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ay a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.【解析】【詳解】環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一,請(qǐng)以Change for a better China為主題,結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。要求中已經(jīng)給出了部分提示,動(dòng)筆先應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀提示,確定寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。寫(xiě)作中注意表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)的常用句式,注意在表達(dá)不同觀點(diǎn)時(shí),連詞的使用。內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性;語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文緊扣要求對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)做了簡(jiǎn)單介紹,內(nèi)容完整,用了表格中的信息。2.句式豐富。表述靈活。銜接自然,順暢。文中用到了一些好的句型:The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.;We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more 。9.書(shū)面表達(dá)初中就要畢業(yè)了,校報(bào)“英語(yǔ)角”欄目向同學(xué)們征集畢業(yè)晚會(huì)的計(jì)劃。假定你是李華,請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn) 寫(xiě)一封信,說(shuō)說(shuō)你的計(jì)劃?;顒?dòng)畢業(yè)晚會(huì)時(shí)間6月28日晚上七點(diǎn)地點(diǎn)學(xué)校禮堂school hall參與者全體初三學(xué)生和老師活動(dòng)內(nèi)容1.邀請(qǐng)校長(zhǎng)作演講;2.互贈(zèng)禮物送祝福;3.各班表演精彩節(jié)目4. 要求:,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使句子通順,連貫。 ,語(yǔ)法正確,書(shū)寫(xiě)整潔。 ,開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾己給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 。Dear editor,I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes,Yours Lihua【答案】Dear editor,I39。m very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.Best wishes,Yours,Li hua【解析】【分析】這篇書(shū)面表達(dá)主要是推薦自己的畢業(yè)晚會(huì)計(jì)劃?!驹斀狻窟@是一篇給材料作文,介紹畢業(yè)典禮活動(dòng)計(jì)劃。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí),人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問(wèn)題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。10.近年來(lái),習(xí)近平主席提出了實(shí)現(xiàn)中華民族偉大復(fù)興的“中國(guó)夢(mèng)”。學(xué)校開(kāi)展了“夢(mèng)想少年”的主題演講活動(dòng),假如你是張明,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提供的要點(diǎn),以“I39。m a Dream Teenager”為題,寫(xiě)一篇80-100詞的短文,向大家推介自己。(可聯(lián)系實(shí)際,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮)注意:1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名。提示詞語(yǔ): good at ..with ...rules up popular with... to do something【答案】I39。m a Dream Teenager Good morning, dear teachers and friends, I am Zhang Ming. It39。s great honor for me to make a speech here. As a fifteenyearold boy, my dream is to be a good teacher. To make my dream e true, I study hard at school and I am good at all my subjects. Also, I am an outgoing and healthy boy who likes football very much, and I really enjoy sports. At school, I always follow the school rules, so I am popular with my classmates and teachers. On weekends, I39。d like to help people. For example, I volunteer to visit sick children in the hospital and cheer them up.In a word, I believe that the man who holds his dream will be able to achieve his dream one day. That39。s all. Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。學(xué)校開(kāi)展“夢(mèng)想少年”的主題演講活動(dòng),假如你是張明,要求根據(jù)圖表提示內(nèi)容,以“I39。m a Dream Teenager”為題,寫(xiě)一篇短文,向大家推介自己。根據(jù)所給出的材料提示可知文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱主要為第一、第三人稱。首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作。在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中,要將圖表內(nèi)提示信息用英語(yǔ)正確的表達(dá)出來(lái),要涵蓋圖表中提到的所有要點(diǎn),注意理順要點(diǎn),防止漏寫(xiě)。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無(wú)誤。