【正文】 Relationship and Emotional Attitude （人際關(guān)系和情感態(tài)度）現(xiàn)在社會(huì)普遍對(duì)90后，00后有一些誤解， 認(rèn)為他們自私、無(wú)禮，所以不能很好地與 人溝通，那么，作為一名00后學(xué)生，你又是怎么看待這個(gè)問(wèn)題的呢? 請(qǐng)結(jié)合你自己和周?chē)瑢W(xué)的表現(xiàn)，分別列舉至少三條優(yōu)點(diǎn)和兩條不足之處進(jìn)行描述。要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮?！敬鸢浮緼s students born after 1990, we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble, we always give him or her a hand. We are also active. We like to do sports and go traveling. Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after school. Besides, we are imaginative and creative. We always try something new and do everything differently. On the other hand, we also have some disadvantages. Sometimes we can’t express our opinions in proper ways。 sometimes we are a little over confident. And many students have no brothers or sisters, so they may do everything for themselves. These problems may make us seem impolite, even we can’t municate with others well. So it’s the most important for us to learn how to get on well with others.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含題目中所提供的所有信息。靈活運(yùn)用各種句式，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各個(gè)要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確，簡(jiǎn)潔。最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。點(diǎn)睛：這篇文章使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如in trouble；do sports；On the other hand ；municate with等；When；Besides ；And ；So等的運(yùn)用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時(shí)語(yǔ)言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。14．（福建中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)91. 年3月9日，福建省教育廳在其網(wǎng)站發(fā)布《關(guān)于推遲中小學(xué)早上上學(xué)改革的相關(guān)舉措征求意見(jiàn)》，向公眾征求意見(jiàn)和建議。你所在的學(xué)校就此進(jìn)行了網(wǎng)上問(wèn)卷調(diào)查，其中有92%的同學(xué)表示贊成，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下圖提示，寫(xiě)一篇80字左右的短文，闡述你贊成的理由。參考詞匯：delay 要求：1. 必須包含所有提示信息，開(kāi)頭已給次，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范 3. 請(qǐng)勿在文中出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的信息。Delay starting time for school Our school had a survey about delaying school starting time online. I agreed that students should go to school a little late. Here aer my reasons.【答案】Our school had a survey about delaying school starting time online. I agreed that students should go to school a little late. Here are my reasons.First of all, delaying starting time at school makes sure that we can have enough sleep for a day. A good sleep will make us more active in class so that we study more efficiently. Secondly, it also offers us more time to have breakfast. Breakfast provides energy for the whole morning. No breakfast will do harm to our health and our study. What’s more, we don’t have to go to school in such a hurry, and we can also do some exercise to keep fit.All in all, delaying school starting time does good to students, We are looking forward to it.【解析】這是一篇圖表，要求闡述自己贊成推遲中小學(xué)早上上學(xué)的理由。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。15．（重慶市育才中學(xué)中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)。上周的一堂英語(yǔ)課上，老師就“二孩政策（ twochild policy ）”展開(kāi)了全班調(diào)查。請(qǐng)你以“ Do you want to have a brother or a sister?” 為題目用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，先匯總班上同學(xué)的觀點(diǎn)，再陳述自己的想法。觀點(diǎn)理由不想有弟妹，愿意當(dāng)獨(dú)生子女（21%）不愿意與別人分享父母的愛(ài)，父母會(huì)很辛苦，......想要弟妹，不愿意當(dāng)獨(dú)生子女（62%） 渴望有伴，有更多的親人，有人分享......不介意，都可以（17%） ……你的觀點(diǎn)……要求：文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和學(xué)校名稱，100字左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)。Do you want to have a brother or a sister?Do you want to have a brother or a sister?Last week,__________________________【答案】Do you want to have a brother or a sister?Do you want to have a brother or a sister?Last week,we had a discussion about twochild students think they don’t want to have a brother or a sister. Because they don’t want to share parents’ love with , parents can be tired because of two children. However,others think they want to have a brother or a sister. Because they are eager for a person to play can share their happiness and sorrow.17% of students think they can’t mind having a brother or a should be decided by their parents.I think it is good to have a brother or sister to grow up with, I can share everything with him or her.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇以“Do you want to have a brother or a sister?”為話題的調(diào)查報(bào)告，介紹同學(xué)們對(duì)“二孩政策（ twochild policy ）”不同的觀點(diǎn)，并闡述理由。動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)主題組織材料，確定寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、關(guān)鍵單詞等問(wèn)題。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)表達(dá)。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，做到語(yǔ)句通順。為了使意思更加連貫可適當(dāng)使用連接詞。還要注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)和想法。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。本文恰當(dāng)使用了had a discussion about，share parents’ love with，because of，play with, however，also, be good to等詞（組）。采用了豐富的句型，比如：原因狀語(yǔ)從句、I think賓語(yǔ)從句、被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)等多種句式交替運(yùn)用，使文章增色不少，這是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。16．（全國(guó)中考模擬）共享單車(chē)（shared bikes）在廈門(mén)投入使用以來(lái)，給人們帶來(lái)了諸多便利，受到人們的追捧，改變了人們的出行方式，但同時(shí)也遇到了一些挑戰(zhàn)，它是國(guó)民素質(zhì)的“照妖鏡”，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中信息的提示，給《21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)》寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于共享單車(chē)看法的稿件。社會(huì)現(xiàn)狀自從出現(xiàn)，飽受贊譽(yù)。諸多優(yōu)勢(shì)，出行方便，減少污染，負(fù)擔(dān)得起存在問(wèn)題你的觀點(diǎn)我認(rèn)為……（考生自擬，至少2點(diǎn)）注意事項(xiàng):，要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫?！澳愕挠^點(diǎn)”一欄用2―3句話展開(kāi)合理想象。作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。，文章的開(kāi)頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Public bicycles are being more and more popular in our daily life.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it39。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.But there are some problems too. Some people can39。t return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it39。s a way of living a green life.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們給《21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)》投稿，談一談自己對(duì)共享單車(chē)的看法。題目中利用表格的形式給我們列舉了短文的主要內(nèi)容，包括：共享單車(chē)的優(yōu)勢(shì)；存在的問(wèn)題以及你自己對(duì)這件事情的看法。前兩個(gè)內(nèi)容我們需要根據(jù)表格的提示用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)，而自己的觀點(diǎn)則需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，組織語(yǔ)言，并表達(dá)出來(lái)，要求至少兩點(diǎn)。通過(guò)審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第三人稱來(lái)敘述，短文可以分成兩段或者三段，一個(gè)內(nèi)容一段或前兩個(gè)內(nèi)容合到一段。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句和復(fù)合句交叉使用，改變文章句式節(jié)奏，使用不同的句式，避免單調(diào)。語(yǔ)句之間注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使整篇文章意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。用到的短語(yǔ)有reduce pollution 減少污染；What39。s more 此外，take up 占據(jù)，in our way擋我們的路，living a green life 過(guò)綠色生活?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息。短文分成了四段，第一段引出話題共享單車(chē)；第二段講述了共享單車(chē)的一些優(yōu)點(diǎn)；第三段介紹了一些問(wèn)題；最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。分段敘述使文章的結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，主題明確，有層次性。其次短文中使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以第三人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式富于變化。例如They can be seen everywhe