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at home, they think parents should set examples to them. Fathers and mothers must spend less time on their mobile phones. And then they are able to spare time for their kids and even stay with them most of the time. Working closely with schools is another important way for parents to help them.As students, just as the saying goes:“Study must e first”. They should pay more attention on their studies. They ought to try their best to achieve a balance between play and studies.【解析】這是一篇話題作文。給出了一些要點(diǎn),并給出了作文的開(kāi)頭。我們只要用英語(yǔ)正確的把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái),并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)就行。動(dòng)筆前要真人閱讀材料,不要遺漏要點(diǎn),并適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。根據(jù)題目要求,短文是一篇議論文,時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱為第三人稱。寫作中要注意適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文緊密聯(lián)系。符合邏輯關(guān)系。高分句型【1】They think that their school may have class meetings to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet. 他們認(rèn)為他們的學(xué)校可以開(kāi)班會(huì),幫助他們認(rèn)識(shí)到互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的利與弊。動(dòng)詞不定式to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the 。高分句型【2】Also, good outschool activities should be held regularly in their school. 此外,學(xué)校應(yīng)該定期舉辦有益的校外活動(dòng)。此句是含有情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。其構(gòu)成為:情態(tài)動(dòng)詞+be+及物動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去分詞。高分句型【3】Working closely with schools is another important way for parents to help them. 與學(xué)校緊密合作是家長(zhǎng)幫助他們的另一重要途徑。動(dòng)名詞Working closely with schools作主語(yǔ),視作單數(shù),因此be動(dòng)詞用is。13.(北京中考模擬)根據(jù)中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫作。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語(yǔ)僅供選用。請(qǐng)不要寫出你的校名和姓名。假如你是李華,你們學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備組織學(xué)生本周五去中國(guó)科技博物館參觀。你打算邀請(qǐng)交換生Peter參加。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一封郵件,告訴他集合的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn),在那里可以做什么,以及參觀時(shí)需要準(zhǔn)備什么。提示詞語(yǔ): school gate, 8:00, invention, experiment, knowledge, notebook, food and drink提示問(wèn)題:When and where are you going to meet? What are you going to do there? What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?Dear Peter,How is it going? I am writing to invite you to visit China Science and Technology Museum with my I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit China Science and Technology Museum with my class. We will meet at the school gate at 8:00 . this Friday. Then we will go to China Science and Technology Museum together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only do some experiments but also watch some wonderful inventions. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You’d better take some food and drinks with you. I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本文是一篇給材料作文,要求就學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備組織學(xué)生本周五去中國(guó)科技博物館參觀的事情,寫一封郵件,邀請(qǐng)交換生Peter參加。要注意郵件的寫作格式,根據(jù)題目要求可判斷文章時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用一般將來(lái)時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱主要為第一人稱和第二人稱。寫作要點(diǎn)包括:活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、活動(dòng)內(nèi)容,以及參觀時(shí)需要準(zhǔn)備什么。在寫作的時(shí)候,注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。點(diǎn)睛:首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作,在寫作過(guò)程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無(wú)誤。14.(北京中考模擬)自信賦予人力量,帶給人快樂(lè)。擁有自信,人生處處是舞臺(tái),生活越來(lái)越精彩。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)你為??⒄Z(yǔ)園地“自信助我成長(zhǎng)”專欄寫一篇短文,談?wù)勛孕诺闹匾裕窒硪淮问鼓愀幼孕诺慕?jīng)歷,并說(shuō)說(shuō)我們?nèi)绾胃幼孕?。提示詞語(yǔ):powerful,happy,believe in,keep doing提示問(wèn)題:Why is it important to be confident?What experience made you more confident?How can we bee more confident?It39。s very important to be confident【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Selfconfidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have bee more and more confident.To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含表格中所提供的所有信息。靈活運(yùn)用各種句式,采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各個(gè)要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái),注意主次分明,詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確,簡(jiǎn)潔。最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫,有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。點(diǎn)睛:這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ),為文章增色不少,如at the beginning of; know about;make a speech等;When ;Although ;Then ;From then on,等的運(yùn)用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理;同時(shí)語(yǔ)言流暢,內(nèi)容完整,是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。15.(甘肅中考模擬)(年浙江紹興)書面表達(dá)?!癏ow can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論,為此你采訪了一些同學(xué)(結(jié)果見(jiàn)下表)。請(qǐng)據(jù)上經(jīng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文參與討論,并闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。同學(xué)主要觀點(diǎn)你的觀點(diǎn)努力學(xué)習(xí)尊重父母服務(wù)社會(huì)計(jì)劃未來(lái)……(至少兩條)注意:(1)短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié);(2)你的觀點(diǎn)至少兩條;(3)詞數(shù):80—100;(4)短文首句僅供選擇使用,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:尊重respect短文首句:I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.【答案】I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.【解析】試題分析:英語(yǔ)教育網(wǎng)站開(kāi)展主題為“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論,采訪了一些同學(xué)參與討論,寫出他們的觀點(diǎn)及自己的觀點(diǎn)。因?yàn)槭菙⑹鐾瑢W(xué)的現(xiàn)在的觀點(diǎn),所以句子應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),敘述同學(xué)的觀點(diǎn)用第三人稱,敘述自己的觀點(diǎn)用第一人稱。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn),所寫的句子應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法,不能是漢語(yǔ)式的句子,要使用一些高級(jí)詞匯及句式。寫作亮點(diǎn):短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式,如:do a survey about sth關(guān)于某事做調(diào)查;respect their parents,尊敬他們的父母;look after照顧;make a good plan for sth為某事做一個(gè)好的計(jì)劃;make some good friends交一些好朋友;keep healthy保持健康。用了賓語(yǔ)從句,如:Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for ,如:Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful ,也是提分的經(jīng)典句子。考點(diǎn):材料作文。16.(北京中考模擬)假如你叫李華,最近你班里的美國(guó)交換生Lucy想要感受中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)文化。周末你和父母商議后,打算邀請(qǐng)她去老舍茶館。你通過(guò)微信告知她:要去哪,在那要做什么以及何時(shí)何地見(jiàn)面。提示詞語(yǔ):Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate提示問(wèn)題:Where are you going?What will you do there?When and where will you meet?【答案】