【正文】 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Never Give Up The . exam is ing. Students of Grade Nine prepare for it every day. Some of the students do longdistance running. After school they run on the playground together. They pete for the first and cheer for the winner. Some students practice the standing long jump. They stand in one line and jump at the same time. The student who jumps farthest must share the experience with his classmates. Others practice balling throwing. Though the ball is very heavy, they throw balls again and again until they are satisfied with the result. Although they are tired every day, they never give up. I cheer for them. I think exercising is very useful to them. First, the students must pass the . exam, for it is very important. Second, if they do sports every day, they will be healthier than before. In a word, they are great. They never give up, and I should learn from them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇看圖作文，題目中有三張圖片，展示了九年級的學(xué)生們在為體育測試做準(zhǔn)備，我們應(yīng)根據(jù)圖片，以Never give up為題，寫一篇文章，簡要描述三個畫面，并談一談自己的想法。寫作之前，應(yīng)仔細(xì)觀察圖片，看清楚圖片展示的內(nèi)容，三張圖片展示了三個體育項目，跑步、鉛球和跳遠(yuǎn)，寫作時，應(yīng)使用形象、直觀的語言，詳細(xì)介紹圖片中的內(nèi)容，然后組織語言，串聯(lián)成文。文章可以分兩段，第一段介紹圖片內(nèi)容，第二段談?wù)撟约旱南敕āｎ}目中有詞匯的提示，寫作時應(yīng)注意使用。通過分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時，根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要確定應(yīng)使用的時態(tài)。注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不能寫漢語式的英語，而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，寫完整的句子?？梢院唵尉浣Y(jié)構(gòu)為主，穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，以使文意連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文的描述符合圖片中的內(nèi)容，敘述非常詳細(xì)，并對圖片展開了合理的想象，使文章的內(nèi)容更加豐富。第二段中發(fā)表了自己的感想，升華了文章的主題。其次短文中句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，語法規(guī)范，語言得體。短文以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，正確使用了謂語動詞的形式。句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了賓語從句、狀語從句、定語從句等復(fù)合句，提升了文章檔次和水平，整篇文章表達(dá)流暢。短文中使用了較豐富的句型和短語，如They pete for the first and cheer for the winner.、The student who jumps farthest must share the experience with his classmates.、Though the ball is very heavy, they throw balls again and again until they are satisfied with the result.、I think exercising is very useful to them.、Second, if they do sports every day, they will be healthier than 。14．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達(dá)隨著黃石“創(chuàng)建文明城市活動”（簡稱“創(chuàng)文活動”）（“civilized city” campaign）的開展許多學(xué)校的師生走上街頭清理垃圾、小廣告,撿拾綠化帶中的垃圾,倡導(dǎo)文明出行,以飽滿熱情共赴“文明之約”,請你就此寫一篇短文談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?nèi)容包括:,談?wù)勎沂小皠?chuàng)文活動”前后的情況（過去如何,現(xiàn)在如何）“創(chuàng)文活動”出力提兩點(diǎn)建議。作文要求::不得在作中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實名稱和學(xué)生的真實姓名.,記數(shù)80個左右。作文開頭已經(jīng)給出,不計入總詞數(shù).Our city has been on a “civilized city” campaign for over half a year. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Our city has been on a “civilized city” campaign for over half a year. And it has changed a lot. In the past, lots of rubbish could be seen around us. Thanks to the campaign, the streets look much cleaner now. What’s more, there used to be many people breaking the traffic rules. But now we can find more policemen in the streets who warn people to obey traffic rules and the traffic is no longer in a mess. As students we are supposed to follow the traffic rules strictly. Besides we can serve as volunteers to help clean the city. With everybody behaving well, our city will surely bee a civilized city. 【解析】這是一篇關(guān)于創(chuàng)建文明城市活動，要求談?wù)勛约旱目捶?。動筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。15．（山東中考模擬）書面表達(dá)年濟(jì)南市入選全國文明城市。為鞏固文明城市創(chuàng)建成果，共建美好濟(jì)南，濟(jì)南市團(tuán)委正在開展“學(xué)雷鋒、講文明、樹新風(fēng)”的活動，作為一名中學(xué)生，我們平時應(yīng)該從以下幾個方面來規(guī)范自己的言行舉止。請根據(jù)下列提示，寫一篇短文。倡導(dǎo)低碳騎自行車或步行上學(xué)，注意節(jié)約……保護(hù)環(huán)境愛護(hù)花草，不亂扔垃圾…… 禮貌待人常說“謝謝”、“ 對不起”、“ 請”等禮貌語言……幫助他人助人為樂，積極參加志愿者活動……要求： 。，自由發(fā)揮的內(nèi)容必須圍繞主題。、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life. 【答案】In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life. should choose to live a lowcarbon life. We’d better go to school by bike or on foot. When we are shopping. we can use baskets or cloth bags instead of plastic bags. We should also pay attention to saving. We must say NO to waste. We shouldn’t buy anything we don’t need.Second，it’s our duty to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw litter or rubbish about and we should take care of trees and flowers.Third，it’s necessary for us to show good manners to others/ be polite to others. We need to say polite words such as“Thank You. I’m sorry and Please” as often as possible.Finally, we should devote ourselves to helping others. We should learn from Lei Feng and be willing to help others. It’s important for us to take part in voluntary work.We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!【解析】本文是一篇給材料作文。為使?jié)鲜腥脒x全國文明城市，鞏固文明城市創(chuàng)建成果，共建美好濟(jì)南，濟(jì)南市團(tuán)委開展“學(xué)雷鋒、講文明、樹新風(fēng)”的活動，作為一名中學(xué)生，我們平時應(yīng)該規(guī)范自己的言行舉止。要求根據(jù)所給出的提示，寫一篇短文。根據(jù)所給材料可知時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱用第一人稱。本文給出的材料比較具體全面，考生需要用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，并可進(jìn)行適當(dāng)想象發(fā)揮。寫作中注意理順要點(diǎn)，防止漏寫，注意表達(dá)的條理性、連貫性；注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤；要使用自己有把握的句式、單詞，詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，避免句式單一。最后檢查所用時態(tài)、人稱是否符合要求；檢查段落是否完整，句子表達(dá)是否準(zhǔn)確，語法、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、移行、大小寫等方面是否有誤等。點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。16．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)難忘的初中三年學(xué)習(xí)生活已經(jīng)接近尾聲，你一定既有收獲又有不足，也有許多對自己未來的期待。請以My Unforgettable Middle School Life為題，根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖，寫一篇短文介紹自己難忘的校園生活并描述對未來的期盼。注意:。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。，并補(bǔ)充相關(guān)信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。語言連貫、通順。、校名等相關(guān)信息。How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself. 【答案】How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only f