【正文】 ate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories.For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作是以書信的方式向筆友介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)，要用一般現(xiàn)在時來寫。Dear Jessica, I39。內(nèi)容須包含以下所有要點：1. 中秋節(jié)的時間；2. 中秋節(jié)的傳統(tǒng)習俗及慶祝方式：全家人一起吃飯, 賞月, 吃月餅等；3, 我最期待的活動。7．李華的英國筆友Jessica來信說, 她想了解中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)。短文以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，也使用了一些復合句和較高級的句型，如I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter ；From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals” February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter ；And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn 。如果分段敘述效果則會更好，那樣會使文章的層次更加清晰。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點。穿插一些高級詞匯和復雜句式，提升文章檔次和水平，使表達更加流暢。注意英語句子的表達和漢語習慣是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，使用正確的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以及適當?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型，保證句子的準確性和語言的地道。寫作時，應(yīng)根據(jù)題目的這些要求，組織語言，串聯(lián)成一篇短文。Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grade 3 in China. I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. I hope to have a chance to visit London Canal Museum. From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals”February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp. And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal. What’s more, I hope to learn more about London Canal Museum and even more about the UK.I’m looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【解析】這篇作文要求我們以中學生李華的身份，給Liz Payne寫一個留言。作文要求：；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學校真實的名稱和學生的真實姓名；,詞數(shù)80個左右。6．假設(shè)你是來自中國的中學生李華,打算參加當?shù)亟M織的國外冬令營,看完了這個網(wǎng)頁后,你打算給Liz Payne留言,表達你在冬令營期間想去London Canal Museum參觀的愿望。s good for us to do some sports.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮．寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進行敘述．語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣．適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．【點睛】這篇短文用到了一些好的句型：They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。（4）詞數(shù):不少于80。（2）開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。 opinionsGet ready for high school. Do some housework…Kid39。根據(jù)下表提示,寫一篇英語短文,描述他們的不同看法,同時發(fā)表你自己對暑假安排的觀點。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。【點睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如like reading，more than，all kinds of，spend time doing，enjoy doing，the number of，twice a year，be the chief engineer of等。如：…….（舉1例）要求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫； 2）必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當發(fā)揮； 3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。每年統(tǒng)計兩次鳥兒的數(shù)量，以研究鳥兒在數(shù)量方面的變化?；厩闆r張陽，陽光中學九年級二班學生興趣愛好1. 喜歡閱讀。常用的重點句型和短語有：sb. spend some time doing sth.，in order to do sth.，try to do sth.，the importance of…等。（I think ???；try one39。根據(jù)題干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時寫作，人稱用第三人稱復數(shù)和第一人稱。（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮?，F(xiàn) 狀大約70%學生眼睛近視主要原因1. 睡眠不