【正文】 round because I like doing some sports ,such as playing basketball,playing expect my school life is colorful ,and I can get on well with my classmates and my teachers,and we will make progress on our study .I will discuss learning goals and ways with my school,I hope to do afterclass activities in the free time. I hope these will e ture.【解析】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如senior high school，go to do，like doing，do some sports，such as，play basketball，play tennis，get on well with，make progress，after school，hope to do，in the free time，e ture等。而And I hpe there are many classrooms and a library where I can read. / I hope there is a big playground because I like doing some sports ,such as playing basketball, playing ，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)流暢，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容可知用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)，可把提示的內(nèi)容逐詞翻譯并拓展成不同的句子，最后把這些句子連在一起即可。12．（四川雅安中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。假如你們學(xué)校要開展主題為：“如何保護(hù)地球”的演講比賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇演講稿。提示：1. 現(xiàn)在存在的環(huán)境問題。2. 采取措施，保護(hù)環(huán)境。1） 關(guān)閉工廠，不亂扔垃圾。 2） 節(jié)約用水、用電的方法。3） 使用購物袋代替塑料袋, 盡量乘坐公共交通。4） 回收利用廢品等。要求： ，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不記入字?jǐn)?shù)。Hello, everyone!The earth is our home, so we should protect it well. Thanks for listening!【答案】How to Protect the EarthHello, everyone!The earth is our home, so we should protect it well.However it bees dirtier and dirtier: polluted rivers and lakes, growing deserts, the destruction of the forests and wildlife. All the bad things are the punishments from nature. It39。s time to take measures to protect the environment. First of all, close the factory and don39。t litter. Second, the method of saving water and electricity. Third, use shopping bags instead of plastic bags and try to take public transport. Fourth, recycling waste products and so on.I hope our home will bee better and better.Thanks for listening!【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如dirtier and dirtier，the punishments from nature，It39。s time to do，first of all，the method of，instead of，try to do，and so on，better and better等。而First of all,/ Second,/ Third,/ Fourth,等詞語的運(yùn)用，既豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，更使短文很有條理，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。13．（全國中考模擬）書面表達(dá)健康的生活習(xí)慣對(duì)于成長中的我們是非常重要的。你認(rèn)為健康的生活習(xí)慣應(yīng)當(dāng)是怎樣的呢?請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的信息提示,寫一篇短文,首句已給出。信息提示：。 , 不熬夜。 , 強(qiáng)身健體。，做網(wǎng)絡(luò)的主人。要求：根據(jù)信息提示, 把握要點(diǎn), 適當(dāng)發(fā)揮, 不逐字翻譯。字?jǐn)?shù)在80詞左右。I think healthy habits are very important for us. Best wishes.Yours,【答案】I think healthy habits are very important for us. All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bed for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should be in control of puter games instead of being addicted to them.YoursLi Hua【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇材料作文。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的信息提示,寫一篇短文。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤?！军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求。14．（北京中考模擬）假如你是李華，即將結(jié)束在美國的交換學(xué)習(xí)，回國前你想給住家媽媽Sarah寫封感謝信，告訴她你什么時(shí)候回國，為什么感謝她，以及你的感受。提示詞語： help, care, municate, drive to hospital, own family提示要點(diǎn)：When are you going to leave?Why do you want to say ‘thank you’ to her?How do you feel?Dear Sarah,I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. Thanks again for taking care of me so well.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sarah,I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. I am going to leave the US next Tuesday morning. I really want to say thanks to you because of your help and care during my stay here. I will never forget you offered to help when I had difficulty in municating with others in English, and I will never forget you drove me to the hospital in the late night when I didn’t feel well. Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.”Thanks again for taking care of me so well.【解析】此文為提綱式作文，文章屬于感謝信。文章可分為三段，第一段表明寫信的目的；第二段分析感謝的具體原因；第三段寫出你在住家媽媽Sarah家里的感受。文章用第一人稱來寫，時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般過去時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。亮點(diǎn)分析：表示感激的句型：I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. Thanks again for taking care of me so well.[高分句型一]I will never forget you offered to help when I had difficulty in municating with others in English. 我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記，當(dāng)我用英語和別人交流困難時(shí)，你主動(dòng)提出幫助我。句子中有when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句。[高分句型二]Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.” 住在您們家里就像住在我自己的家里一樣，這讓我想起了一句話：“天下之大, 家最美好?！?其中which reminds me of the saying是由which引導(dǎo)的定語從句。15．（甘肅中考模擬）（年浙江紹興）書面表達(dá)?！癏ow can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論，為此你采訪了一些同學(xué)（結(jié)果見下表）。請(qǐng)據(jù)上經(jīng)用英語寫一篇短文參與討論，并闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。同學(xué)主要觀點(diǎn)你的觀點(diǎn)努力學(xué)習(xí)尊重父母服務(wù)社會(huì)計(jì)劃未來……（至少兩條）注意：（1）短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；（2）你的觀點(diǎn)至少兩條；（3）詞數(shù)：80—100；（4）短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：尊重respect短文首句：I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.【答案】I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teen