【正文】 初三英語(yǔ)英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)匯編及其解題技巧及練習(xí)題(含答案)一、中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)匯編1．（浙江中考模擬）你養(yǎng)我長(zhǎng)大，我陪你變老。父母親一直在為我們的成長(zhǎng)默默付出，成長(zhǎng)要學(xué)會(huì)愛(ài)，感受愛(ài)。假設(shè)今天是你爸爸的生日，是你向爸爸表達(dá)感激的好機(jī)會(huì)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。要點(diǎn)：1）給我生命，一直照顧我成長(zhǎng)；教我學(xué)會(huì)……2）努力工作，為我提供良好的生活和教育條件；3）今天，我要為您……（自主發(fā)揮，至少兩點(diǎn)）要求：1）參考所給內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2）語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整；3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和地名等信息。4）詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。（開(kāi)頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。）You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in the process of my growth.【答案】You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in the process of my growth. You give me life and take care of me all the time, when I have problems with my study and life, you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me. In order to let me in a pleasant life and receive a good education, you always work hard from morning to evening every day.You are ready to help people in need. You teach me to be a kind person. In the past, I never said I love you to you. But today is your birthday, I want to say it to you loudly. I will study harder to get better results. I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如in your life，take care of, all the time，have problems with，in order to，work hard，from morning to evening，be ready to，in need，in the past，get better results等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)In the past, I never said I love you to you. But today is your birthday, I want to say it to you give me life and take care of me all the time, when I have problems with my study and life, you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me./ I hope you will be happy and healthy ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。2．（天津中考模擬）假如你是天津的一名中學(xué)生李明，剛剛結(jié)東五一小長(zhǎng)假的旅游回到學(xué)校。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，以 “A Trip to Beijing”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文，向你的同學(xué)們講述一下你的北京之旅。（1）5月1日天氣晴朗，我和家人開(kāi)始了兩天的旅程。（2）早上7：30我們乘京津城際鐵路出發(fā)，車(chē)程大約半小時(shí)。（3）上午我們參觀了故宮博物院，學(xué)到了許多歷史知識(shí)，并為朋友們購(gòu)買(mǎi)了禮物。（4）第二天清晨，我們登上了長(zhǎng)城，雄偉的長(zhǎng)城是世界著名奇觀之一；下午去位于市中心的王府井大街品嘗北京烤鴨。（5）我的旅游感受……參考詞匯:京津城際鐵路 BeijingTianjin Intercity Railway王府井大街 Wangfujing Street故宮 the Palace Museum北京烤鴨 Peking Roast Duck要求：（1）詞數(shù):80～100個(gè)。（2）短文的題目和開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。A Trip to BeijingDuring the May Day Holiday，I______________________________________________________________【答案】During the May Day Holiday, I went to Beijing for a visit with my parents. We left Tianjin at 7:30 on the morning of May 1st, and we took the BeijingTianjin Intercity Railway to get there. It was a fast and fortable journey and it took us about half an hour to arrive there. To our joy, the weather was pleasant. And we began our twodaytrip in Beijing.First of all, we went to see the Palace Museum as soon as we got to Beijing. We were very excited when we saw the Palace Museum and took a lot of photos there. We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What39。s more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum.On early morning of the second day, we went to walk up the Great Wall. It was one of the most famous wonders in the world. Millions of tourists from all over the world visit it every year. After that, we took the underground to the city center, Wangfujing Street .At that moment, we all felt very hungry, so we decided to try Peking Roast Duck. In my opinion, Beijing food was very delicious.During this trip, I not only tried the delicious Beijing food, but also learned more about the Chinese traditional culture as well as the long history of China. Though I felt tired after the trip, it was a meaningful experience and I will never forget it.【解析】【詳解】以 “A Trip to Beijing”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文，向你的同學(xué)們講述一下你的北京之旅。記敘自己的一次旅行，審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，敘述事實(shí)的時(shí)候以時(shí)間為順序。用合適的連詞把各句連接成一個(gè)有機(jī)的整體，同時(shí)要用相對(duì)高級(jí)的詞匯提升文章的層次和文采。在發(fā)表你的看法的時(shí)候，寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候要注意要點(diǎn)的全覆蓋，不能有遺漏或省略，同時(shí)要注意使用合適的連接詞和較高級(jí)的詞匯。注意所使用的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的準(zhǔn)確性和合理性。變化使用多種句式讓文章更有亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。同時(shí)要注意使用合適的連接詞和較高級(jí)的詞匯。注意所使用的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的準(zhǔn)確性和合理性。變化使用多種句式讓文章更有亮點(diǎn)。We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What39。s more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum..等這些句子運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。3．（海南?？趯?shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)安全對(duì)于每個(gè)人都很重要。中學(xué)生年齡較小，學(xué)生安全更是人們關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生安全的英語(yǔ)作文。內(nèi)容提示：：遵守交通規(guī)則，不闖紅綠燈等；：吃健康食物，不吃垃圾食品等；：進(jìn)行體育鍛煉時(shí)，不要弄傷自己，不私自下河游泳等。提示詞語(yǔ)：study hard, read, healthy food, exercise, help, chores, at home,Travel Safety is very important to everyone._______________________________________________________________【答案】Safety is very important to everyone. Middle school students are like precious flowers – so their safety is being a focus for us all.First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the light is red. Secondly, we should eat healthy food. Don’t eat junk food. Eat more fruits and vegetables. Eat less meat and eggs. Finally, be careful not to hurt yourself while you are playing outside. It’s dangerous to go swimming by yourself, so don’t go swimming without permission. These are some important safety tips to remember.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱(chēng)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。同時(shí)適當(dāng)使用連接詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c(diǎn)睛】這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上很好地使用了簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句，文章脈絡(luò)清晰，自然流暢。同時(shí)，文章還使用了一些常用的句式和短語(yǔ)，如：祈使句的使用、wemust、weshould、inaword、It’s+形容詞+to動(dòng)詞不定式結(jié)構(gòu)以及序數(shù)詞的使用等，這為文章增色不少。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意積累，牢記一些常用句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。4．（遼寧中考模擬）（B）根據(jù)要求完成大作文,詞數(shù):80100 We Get from Sports 的短文,應(yīng)該包含以下要點(diǎn):1,學(xué)生參加體育運(yùn)動(dòng)的興趣不同,理由各異.,通過(guò)運(yùn)動(dòng)來(lái)放松自己.,希望運(yùn)動(dòng)能使自己更強(qiáng)壯.，希望運(yùn)動(dòng)使自己減肥和保持健康,苗條..:文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的名字和學(xué)校的名字,不計(jì)入詞數(shù).:keep slim （保持苗條）What We Get from SportsStudents in our school have one thing in mon an interest in 【答案】Students in our school have one thing in mon an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in s