【正文】 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently, more and more Chinese people travel abroad , but some of them have bad manners .The poor behaviors or some Chinese have done great harm to our good reputation. How should we be a qualified tourist? In my opinion ,We have to understand and respect foreign cultures. First, we are supposed to protect the environment ,We shouldn’t spit or throw the rubbish everywhere. Second, we should obey the public order .We had better not shout loudly in public places , We have to wait in line when we are shopping .Third, we should protect the cultural relics. We mustn’t paint or carve on the monuments. We shouldn’t climb or touch artifacts. At the same time, we should save water and electricity. We are not supposed to waste food when we have meals . In this way, we39。ll win respect for ourselves as well as our country.【解析】寫作分析：這篇寫作需要圍繞“如何做一個合格的游客”展開寫作，具體的要點已經(jīng)給出了。寫作的時候可以適當借助祈使句來表示“不應該做…”，需要注意使用恰當?shù)姆绞揭胛恼拢暯雍妹總€要點。寫作亮點：開頭應該對寫作的背景進行一定的交代?！癰ad manners”表示禮貌狀況不好，然后講到了這些行為對中國的名聲有害（have done great harm to our good reputation），這里用到了現(xiàn)在完成時，表示傷害已經(jīng)造成了，產(chǎn)生了不好的影響，時態(tài)的妙用是一個亮點。緊接著發(fā)問引入主題。借助first, second等詞串聯(lián)起自己的觀點。相關(guān)短語使用恰當，“are supposed to”（應該…），“spit or throw the rubbish everywhere”（四處亂扔垃圾），“protect the cultural relics”（保護文化遺產(chǎn)），最后文章有簡練的收尾，we39。ll win respect for ourselves as well as our country.（我們會為我們自己和我們的國家贏得尊重），簡練，完成了寫作任務。16．（南通市通州區(qū)金北學校中考模擬）書面表達同學們，中考后就會迎來漫長的暑假了，班會課上老師組織大家討論假期學習和生活計劃。假如你是李華，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英語向同學們匯報一下你的計劃。內(nèi)容提示：暑假計劃學習博覽群書；學習技能 （或自擬一點）生活健康飲食；堅持鍛煉 （或自擬一點）其它熱愛公益；親近自然 （或自擬一點）注意：1. 表達中必須包括所給要點，可以適當發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。2. 詞數(shù)90左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。3. 表達中請勿提及真實校名及姓名。Dear classmates,Summer holiday is ing, and here is my plan for it.____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ I hope all of you can enjoy the ing holiday. That’s all. Thank you.【答案】Dear classmates,Summer holiday is ing, and here is my plan for it.First, I39。d like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think it39。s necessary for me to learn at least one skill. I39。m interested in cooking, so I will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday.Second, health is the most important. So I will eat healthily and exercise more. I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables and keep running every day.Third, it39。s a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. I will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can make our Earth a better world. Also, travelling out is a good choice. While travelling, we can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. We have more chances to search the Internet. I know unhealthy websites are harmful to us. I will say no to them.I hope all of you can enjoy the ing holiday. That39。s all. Thank you.【解析】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如I39。d like to do，help me open my mind，at least，be interested in，during the holiday，plan to do，join in，be kind to someone in need，pay more attention to，be close to nature，search the Internet等。而First, I39。d like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, it39。s a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in ，既使短文層次清晰，又豐富了習作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。17．（湖南長郡中學中考模擬）書面表達76,近年來，科技的進步正在逐步影響著人們的日常生活。年5月，來39。自一帶一 路”沿線的20國青年評選出了中國的“新四大發(fā)明”:高鐵、支付寶、共享單車和網(wǎng)購。 假如你是李華，你的朋友Lisa是英國的一名初中生，她對我們的“新四大發(fā)明”很感 興趣。請你給她寫一封電子郵件，具體內(nèi)容如下： ，將展出學生制作的各類材質(zhì)的小模型。注意:，開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù) ，使行文流暢。參考詞匯:共享單車:shared bikes Dear Lisa,I’m glad to hear that you’re so interested in our “Four New”Inventions”______________________YoursLi Hua【答案】Dear Lisa,I’m glad to hear that you’re so interested in our “Four New Inventions” Let me tell you about are highspeed railways,electronic payments,shared bicycles and online travel by highspeed are very use electronic payments when we use online shopping,When we want to go somewhere by bike,we use shared use our mobile phone to unlock the shared is convenient and is no pollution and oil can also keep healthy when we ride will be the Science Festival in our will show all kinds of models that students hope you will e to visit them.YoursLi Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示來介紹中國的新四大發(fā)明，題目中給出了具體的寫作的內(nèi)容，我們應將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達出來。首先應注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點，并注意表達的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時態(tài)和人稱，通過分析可知，這篇短文應使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，謂語動詞用原形，特別要注意謂語動詞形式要變化，這是一個寫作的難點。最后要注意英語的表達習慣，英語句式與漢語在語序和詞性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。應從句子整體考慮，使用恰當?shù)脑~匯和句型來表達，語法規(guī)范。還應使用一些較好的句型或者短語，增強文章的表現(xiàn)力。18．（山東中考模擬）書面表達在學習中, 不良的學習習慣導致學習效率不高。以 How to improve learning efficiency 為題，寫一篇英語短文。內(nèi)容如下：1. 說明是否存在學習效率不高的現(xiàn)象；2. 分析自己或他人效率不高的原因，并舉例說明；3. 根據(jù)你所列出的原因，提出相應的建議。參考詞匯：效率 efficiency注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；2. 語言通順，句子連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3. 詞數(shù)80左右，文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。How to improve learning efficiencyIn my class, _______