【正文】 ，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of our Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of you Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow. First, you should respect the old and love the young. You are also supposed to be kind to other. Next, it’s a good habit to be honest and keep your words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.In my opinion, every family must keep rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture. What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，向山姆介紹你的家規(guī)并向他展示一個(gè)溫情的中國(guó)家庭。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be supposed to, be kind to, keep your words, what’s more, in one’s opinion, develop bad habits, be rude to, be strict with, make a difference to以及it is a good habit to be honest中it作形式主語(yǔ)。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。13．（湖北中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)為響應(yīng)我市“創(chuàng)建國(guó)家衛(wèi)生城市”的號(hào)召，6月3日，5000多名市民以綠色出行的方式參與了“生態(tài)隨州——環(huán)白云湖健步走”活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)以“共建綠色城市”為主題，根據(jù)以下文字提示，并適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。主題Let’s build a green city together具體做法方式益處、徒步出行避免交通擁堵，減少空氣污染，不隨地吐痰讓城市變得干凈舒適美化城市，保護(hù)環(huán)境你的建議聯(lián)系自己的生活實(shí)際提出幾條具體的合理的建議。（至少2條）注意：1．文章必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文的意思連貫，語(yǔ)句通順；2．詞數(shù)：80詞左右：（文章的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名及地名．參考詞匯：吐痰spit 垃圾箱dustbin 交通擁堵traffic jams 環(huán)境environmentAs a middle school student of Suizhou, it’s our duty to help build a green ______________________________ ____________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As a middle school student of Suizhou, it’s our duty to help build a green city. We can avoidthe traffic jams and reduce the air pollution by riding bikes or walking. We mustn’t throw rubbish or spit anywhere. In this way, we can keep our city clean and tidy so that we can live a fortable life. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the environment and make our city beautiful.In my daily life, I can pick up rubbish and put it into the dustbin wherever I go. I can alsosave the energy by turning off the lights when leaving the room. In a word, everyone can play a part in building our city.【解析】本文屬于給出一個(gè)主題，對(duì)這個(gè)主題的相關(guān)內(nèi)容進(jìn)行論述。實(shí)際上就是要求書(shū)寫(xiě)一份倡議書(shū)。人稱為第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。動(dòng)筆前先要注意認(rèn)真閱讀材料，確定寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容；文章必須包括要點(diǎn)中所給的信息，并補(bǔ)充兩條個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)。注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使行文連貫，豐富文章的文采。高分句型一：We can avoid the traffic jams and reduce the air pollution by riding bikes or walking. 通過(guò)騎自行車(chē)或步行，這樣就可以避免交通阻塞，減少空氣污染。and是并列連詞，連接的是兩個(gè)相同的謂語(yǔ)，by是介詞，意思是通過(guò)某組織方式。高分句型二：In my daily life，I can pick up rubbish and put it into the dustbin wherever I go. 在我的日常生活中，無(wú)論我走到哪里，我會(huì)撿垃圾，把垃圾放進(jìn)垃圾箱里。pick up是固定短語(yǔ)，意思是撿起，put into是固定短語(yǔ)，意思是放進(jìn)wherever引導(dǎo)的是讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，從句的意思是無(wú)論我到哪里。14．（全國(guó)中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)越來(lái)越多汽車(chē)進(jìn)入我們的家庭生活，改善了我們的生活，但同時(shí)也帶來(lái)了很多問(wèn)題，如塞車(chē)和車(chē)禍，給家庭和社會(huì)帶來(lái)極大的危害。作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該怎樣做呢？請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)交通安全的短文（100字左右）內(nèi)容提示：遵守交通規(guī)則，如走人行道/過(guò)斑馬線。別在街道上或馬路上玩耍和踢球。勸父母不能酒后駕車(chē)。你可以適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，讓短文通順，過(guò)渡自然。參考詞匯：sidewalk 人行道 zebracrossing 斑馬線___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】With more and more cars ing into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents。Traffic safety is everybody39。s business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .We can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc。We can say cars are ing into our life, but only when everybody thinks traf