【正文】 Make Lianyungang More BeautifulWith the development of Lianyungang, more and more families have their own cars.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Make Lianyungang More BeautifulWith the development of Lianyungang, more and more families have their own cars. As a result, there is too much traffic on the road and the air pollution bees worse and worse. It has bee impossible for us to see the clear sky as often as before. This not only has a bad effect on our daily life but also does harm to our health. It39。江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確，簡(jiǎn)潔。用了短語和句式，如：graduate from畢業(yè)于；share sth with sb和某人分享某事；wait for等候等，用來一些過渡詞或短語，如：Firstly, Secondly,In other words, At last等，上下文銜接很自然。注意：1. 文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2. 詞數(shù)：60－80；3. 內(nèi)容連貫，不要逐條翻譯；4. 短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。d better not talk or laugh loudly in public. I think we should put up posters to tell people how to behave well to build a civilized city. If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more we are tired,we had a good time.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹周日參加的學(xué)校組織的志愿活動(dòng)。提示詞語：Muhu Park, pick up, water, put up posters, tired，proud提示問題：● Where did you go? ● What did you do?● How did you feel?Last Sunday 【答案】Last Sunday I participated in “build a civilized city”activitity in Muhu Park. It39。16．（動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。寫作要求：80詞左右；條理清楚，意思連貫，語句通順，標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確。15．（寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。We can say cars are ing into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody39。你可以適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，讓短文通順，過渡自然。全國中考模擬）書面表達(dá)越來越多汽車進(jìn)入我們的家庭生活，改善了我們的生活，但同時(shí)也帶來了很多問題，如塞車和車禍，給家庭和社會(huì)帶來極大的危害。注意表達(dá)的順序。（1）學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無拼寫，語法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致等）。仔細(xì)閱讀本的電子郵件，找出他的問題（我想了解一下你們社區(qū)的情況。注意：；，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；，郵件的開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。另外，可以用上一些句型、短語，較高級(jí)的語言，這樣會(huì)使文章更出色。 What do you learn from him/her?The person I want to thank______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The person who I want to thank most is my mother. When I was ill she looked after me carefully. If I felt upset, she would talk to me and encourage me. She is not only my mother but also my best friend. I real want to say thanks to my mother. I also want to tell her I will love her forever.【解析】這是一篇話題作文。 Why do you want to thank him/her?hard提示問題:Who do you want to thank?cook, 某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展題為 The person I want to thank 征文比賽。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。應(yīng)從句子整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型來表達(dá)，語法規(guī)范。參考詞匯:共享單車:shared bikes Dear Lisa,I’m glad to hear that you’re so interested in our “Four New”Inventions”______________________YoursLi Hua【答案】Dear Lisa,I’m glad to hear that you’re so interested in our “Four New Inventions” Let me tell you about are highspeed railways,electronic payments,shared bicycles and online travel by highspeed are very use electronic payments when we use online shopping,When we want to go somewhere by bike,we use shared use our mobile phone to unlock the shared is convenient and is no pollution and oil can also keep healthy when we ride will be the Science Festival in our will show all kinds of models that students hope you will e to visit them.YoursLi Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示來介紹中國的新四大發(fā)明，題目中給出了具體的寫作的內(nèi)容，我們應(yīng)將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達(dá)出來。自一帶一 路”沿線的20國青年評(píng)選出了中國的“新四大發(fā)明”:高鐵、支付寶、共享單車和網(wǎng)購。短文中的一些好的句型和短語有Also, some students don’t respect others、As students, we should do our part to build a civilized city.、We can plant more trees to make our environment better. 、On weekends, we can help clean the streets and collect the trash in public places. 、Besides, we can do volunteer work to help others等。文章內(nèi)容分成兩個(gè)部分：第一部分列舉了一些不文明現(xiàn)象；第二部分介紹了為創(chuàng)建文明城市，中學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎么做。為提升文章檔次，在文章中應(yīng)穿插幾個(gè)并列句或復(fù)合句的結(jié)構(gòu)。需要注意題目中給出的提示詞在文章中必須要用上，可以根據(jù)表達(dá)需要調(diào)整順序。 clean the streets。 traffic rules。陜西師大附中中考模擬）書面表達(dá)“文明是一面鏡子，折射出一座城市的品質(zhì)”。，開頭句“regard my English teacher as one of my best teachers.”直入主題，正文部分詳細(xì)描述了老師如何耐心的多方面的幫助自己， is so kind and helpful that I can’t forget her in my school 。要求: ，如teacher. classmate或trip等:2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校姓名。9．（同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。80～100詞。此處play an important role in, e true, give up, such as等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。s the key to success for all scientists,such as Madame Curie and Darwin.What I have list above is my answer to how to bee an inventor,and that is what I39。要求：1. 80詞左右，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。【點(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。A person who impressed me a lot 【答案】There were so many people in our memory. Some went lost while some impressed us deeply. Now, I want to introduce the one who impressed me a lot.Five years ago, I was a primary school student. My family had to move to another city because of my father’s work. I was sent to a new and strange school. I was not an outgoing girl, so it was not easy for me to make ne