【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 參考詞匯:small, clever, ask it about weather, problems in study, remind you of important dates, convenient要求:1. 參考提示, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 語句涌順, 意思連貫, 書寫工整；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)個人真實信息；Good morning, everyone! Here, I’d like to introduce the music robot my father bought online. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Good morning, everyone! Here, I39。d like to introduce the music robot my father bought online. It is small, so you can even carry it in your backpack. After you connect it to the Internet and speak to it, it can provide different kinds of services. For example, you just say, Ding Dong, I want to listen to SHE39。s songs ,and it will play their songs immediately. You can also ask it about weather or even your problems in study. Besides, it can remind you of important dates and so on.I am so amazed at my music robot because it makes my life more enjoyable and convenient. I really love it!【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達主要描述爸爸最近給“我”買的音樂機器人。【詳解】這是篇材料作文。內(nèi)容上首先要介紹這個音樂機器人，其次表達為什么“我”要介紹這個機器人，也就是對它的喜愛。在寫作時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，這樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體。8．（山東中考模擬） 寫作假定你是李華，在一位名叫Tiger Mom的學(xué)生家長的博客上，你看到以下內(nèi)容。 請你根據(jù)博客內(nèi)容，寫作要點和要求，給這位家長回復(fù)。 I’m the mother of a fourteenyear –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ? 寫作要點：1. 表明自己的看法。 2. 陳述自己的理由。3. 提出至少2條建議?！敬鸢浮縃i,TigerMom,What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in idea is that it is not quiteright for you to do so.Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some allA students in school have turned out not to be as successful insociety as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.So I suggest that you take your friends39。 advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let herhave more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，對學(xué)生家長的博客進行回復(fù)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：My idea is that……，There are……，Some allA students in school have…….，The reason is……，So I suggest that……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭表明自己的看法，接下來陳述自己的理由，最后介紹自己的建議。此處turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。9．（北京中考模擬）“友善”是一種美德，它猶如陽光和雨露照耀并滋潤著美德的形成。同學(xué)們，請奉獻你的友善，為創(chuàng)建和諧社會做出貢獻。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“友善待人、快樂生活”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勆钪心銓λ颂峁┥埔鈳椭慕?jīng)歷。主要內(nèi)容包括:你對友善行為的認識和理解，你平時做哪些友善的事情，以及你這樣做的美好愿望。提示詞語:kind，politely, trouble, offer, proud，society提示問題:What do you think of showing kindness to others?How do you help them kindly in your daily life?What do you dream about being kind to them?It39。s our duty to show kindness to others around us. _________________________________________________【答案】It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should be kind to each other. When someone is in trouble, we’ll give a hand politely. In our munity, I try my best to help the neighbors and take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer. At school, I get on well with my classmates and help them with their lessons. I also send my books and clothes to the children who live in poor areas. I’m very proud I have made many friends by helping others in need.I believe our society will bee better and better if everyone shows kindness to each other.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談?wù)勆钪心銓λ颂峁┥埔鈳椭慕?jīng)歷。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如be kind to, each other, be in trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。10．（全國中考模擬）微笑是人類最美的語言。某英文報以“Smiles”為題,舉辦中學(xué)生征文活動。請根據(jù)下面的圖表信息,寫一篇英語短文。內(nèi)容包括：微笑的力量、你的微笑故亊以及故事給予你的啟示。提示：,條理清楚,行文連貫；； 數(shù)不少于80。【答案】SmilesA smile is the most beautiful language of human beings. A smile is like the sunshine in winter. It warms our hearts and helps us get on well with each other. A person who often smiles usually brings good luck. What’s more, smile can give us confidence.When I was young, I was very shy. I was afraid to speak in public. One day, I needed to give a speech in my English class. I was so frighten that I did badly at the beginning. But when I saw a big smile on my teacher’s face, I got more and more confident. Finally, I made it.Smiles are very helpful in our daily lives. We should often keep smiles on our faces, If we are happy, we smile. If we meet difficulties, we should smile, too. Let’s smile to life.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。要求以“Smiles”為題，根據(jù)圖表提示信息，寫一篇英語短文。內(nèi)容包括：微笑的力量、你的微笑故亊以及故事給予你的啟示。根據(jù)所給的提示材料可知文章時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱主要用第一人稱。在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。【點睛】首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當(dāng)運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；同時注意語句要通順，詞匯書寫無誤，不要出現(xiàn)語法錯誤。最后要細心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達緊張而又忙碌的初中生活即將結(jié)束，在裝載你收獲的行囊——成長記錄袋時還應(yīng)增添一份你自己滿意的答卷。請以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”為題寫一篇文章，記錄你過去三年中難忘的校園生活，并描述自己對將來學(xué)習(xí)生活的期望。文章應(yīng)包括以下要點：過去三年校園生活所得，真的很感激老師的幫助。，互相學(xué)習(xí)，彼此幫助。，盡自己最大的努力幫助有需要的人。4…….（補充12點所得）過去三年校園生活所失。3. ……（補充12點所失）今后的學(xué)習(xí)打算……（12句話描述自己未來的打算）要求：① 詞數(shù)100左右；② 短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；③ 文中需包括所有寫作要點，但不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)