【正文】 參考詞匯：效率 efficiency注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；2. 語(yǔ)言通順，句子連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；3. 詞數(shù)80左右，文章的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。以 How to improve learning efficiency 為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。18．（應(yīng)從句子整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型來(lái)表達(dá)，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范。其次要注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用原形，特別要注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式要變化，這是一個(gè)寫(xiě)作的難點(diǎn)。參考詞匯:共享單車(chē):shared bikes Dear Lisa,I’m glad to hear that you’re so interested in our “Four New”Inventions”______________________YoursLi Hua【答案】Dear Lisa,I’m glad to hear that you’re so interested in our “Four New Inventions” Let me tell you about are highspeed railways,electronic payments,shared bicycles and online travel by highspeed are very use electronic payments when we use online shopping,When we want to go somewhere by bike,we use shared use our mobile phone to unlock the shared is convenient and is no pollution and oil can also keep healthy when we ride will be the Science Festival in our will show all kinds of models that students hope you will e to visit them.YoursLi Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示來(lái)介紹中國(guó)的新四大發(fā)明，題目中給出了具體的寫(xiě)作的內(nèi)容，我們應(yīng)將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。請(qǐng)你給她寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，具體內(nèi)容如下： ，將展出學(xué)生制作的各類(lèi)材質(zhì)的小模型。自一帶一 路”沿線(xiàn)的20國(guó)青年評(píng)選出了中國(guó)的“新四大發(fā)明”:高鐵、支付寶、共享單車(chē)和網(wǎng)購(gòu)。湖南長(zhǎng)郡中學(xué)中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)76,近年來(lái)，科技的進(jìn)步正在逐步影響著人們的日常生活。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。點(diǎn)睛：書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。d like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, it39。d like to do，help me open my mind，at least，be interested in，during the holiday，plan to do，join in，be kind to someone in need，pay more attention to，be close to nature，search the Internet等。s all. Thank you.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿(mǎn)，表達(dá)流暢。m interested in cooking, so I will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday.Second, health is the most important. So I will eat healthily and exercise more. I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables and keep running every day.Third, it39。d like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think it39。3. 表達(dá)中請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)校名及姓名。2. 詞數(shù)90左右。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英語(yǔ)向同學(xué)們匯報(bào)一下你的計(jì)劃。16．（相關(guān)短語(yǔ)使用恰當(dāng)，“are supposed to”（應(yīng)該…），“spit or throw the rubbish everywhere”（四處亂扔垃圾），“protect the cultural relics”（保護(hù)文化遺產(chǎn)），最后文章有簡(jiǎn)練的收尾，we39。緊接著發(fā)問(wèn)引入主題。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：開(kāi)頭應(yīng)該對(duì)寫(xiě)作的背景進(jìn)行一定的交代。ll win respect for ourselves as well as our country.【解析】寫(xiě)作分析：這篇寫(xiě)作需要圍繞“如何做一個(gè)合格的游客”展開(kāi)寫(xiě)作，具體的要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出了。4 、節(jié)約用水用電，用餐不浪費(fèi)。 2 、遵守公共秩序，不在公眾場(chǎng)所喧嘩，購(gòu)物時(shí)排隊(duì)。新華旅游局呼吁文明出游，游客應(yīng)認(rèn)真思考如何做一名“合格的旅游者”， 請(qǐng)以How to be a qualified tourist 為題目 寫(xiě)一則英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勛约旱目捶?。河南中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)近幾年來(lái)，越來(lái)越多的中國(guó)人出國(guó)旅游，但一些游客的不文明行為也成為國(guó)內(nèi)外輿論關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)。最后檢查所用時(shí)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)是否符合要求；檢查段落是否完整，句子表達(dá)是否準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)法、拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、移行、大小寫(xiě)等方面是否有誤等。同時(shí)在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。要求是給七年級(jí)新生的學(xué)習(xí)生活提幾點(diǎn)建議，所以人稱(chēng)主要用第二人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。，詞數(shù)80詞左右。注意:，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。湖北中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)初中生即將結(jié)束，學(xué)校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部特邀你寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，給七年級(jí)新生的學(xué)習(xí)生活提幾點(diǎn)建議?！?其中which reminds me of the saying是由which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。句子中有when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。文章用第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)寫(xiě)，時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。提示詞語(yǔ)： help, care, municate, drive to hospital, own family提示要點(diǎn)：When are you going to leave?Why do you want to say ‘thank you’ to her?How do you feel?Dear Sarah,I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. Thanks again for taking care of me so well.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sarah,I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. I am going to leave the US next Tuesday morning. I really want to say thanks to you because of your help and care during my stay here. I will never forget you offered to help when I had difficulty in municating with others in English, and I will never forget you drove me to the hospital in the late night when I didn’t feel well. Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.”Thanks again for taking care of me so well.【解析】此文為提綱式作文，文章屬于感謝信。13．（亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如turn left, go along, turn right, at the first crossing, go straight, across from以及l(fā)et sb do。Dear John,The movie theater is not very far. Go out of your home and__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________David【答案】Dear John,The movie theater is not very far. Go out of your home and turn left. Go along Buxing Street and turn right at the first crossing. Go straight till you see a post office on your right. The movie theater is just across from the post office. Let us meet there at 6:00 . David【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，告訴約翰如何到達(dá)電影院。海林市朝鮮族中學(xué)中考模擬）（A） 今天是周日，你（David）邀請(qǐng)你的朋友（John）晚六點(diǎn)去看電影，但他不知道電影院在哪兒，你發(fā)了一條微信和路線(xiàn)圖，請(qǐng)他按照路線(xiàn)圖來(lái)電影院。而If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you. / I hope you can e and we’ll e back at five in the going to結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)流暢，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿(mǎn)，表達(dá)流暢。動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析提示要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。What do you advise him to do?【答案】I’m writing to invite you to join us this Saturday. This Saturday, I’m going to Beijing Botanical Garden with my friends. We’ll meet at our school gate at seven in the morning. Then we are going there by bike. We’ll enjoy the colorful flowers and plants there. We are going to have a piic in the open air. If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you. Don’t forget to take a bottle of water. I hope you can e and we’ll e back at five in the afternoon. I’m looking forward to your early reply.【解析】試題分析：書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。請(qǐng)你向他發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)，告訴他去哪兒，做什么以及你的建議。北京中考模擬）（