【正文】 這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。點(diǎn)睛：寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. 【答案】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has bee fashionable. Some of us students also join the group. Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower. Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods that aren’t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money. All in all, I love shopping online.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，主要講述網(wǎng)購(gòu)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格的提示，寫一篇網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的文章。（2）To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做義務(wù)勞動(dòng)是他們學(xué)習(xí)如何做困難工作的好機(jī)會(huì)。 生詞提示：respect尊重【答案】A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students＇jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough.【解析】【詳解】閱讀題干要求，這是一篇看法類的作文，那么首先得點(diǎn)明討論的話題，然后分別寫出不同人群對(duì)此事的看法，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。 不同意：1．很臟，容易使學(xué)生生病。 這件事在學(xué)生中引 起了強(qiáng)烈的反響，請(qǐng)你把下列不同意見整理成一篇書面材料，報(bào)告給學(xué)校。用“wear + 某種衣服”來介紹某人的穿戴?！军c(diǎn)睛】人物介紹是記敘文中常見的一種寫作類型。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)。1. 簡(jiǎn)要介紹你最好的朋友的外貌和性格。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你寫一封倡議書，向全體同學(xué)發(fā)出號(hào)召。m ready for any challenges in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文，根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇自己在初中生活中堅(jiān)持做的事；文中寫明自己是怎么做的并談?wù)勛约旱母惺?。談淡你在初中生活中?jiān)持的一件事（愛好，習(xí)慣……），你是怎樣做的，以及你的感受?！眻?jiān)持是一種可貴的品格。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語(yǔ)的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語(yǔ)句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出人物的感想和看法。為了倡導(dǎo)中學(xué)生接近大自然，某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)舉辦了一次征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下問題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文參加征文。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。 advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let herhave more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，對(duì)學(xué)生家長(zhǎng)的博客進(jìn)行回復(fù)。 I’m the mother of a fourteenyear –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ? 寫作要點(diǎn)：1. 表明自己的看法。開頭我要介紹我們班就低碳生活方式進(jìn)行了討論，接下來介紹我們?yōu)榈吞忌羁梢宰龅氖??！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：We can do……，we’d better……，we suggest……，which contributes to……等句式的應(yīng)用。3．書面表達(dá)假定你是李華，最近你們班就低碳生活方式進(jìn)行了討論，你的英國(guó)朋友Peppa向你來信詢問討論情況。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。2．書面表達(dá)假如你是Amy，德國(guó)的交換生Sara下周即將來你家寄宿，昨天你收到她的來信，在信中，她詢問如下信息：1．你家情況；；3. 她要承擔(dān)的家務(wù)勞動(dòng)；4. …現(xiàn)在，你就她提出的問題給她回信，也預(yù)祝她在你家過得開心！要求：1. 文章必須包括圖片中主要內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息；3. 字?jǐn)?shù)約110詞。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。（英語(yǔ)）初三英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)模擬試題含解析一、英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)1．書面表達(dá)我的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)初中即將畢業(yè)，你在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)方面積累了較多的經(jīng)驗(yàn)與方法，請(qǐng)你向你的表弟介紹你的做法，根據(jù)下面表格