境”為主題搞 一次社會實踐。要求:1詞數(shù):80100;,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。中央民族大學(xué)附屬中學(xué)昆明五華實驗學(xué)校中考模擬)A good book is important to me要求:1. 緊扣主題,意思連貫,語言通順,書寫規(guī)范。題目并沒有給過多的提示信息,所以需要學(xué)生自己思索行文內(nèi)容。請你根據(jù)電子郵件內(nèi)容給她回復(fù)一封電子郵件,幫助她解答困惑。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語意連貫。2. 回信中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名, 否則將以零分計。安徽中考模擬)假如你是李華,你的美國朋友Jack熱愛中國的唐詩宋詞。第二部分:文章主體部分——具體介紹《游子吟》(Song of the parting son)這首詩。人物身份為同學(xué)白楊,介紹分四個要點:她家境貧寒;她精心照顧患病母親;她學(xué)習(xí)刻苦,成績優(yōu)異;她關(guān)心同學(xué),樂于助人;她經(jīng)常利用空閑時間做志愿者工作。河南中考模擬)書面表達(dá)生命就像是一種回聲,你送出什么它就送回什么,你播種什么就收獲什么,你給予什么就得到什么?!军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起:認(rèn)真審題。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。s very mon for students to cheat in the exams.This year,our country has passed a law that fights against this kind of lawbroken behavior.It39。 answers抄襲他人的答案”,“get good grades取得好成績”。影響……(自擬兩點)。短文必須包含提示內(nèi)容,條理清楚,字?jǐn)?shù)90詞左右。人們經(jīng)常用茶來招待朋友。注意書寫的規(guī)范:大小寫、標(biāo)點符號等的正確運用。10.(假如你是李華,你校正舉辦英語讀書節(jié)活動,你在參與活動的過程中遇到一些困難。11.(文中使用了大量短語,例如in our life,may be,something unpleasant,for example,fail in,laugh at,why not,cheer up,help sb. to do,get closer to,each other等。很多人不愿意和他做朋友。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞,使句子銜接自然。注意: 1. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱;3. 表達(dá),語句通順,意思連貫,書寫規(guī)范;4. 詞數(shù)不少于90。人稱主要為第三人稱和第一人稱。更重要的是,人們喜歡在午夜放假,外面總是那么吵,很多人睡不好覺。如果沒有煙花,人們會比以前更不感興趣。注意檢查:單詞拼寫、語法、動詞時態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。d better not talk or laugh loudly in public.Let’s action now. I believe, the better we behave, the more civilized our city will be.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇提綱作文,要求是為配合我市開展“創(chuàng)建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活動,學(xué)校舉辦以“How to Behave Well”為主題的英語征文比賽。16.(最后必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫,有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。寫作亮點:這篇文章講了自己最喜歡的玩具槍,描述玩具槍的時候有適當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)節(jié)補(bǔ)充,例如a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth(用黃布包著的玩具槍),這里用到了過去分詞作定語,作者還描述了玩具槍的功能(small plastic pills),順便還描述了自己小時候玩槍的經(jīng)歷,準(zhǔn)確使用了時態(tài)。假如你是Mike,請你用英語寫一封郵件,給你校英文報投稿寫一篇短文,詞數(shù)80左右,談?wù)勀銓﹂_設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的看法。A(n) _________ I have_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________