【正文】 初三英語英語書面表達匯編及其解題技巧及練習(xí)題(含答案)一、中考英語書面表達匯編1．（浙江中考模擬）你養(yǎng)我長大，我陪你變老。父母親一直在為我們的成長默默付出，成長要學(xué)會愛，感受愛。假設(shè)今天是你爸爸的生日，是你向爸爸表達感激的好機會。請根據(jù)以下要點，寫一篇英語短文。要點：1）給我生命，一直照顧我成長；教我學(xué)會……2）努力工作，為我提供良好的生活和教育條件；3）今天，我要為您……（自主發(fā)揮，至少兩點）要求：1）參考所給內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2）語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和地名等信息。4）詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。（開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。）You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in the process of my growth.【答案】You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in the process of my growth. You give me life and take care of me all the time, when I have problems with my study and life, you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me. In order to let me in a pleasant life and receive a good education, you always work hard from morning to evening every day.You are ready to help people in need. You teach me to be a kind person. In the past, I never said I love you to you. But today is your birthday, I want to say it to you loudly. I will study harder to get better results. I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如in your life，take care of, all the time，have problems with，in order to，work hard，from morning to evening，be ready to，in need，in the past，get better results等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)In the past, I never said I love you to you. But today is your birthday, I want to say it to you give me life and take care of me all the time, when I have problems with my study and life, you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me./ I hope you will be happy and healthy ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。2．（天津中考模擬）假如你是天津的一名中學(xué)生李明，剛剛結(jié)東五一小長假的旅游回到學(xué)校。請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，以 “A Trip to Beijing”為題，寫一篇短文，向你的同學(xué)們講述一下你的北京之旅。（1）5月1日天氣晴朗，我和家人開始了兩天的旅程。（2）早上7：30我們乘京津城際鐵路出發(fā)，車程大約半小時。（3）上午我們參觀了故宮博物院，學(xué)到了許多歷史知識，并為朋友們購買了禮物。（4）第二天清晨，我們登上了長城，雄偉的長城是世界著名奇觀之一；下午去位于市中心的王府井大街品嘗北京烤鴨。（5）我的旅游感受……參考詞匯:京津城際鐵路 BeijingTianjin Intercity Railway王府井大街 Wangfujing Street故宮 the Palace Museum北京烤鴨 Peking Roast Duck要求：（1）詞數(shù):80～100個。（2）短文的題目和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。A Trip to BeijingDuring the May Day Holiday，I______________________________________________________________【答案】During the May Day Holiday, I went to Beijing for a visit with my parents. We left Tianjin at 7:30 on the morning of May 1st, and we took the BeijingTianjin Intercity Railway to get there. It was a fast and fortable journey and it took us about half an hour to arrive there. To our joy, the weather was pleasant. And we began our twodaytrip in Beijing.First of all, we went to see the Palace Museum as soon as we got to Beijing. We were very excited when we saw the Palace Museum and took a lot of photos there. We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What39。s more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum.On early morning of the second day, we went to walk up the Great Wall. It was one of the most famous wonders in the world. Millions of tourists from all over the world visit it every year. After that, we took the underground to the city center, Wangfujing Street .At that moment, we all felt very hungry, so we decided to try Peking Roast Duck. In my opinion, Beijing food was very delicious.During this trip, I not only tried the delicious Beijing food, but also learned more about the Chinese traditional culture as well as the long history of China. Though I felt tired after the trip, it was a meaningful experience and I will never forget it.【解析】【詳解】以 “A Trip to Beijing”為題，寫一篇短文，向你的同學(xué)們講述一下你的北京之旅。記敘自己的一次旅行，審題時注意本文使用一般過去時，敘述事實的時候以時間為順序。用合適的連詞把各句連接成一個有機的整體，同時要用相對高級的詞匯提升文章的層次和文采。在發(fā)表你的看法的時候，寫作的時候要注意要點的全覆蓋，不能有遺漏或省略，同時要注意使用合適的連接詞和較高級的詞匯。注意所使用的語法規(guī)則的準(zhǔn)確性和合理性。變化使用多種句式讓文章更有亮點?！军c睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。同時要注意使用合適的連接詞和較高級的詞匯。注意所使用的語法規(guī)則的準(zhǔn)確性和合理性。變化使用多種句式讓文章更有亮點。We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What39。s more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum..等這些句子運用也讓文章增色不少。3．（海南?？趯嶒炛袑W(xué)中考模擬）書面表達安全對于每個人都很重要。中學(xué)生年齡較小，學(xué)生安全更是人們關(guān)注的焦點。請根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生安全的英語作文。內(nèi)容提示：：遵守交通規(guī)則，不闖紅綠燈等；：吃健康食物，不吃垃圾食品等；：進行體育鍛煉時，不要弄傷自己，不私自下河游泳等。提示詞語：study hard, read, healthy food, exercise, help, chores, at home,Travel Safety is very important to everyone._______________________________________________________________【答案】Safety is very important to everyone. Middle school students are like precious flowers – so their safety is being a focus for us all.First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the light is red. Secondly, we should eat healthy food. Don’t eat junk food. Eat more fruits and vegetables. Eat less meat and eggs. Finally, be careful not to hurt yourself while you are playing outside. It’s dangerous to go swimming by yourself, so don’t go swimming without permission. These are some important safety tips to remember.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時，主語是第一人稱。寫作時注意人稱、時態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問題。同時適當(dāng)使用連接詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。【點睛】這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點內(nèi)容，表達準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上很好地使用了簡單句和復(fù)合句，文章脈絡(luò)清晰，自然流暢。同時，文章還使用了一些常用的句式和短語，如：祈使句的使用、wemust、weshould、inaword、It’s+形容詞+to動詞不定式結(jié)構(gòu)以及序數(shù)詞的使用等，這為文章增色不少。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意積累，牢記一些常用句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。4．（遼寧中考模擬）（B）根據(jù)要求完成大作文,詞數(shù):80100 We Get from Sports 的短文,應(yīng)該包含以下要點:1,學(xué)生參加體育運動的興趣不同,理由各異.,通過運動來放松自己.,希望運動能使自己更強壯.，希望運動使自己減肥和保持健康,苗條..:文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的名字和學(xué)校的名字,不計入詞數(shù).:keep slim （保持苗條）What We Get from SportsStudents in our school have one thing in mon an interest in 【答案】Students in our school have one thing in mon an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in s