【正文】 ports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to bee stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作主要是談論自己對運動的觀點和看法，應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，寫作要點要包括：。（多數(shù)學生的觀點、男生的觀點、女生的觀點）。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)，主謂一致，在文中使用了時間狀語從句，定語從句，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。5．（陜西中考模擬） 下周一下午輪到你在英語課上做課堂報告, 你打算把你爸爸最近網(wǎng)購的音樂機器人（music robot）介紹給同學們。下圖是關(guān)于這個音樂機器人的廣告, 請你根據(jù)所提供的信息寫一份發(fā)言稿。我是能聽會說的小音樂機器人,只要你對我說歌曲的名字, 我就能唱給你聽。我還有其他本領(lǐng)……參考詞匯:small, clever, ask it about weather, problems in study, remind you of important dates, convenient要求:1. 參考提示, 可適當發(fā)揮；2. 語句涌順, 意思連貫, 書寫工整；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)個人真實信息；Good morning, everyone! Here, I’d like to introduce the music robot my father bought online. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Good morning, everyone! Here, I39。d like to introduce the music robot my father bought online. It is small, so you can even carry it in your backpack. After you connect it to the Internet and speak to it, it can provide different kinds of services. For example, you just say, Ding Dong, I want to listen to SHE39。s songs ,and it will play their songs immediately. You can also ask it about weather or even your problems in study. Besides, it can remind you of important dates and so on.I am so amazed at my music robot because it makes my life more enjoyable and convenient. I really love it!【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達主要描述爸爸最近給“我”買的音樂機器人?！驹斀狻窟@是篇材料作文。內(nèi)容上首先要介紹這個音樂機器人，其次表達為什么“我”要介紹這個機器人，也就是對它的喜愛。在寫作時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，這樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體。6．（北京中考模擬）環(huán)境保護人人有責， 如果我們每一個人都能珍愛美麗地球 保護自然資源，相信我們的家園會越來越美好。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“Going Green”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談談我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問題是什么，為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期望。提示詞語： pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示問題：● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?Now there are many environmental 【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins. I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better place to live.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于說明文寫作，寫作時要把我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問題是什么，為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。例文點評：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人稱來敘述為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么；時態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時，描述建議時，描寫具體，條理清晰。高分亮點：短語：save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。句型：When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins；Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference?！军c睛】首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達，例如save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。以及狀語從句等；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。7．（甘肅中考模擬）發(fā)明創(chuàng)造改變了世界。作為一名中學生．假如你夢想當一名發(fā)明家，應該怎樣做才能實現(xiàn)夢想呢?請根據(jù)下面的漫畫提示，以“How to Bee an Inventor”為題，寫一篇短文。要求：1. 80詞左右，可適當發(fā)揮。（文章標題和開頭已給出不計人總詞數(shù)） 2．文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱等相關(guān)信息。How to Bee an Inventor?With the development of science and technology, inventions have played an important role in the society and even changed our world. As a student in middle school, I want to be an inventor like Edison. But how can I let my dream e true? In my opinion, 【答案】How to Bee an Inventor?With the development of science and technology, inventions have played an important role in the society and even changed our world. As a student in middle school, I want to be an inventor like Edison. But how can I let my dream e true? In my opinion,First,studying hard is the basic is clear that only when we study hard to acquire the knowledge about the science and technology can we fulfill the need of ,interesting is the best can we imagine a child without passion of exploring will get progress in innovation Third,we need the spirit of creativity which provides us different thoughts to solve the 39。s more important,Never give our 39。s the key to success for all scientists,such as Madame Curie and Darwin.What I have list above is my answer to how to bee an inventor,and that is what I39。ll persist doing in the future with my whole passion.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題作文，以“How to Bee an Inventor”為題，寫一篇短文?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：I want to be……，studying hard is……，we need……，That39。s……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。【點睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我想要成為一個發(fā)明家；接下來介紹為了成為一個發(fā)明家，應該如何做；最后指出為了成為一個發(fā)明家，我要堅持做下去。此處play an important role in, e true, give up, such as等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。8．（吉林省實驗中考模擬）B）初中生活馬上就要結(jié)束了,三年的初中生活一定給你留下了很多揮之不去的回憶。請你給大家講一個最值得你回憶的故事。包括時間、人物、事情經(jīng)過和事后你的感想。要求：。，過渡自然，語法正確，富有邏輯性。3. 注意時態(tài)的正確使用，80100詞。提示詞語: three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________