【正文】 Anything new at your school? Yours,Li Hua 【答案】How is it going ? You’re asking my role model in my daily life. Well, my role model in my daily life is my teacher, Mr. Green. He is very friendly to us and he has a good sense of humor. He is patient with all the students in class and tries to make his class interesting. We never feel bored. He teaches us how to think by ourselves and helps us solve the problems at school. He is like a father to us. Mr. Green sets a good example for me in my life. He is such a great teacher and I’m proud of being his student. I hope to be a teacher like him when I grow up. Anything new at your school? Yours,Li Hua【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，以“A Role Model in My Daily Life”為主題,給我的筆友Peter 寫信，介紹我日常生活中的榜樣。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。此處be friendly to, be patient with, try to do sth, teach sb sth, help sb do sth, be like, set a good example for sb, hope to do sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。北京中考模擬）“ 業(yè)精于勤而荒于嬉， 行成于思而毀于隨” 。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“如何養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣”為主題的征文活動。提示詞語： get ready for, take notes, on time提示問題： ●What do you do to develop your good learning habits in your daily life?●Why do you do so?As a middle school student,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As a middle school student, it39。以“如何養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣”為主題寫一篇英文稿件,主要談?wù)勛约旱暮玫膶W(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣。2. 例文點評：文章采用三段式，以總分總的形式將文章主題描述的清晰明了。3. 高分亮點：短語：get ready for；take notes；on time；daily life；important points。3．（提示詞語:wear, role, perform, judge, suggestions, photos提示問題:When and where are you going to hold the English drama show?What are you going to do on the show?What will you ask Mr. Smith to do for the show?Dear Mr. Smith, I39。ll be an English drama show this weekend. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We’re looking forward to your reply.Li Hua【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,I’m glad to tell you there’ll be an English drama show this weekend . It will be held at 8:00 this Saturday morning. We are going to hold it in our music club. All of us are going to wear nice clothes and play different roles in groups. We will perform English dramas. Speeches will be made during the show.I hope you can work as a judge and give scores for each group after their performances. Then at the end of the drama show, you can give us some suggestions. If possible, you can bring your camera with you and take some photos for us. I believe this English drama show will be successful with your help.We’re looking forward to your reply.Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，邀請外教史密斯先生參加英語戲劇展示活動。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如be going to, at the end of, give sb sth, if possible, take some photos以及with one’s help?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。初寫短文。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。修改潤色。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。海南中考模擬）假如你是王梅，有一個弟弟/妹妹一直是你的夢想，去年你家里添了一個弟弟/妹妺，你非常開心，請根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點，寫一封電子郵件給你的筆友李蕾，和她分享你的快樂，告訴她你的變化。參考詞匯：joy； grow up with 。寫作要求：（1）不得使用真實姓名和校名（2）包含以上所有要點，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫；（3）字跡工整，語言精練，表達準確，條理清楚；（4）詞數(shù)80左右。）Dear Li Lei,I have been dreaming to have a brother/sister. Last year,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m lucky and happy to have a brother/ sister. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,Wang Mei【答案】Dear Li Le,I have been dreaming to have a sister. Last year, my dream came true. I was really happy to have such a lovely baby sister.She brings lots of joy to our family and she grows up with me day by day. Every time I see the big smile on her face, my heart is full of sweet feelings. I will e over to see her and play with her as soon as I get home every day. Now I’m not alone any more.Above all, I have learned to share and look after others since she was born. I learn to help my mother do the housework, such as washing clothes, cooking and looking after my little sister on my o