【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 ’re concerned, playing puter games makes them more energetic.As for some students and me, we like doing exercise. Doing exercise is important for us to keep healthy. If we are healthy, we’ll have more chances to get good grades.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，描述同學(xué)們業(yè)余時間喜歡做的活動以及運動的好處。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如spare time, be fond of, strongly believe, make sb adj, as far as one’s concerned, keep healthy, have chances to do以及“主將從現(xiàn)”原則。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．（江蘇中考模擬）假如你是李明，將參加今年暑期的澳大利亞悉尼新南威爾士語言學(xué)校的游學(xué)活動（study tour）, 該項目的負責(zé)人Mike給你發(fā)來了封電子郵件征詢你對此次游學(xué)活動的想法和建議。請閱讀以下信息，并回復(fù)一封電子郵件。注意事項： 1. 文章所寫內(nèi)容必須包括郵件中的問題所涉及的所有信息。2. 文章要求語意通順，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范，不能出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、校名等信息。3. 文章詞數(shù)在100詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Sir/Madam,I’m glad to receive your and I have read it carefully. I have decided to live in ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m really looking forward to this study tour!Many thanks,Li Ming【答案】例文：Dear Sir/Madam,I’m glad to receive your and I have read it carefully. I have decided to live in the Green family. The old couple have no children but two dogs, so they will have more time to municate with me in English and I can play with their pets as well. Their flat is in the centre of Sydney, so it’s easy for me to go around. I can also use the Wifi to keep in touch with my parents. My family can afford the cost of 350 pounds.I’m lucky to have a buddy during my stay at your school. I expect him/her to help me with my problems in my study. I can chat with him/her in English to improve my speaking skills. I love history so I want to visit some places of interest at the weekend. I’m also curious about the local food and I want to have a taste.I’m really looking forward to this study tour!Many thanks,Li Ming【解析】【詳解】這是一篇應(yīng)用作文，郵件內(nèi)容要回答郵件中的三個問題，可分為三個段落進行回答。好單詞：afford 負擔(dān)得起好短語：municate with 和……交流as well 也keep in touch with 與……保持聯(lián)系expect sb. to do sth. 期望某人做某事help sb. with sth. 在某方面幫助某人chat with 和……聊天place of interest 名勝古跡be curious about 對……感到好奇have a taste 嘗一嘗好句式：Their flat is in the centre of Sydney, so it39。s easy for me to go around. 他們的公寓在悉尼市中心，所以對我來說，到處走走很容易。（It is adj. for sb. to do sth. 對某人來說做某事是……，it是形式主語，不定式短語是真正的主語）10．（山東中考模擬）環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一，請以Change for a better China為主題，結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語短文。注意事項：，條理清楚，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。,詞數(shù)不少于80。 狀況水污染，大氣污染...... 應(yīng)對措施立即阻止此類活動,治理環(huán)境（至少兩條）...... 感想建議環(huán)境能夠變得更好......Change for a better China________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We all know it is being more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.【解析】【詳解】環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一，請以Change for a better China為主題，結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語短文。要求中已經(jīng)給出了部分提示，動筆先應(yīng)先認真閱讀提示，確定寫作內(nèi)容。寫作中注意表達觀點時的常用句式，注意在表達不同觀點時，連詞的使用。內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。【點睛】本文緊扣要求對家鄉(xiāng)做了簡單介紹，內(nèi)容完整，用了表格中的信息。2.句式豐富。表述靈活。銜接自然，順暢。文中用到了一些好的句型：The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.；We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more 。11．（北京中考模擬）（題文）假如你是李華，本周六與好友相約去北京植物園。你的美國網(wǎng)友Fred正好也在北京，你邀他同去。請你向他發(fā)出邀請，告訴他去哪兒，做什么以及你的建議。提示詞語：Beijing Botanical Garden, have a piic 提示問題：When and where are you going this Saturday? What will you do there? What do you advise him to do?【答案】I’m writing to invite you to join us this Saturday. This Saturday, I’m going to Beijing Botanical Garden with my friends. We’ll meet at our school gate at seven in the morning. Then we are going there by bike. We’ll enjoy the colorful flowers and plants there. We are going to have a piic in the open air. If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you. Don’t forget to take a bottle of water. I hope you can e and we’ll e back at five in the afternoon. I’m looking forward to your early reply.【解析】試題分析：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。本題根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時，邀請對方并給出建議，需使用表達邀請和用于提建議的相關(guān)短語和句式，注意長短搭配，并在行文中增加細節(jié)和過渡，使文章讀起來比較流暢。動筆前，一定要認真分析提示要點，理解要點要表達的含義。平時除了加強詞匯積累和寫作練習(xí)以外，還應(yīng)該適當(dāng)背誦一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。亮點說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如join us，this Saturday，be going to，Beijing Botanical Garden，in the morning，by bike，have a piic，in the open air，like to do，forget to do，a bottle of water，e back，in the afternoon，look forward to等。而If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you