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the UK.I’m looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【解析】這篇作文要求我們以中學(xué)生李華的身份,給Liz Payne寫一個(gè)留言。作文要求:;不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名;,詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。廣東中考模擬)假設(shè)你是來自中國的中學(xué)生李華,打算參加當(dāng)?shù)亟M織的國外冬令營,看完了這個(gè)網(wǎng)頁后,你打算給Liz Payne留言,表達(dá)你在冬令營期間想去London Canal Museum參觀的愿望。句型:such…that…;so…that…引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句;whenever…引導(dǎo)的從句;used to do。:例文采用三段式:用第一人稱來敘述故事內(nèi)容:時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過去式為主,敘述過去的經(jīng)歷,敘述完整清晰。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意選取一個(gè)給你留下深刻印象的人、事或物,對你現(xiàn)在的生活造成了影響。(注意:段文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息,否則不予評分。記憶中有沒有讓你留下深刻印象的人、事或物,對你現(xiàn)在的生活造成了影響。上海市澧溪中學(xué)初三期中)Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Yesterday once more”.(以“昨日重現(xiàn)”為題寫一篇不少于60詞的短文,標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)?!军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。而固定句型It is very important for us to know how to treasure and protect our we can learn to treasure and protect ourselves, I believe we can have a healthy body and a better ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容;同時(shí)First of all,/ Secondly,/ Thirdly,和Finally,等詞使表達(dá)條理,層次清晰,是本文的亮點(diǎn)。t climb trees, don39。請你以“How to Protect Our Lives”為題,從安全和健康的角度入手,寫一篇如何珍惜和保護(hù)我們生命的短文,要點(diǎn)如下:1. 交通安全,校園安全2. 健康的飲食和生活3. ... ...參考詞匯:treasure(v.)珍惜注意:1. 詞數(shù)80~100;2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱。初三英語英語書面表達(dá)匯編真題匯編(含答案)含解析一、中考英語書面表達(dá)匯編1.(合肥市第四十二中學(xué)中考模擬)每個(gè)人的生命只有一次?!敬鸢浮縃ow to Protect Our LivesIt is very important for us to know how to treasure and protect our lives.First of all, we should obey the traffic rules and pay attention to traffic safety.Secondly, we should not chase and fight in school. Don39。t play dangerous games.Thirdly, we should eat some healthy foods, such as vegetables, fruits, and so on. They are able to help us maintain a healthy body.Finally, a good sleep can also assure us a healthy body. We should sleep seven to eight hours a day to maintain adequate sleep. If we can learn to treasure and protect ourselves, I believe we can have a healthy body and a better life.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如how to do,first of all,obey the traffic rules,pay attention to,such as,and so on,be able to,learn to do等。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性,也更富有條理。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。2.()當(dāng)昨日重現(xiàn)之時(shí),在腦海里的都是回憶。請選取一個(gè)方面,結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷,談?wù)勀惝?dāng)時(shí)的經(jīng)歷以及現(xiàn)在的感受。)The following is for reference only(以下表達(dá)僅供參考)used to be.../make sb do sth/in my heart/have a deep influence/remind sb of sth【答案】例文Yesterday once moreIt goes without saying that our life is full of a variety of memories. Among all the persons I have met, the most unforgettable person is my father.I used to be such a shy and silent girl that I couldn’t say any words in public. Whenever teachers asked me to answer questions, my heart would beat again and again and say nothing but to look down. Once, I tried talking with my father frightenedly. He listened to me all the time with bright smile and encouraged me to be brave. He told me, “ you don’t have to be perfect but when you do your best, you make your parent proud.” With the support of my father, I gained so much encouragement that I determined to be a more confident person. In one word, Father’s love like water, deep and soft, which makes great differences in my life.【解析】【詳解】:該題目屬于記敘文寫作。結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷,談?wù)勀惝?dāng)時(shí)的經(jīng)歷以及現(xiàn)在的感受。:短語:full of;in public;again and again;all the time;encourage sb to do sth;do one’s best;with the support of。3.(內(nèi)容包括:;(包含冬令營的時(shí)間,聽Liz Payne的講座);。作文的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù),也不必抄寫在答題卡上。文章內(nèi)容主要包括三個(gè)部分:首先是介紹自己的身份;然后寫留言的目的,包括冬令營的時(shí)間、想要去參觀London Canal Museum以及聽Liz Payne的講座;最后簡單介紹一下你的預(yù)期的收獲。通過分析可知,這篇短文應(yīng)使用第一人稱I來敘述,時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般將來時(shí)態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。另外還應(yīng)注意語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使文意連貫。點(diǎn)睛:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。作者主要從三個(gè)方面敘述:首先介紹了自己的身份和寫留言的目的;接下來詳細(xì)介紹了自己參加這次冬令營的愿望;最后是一個(gè)簡單的結(jié)尾。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,文章以第一人稱、一般將來時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主,謂語動詞形式準(zhǔn)發(fā),語法規(guī)范,符合英語句子的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。整篇文章語句通順、意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。天津中考模擬)手機(jī)在生活中扮演著越來越重要的角色,許多中學(xué)生沉迷于手機(jī)無法自拔,:1. 去年,Miller對手機(jī)游戲非常入迷,而且花大量時(shí)間用手機(jī)聊天看電影;2. Miller與家人和朋友交流甚少,離開手機(jī)會很焦慮;3. 昨天還因?yàn)樽呗房词謾C(jī)被自行車撞了,膝蓋受傷;4. 你的建議……參考詞匯:mobile games手機(jī)游戲anxious焦慮be crazy about對……入迷要求:1字?jǐn)?shù)80100個(gè)2開頭已經(jīng)給出不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)3要點(diǎn)齊全,行為連貫,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮Today more and more people are addicted to(沉迷)playing the mobile phones. Last year, My friend Miller was 【答案】Today more and more people are addicted to(沉迷)playing the mobile phones. Last year,My friend Miller was crazy about mobile games as well. He spent too much time in chatting and watching films on the phone. Miller hardly talked with his family and friends. He lived in his own world. He felt very anxious without mobile phones. Yesterday he was hit by a bike, because he was watching his phone at that moment. As a result, he hurt his knees badly.In my opinion, I think we can’t use the mobile phones for a long time, I mean, no more than half an hour a day. Don’t take mobile phones to school. A mobile phone is just a kind of tool, not our whole life.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。在寫作時(shí),注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無誤。山東中考模擬)書面表達(dá)今天早上你目睹了一起事件(下圖),你想以Mother Stops Him為題寫一篇短文,向你校英語報(bào)社投稿。2. 發(fā)表你的想法。 、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。參考詞匯:lift…up扶起, knock…down撞倒,trust信任Mother Stops Him_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】This morning, my mother took me to school. On the way, I saw a car knock an old man down and the car ran away. The old woman fell to the ground and could not move. I saw this situation and immediately went over to help the old man lift up, but my mother stopped me saying, Don39。ll say you hit him. But I think helping others is what we should do. That old woman will certainly appreciate me, so I trust that as long as everyone gives a little love, the world will bee a better place.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇看圖作文,所給材料較為詳細(xì),邏輯清楚,我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。寫作時(shí)要靈活運(yùn)用,注意主謂一致,單詞拼寫正確。所以在學(xué)習(xí)中,我們應(yīng)注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.6.(同學(xué)們,從小到大,會有很多不同的人物伴隨著你成長,他們可