【正文】 本文中時間詞如After supper，Sometimes，in the evening等的巧妙使用，使得本文看起來邏輯清楚，條理分明。為了使意思更加連貫可適當使用連接詞。根據(jù)材料可知，本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第三人稱進行敘述，寫作中主語時態(tài)及主謂一致等問題?！敬鸢浮縊ne possible versionDear Mary,I’m very glad to introduce（介紹） my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14yearold girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises （for a long time）. After supper she helps her parents with housework. （She is really a good girl. ）But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn’t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays puter games for more than an hour in the evening. （This makes her parents unhappy. ）I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?YoursHuang Deshun【解析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。詞數(shù)不少于60個英語單詞。TimeGood habitsBad habitsIn the morningGet up earlyEat junk food for breakfastIn classAsk some questionsQuarrel（爭吵） with herclassmates sometimesAfter schoolAlways exerciseGo home lateIn the eveningHelp her parents with houseworkWatch TV or play putergames for more than an hour要求：語言要通順，表達要正確。最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。Mother為主題寫一篇短文介紹你的母親和你之間的故事，參加某英語網站正在舉辦的征文活動。s what she wants most，I think．【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．I39。show love．The person I love most is my mother．My mother is 41 years old．She is of medium build with long black hair．She is quiet．She is a history teacher in a middle school．She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food．She did a lot for me when I was a child．She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn39。islovepersonshowneedlove．WeMotherWeMybestto…，trymyto…，It39。參考詞匯：give9．書面表達為感受母愛情深，弘揚知恩圖報，某英語網站正在舉辦以My用了because引導的原因狀語從句，增加了文章的亮點。寫作亮點：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：e to an end結束；on the way在途中；get close to nature親近大自然；volunteer to do something自愿做某事；help sb to do sth幫助某人做某事；take part in sth參加活動。文章主要內容為計劃的書寫，主要使用一般將來時態(tài)。m sure I39。 寫作要求： 詞左右，開頭部分已給出，但不計入規(guī)定字數(shù)。 寫作內容：，享受大自然的美景，放松心情。句型：By doing so, our world will bee more and more beautiful；we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。例文點評：例文采用的是一段式，人稱用的是第一人稱復數(shù)形式，時態(tài)主要用的是一般現(xiàn)在時，描述具體怎么做時，描寫細致，條理清晰。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談談生活中你該怎么做，以及這樣做的意義。時代楷模充分體現(xiàn)“愛國、敬業(yè)、誠信、友善”的價值準則。句型：被動句型。：例文采用三段式；用第一人稱來敘述講成語故事活動；因為活動已經舉辦，所以時態(tài)采用一般過去時；對參加活動的過程描寫完整且條理清晰。提示詞語： Chinese idioms, story, collect, share, learn from, acient提示問題： ● What did you do during the activity of Telling Chinese idioms story?● What did you learn from the activity?● What do you think of it?【答案】The activity of “Telling Chinese idioms story” was held in our school last week.In order to take part in this activity, I collected lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After each story, the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it corr