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ooking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】:這是一篇提綱類書面表達,只給了一些要點提示,但都不很明確。使用一些好的句型和短語,注意正確的時態(tài)和語態(tài)以及謂語動詞的形式,還需要注意英語表達和漢語習慣的不同,讓整篇短文表達流暢。動筆前要認真審題,深入挖掘題材內(nèi)涵,不可遺漏要點,并適當發(fā)揮。Public bicycles are being more and more popular in our daily life. 【答案】Public bicycles are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it’s easy for us to get around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What’s more, using public bicycles costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people can’t return public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it’s a way of living a green life.【解析】這是一篇材料作文,要求給英文報社寫一篇投稿,介紹對共享單車看法?!澳愕挠^點”一欄用23句話展開合理想象,做適當發(fā)揮。社會現(xiàn)狀自從出現(xiàn),飽受贊譽。文中 not only …but also…,help a lot,share happiness and sadness,do well in,give up, besides,so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj.,therefore, be proud of等詞(組)恰當使用,使上下文意連接緊密;文章的最后I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 表達了自己愿望與想法,使文章增色不少,值得學習。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用,使文意連接緊密,還要注意使用豐富的語句,注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關系,最后最好要表達出自己的感想和看法。How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself. 【答案】How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn’t do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn’t have a good sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry.Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to bee better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!【解析】試題分析:本篇書面表達以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”為題,結合本題所給的寫作信息,闡述自己難忘的中學生活。語言連貫、通順。短文的開頭已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。請以My Unforgettable Middle School Life為題,根據(jù)下面的思維導圖,寫一篇短文介紹自己難忘的校園生活并描述對未來的期盼。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams