【正文】 nd happiness. The bitter is that there are always exams, and sometimes I can’t do well. Every time I get the low mark, I will be afraid of disappointing my parents. The happy thing is that I make many friends here. We play and study together. They are just like the brothers and sisters to me. This is the process of growing up, which mix pain and happiness. I am so lucky to have these friends in my life, they mean so much to me.【解析】 這是一篇要求介紹自己和他人、社會(huì)或自然 之間的故事，并談?wù)勛约旱捏w驗(yàn)或感受。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。英語作文要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，注意提供的觀點(diǎn)、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文，要忠實(shí)于材料，不必?cái)U(kuò)展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯(cuò)句。15．（北京中考模擬）假如你叫李華，最近你班里的美國(guó)交換生Lucy想要感受中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)文化。周末你和父母商議后，打算邀請(qǐng)她去老舍茶館。你通過微信告知她：要去哪，在那要做什么以及何時(shí)何地見面。提示詞語：Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate提示問題：Where are you going?What will you do there?When and where will you meet?【答案】Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Let’s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，我通過微信告訴Lucy要去哪，在那里要做什么以及何時(shí)何地見面。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I want to……，We are going to……，We can……，Let’s meet at……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了我想要邀請(qǐng)你去老舍茶館，接下來介紹我們?nèi)ツ抢镒鍪裁矗詈笾赋鑫覀円诤螘r(shí)何地見面。此處want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do sth, at the gate of等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。16．（山西中考模擬）書面表達(dá)年5月18－19日，習(xí)近平總書記在全國(guó)生態(tài)環(huán)境保護(hù)大會(huì)中，指出要加快構(gòu)建生態(tài)文明體系，要全面推動(dòng)綠色發(fā)展。作為一名鄂州籍的中學(xué)生，你的家鄉(xiāng)的環(huán)境怎么樣？發(fā)生了什么樣的變化？要推動(dòng)鄂州的綠色發(fā)展，作為一名中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該做些什么？請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上三個(gè)內(nèi)容，寫一篇80—100詞的作文，作文中不要出現(xiàn)自己的學(xué)校和個(gè)人姓名?！敬鸢浮緼s we all know, China has been developing extremely fast in different aspects of our life. There are also many places being more and more morden in Ezhou. Our hometown is one of those places which have changed a lot. The followings are the changes that I can show all of you .First of all, The roads in our hometown have been broadened and they are more safer than ever before,which I think is the one of the most meaningful things for our local people. What39。s more ,more and more new buldings have been building to be used for trading with but not the least,people in our hometown are more helpful .They are all willing to help with each other and try their best to make the world more fortble to live in.What I think the most great change is the attitude that we hold .As long as all of us have a right attitude to our life ,our society will be more beautiful and great.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如as we all know，in different aspects of our life，more and more morden，a lot，all of you，first of all，in our hometown，one of the most meaningful things，what39。s more，help with each other，live in，as long as等。而First of all, The roads in our hometown have been broadened and they are more safer than ever before, which I think is the one of the most meaningful things for our local people./ What’s more, it costs little to use them. / As long as all of us have a right attitude to our life ,our society will be more beautiful and ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。17．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)在英語課上，同學(xué)們就自己喜歡的旅游方式展開了討論。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文，匯報(bào)討論結(jié)果，并談?wù)勛约旱南敕?。團(tuán)隊(duì)旅游◆有導(dǎo)游，不會(huì)迷路；◆不必自己找食宿◆結(jié)識(shí)朋友，互相幫助個(gè)人旅游◆自由安排時(shí)間；◆選擇自己喜歡的旅游景點(diǎn)；◆學(xué)會(huì)照顧自己你的想法……注意事項(xiàng)：1．文章必須包括表中全部?jī)?nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；2．想法至少在兩句以上；3．詞數(shù)90左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：團(tuán)隊(duì)旅游travel with a group 個(gè)人旅游travel aloneRecently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．With a guide39。s help, they won39。t get lost and they don39。t need to look for hotels or restaurants by themselves．Besides, they can make friends and help each other while travelling．However, other students prefer to travel alone． That39。s because they can arrange their time freely and choose to visit their favourite sights．What39。s more, it39。s a chance for them to learn to look afterthemselves．For me, I39。d like to travel alone．I want to spend enough time visiting the places I like． In this way, I can enjoy my vacation better．【解析】這是一篇圖表，要求談?wù)勛约簩?duì)不同的旅游方式的看法。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。18．（湖南長(zhǎng)郡中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)76,近年來，科技的進(jìn)步正在逐步影響著人們的日常生活。年5月，來39。自一帶一 路”沿線的20國(guó)青年評(píng)選出了中國(guó)的“新四大發(fā)明”:高鐵、支付寶、共享單車和網(wǎng)購(gòu)。 假如你是李華，你的朋友Lisa是英國(guó)的一名初中生，她對(duì)我們的“新四大發(fā)明”很感 興趣。請(qǐng)你給她寫一封電子郵件，具體內(nèi)容如下： ，將展出學(xué)生制作的各類材質(zhì)的小模型。注意:，開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù) ，使行文流暢。參考詞匯:共享單車:shared bikes Dear Lisa,I’m glad to hear that you’re so interested in our “Four New”Inventions”______________________YoursLi Hua【答案】Dear Lisa,I’m glad to hear that you’re so interested in our “Four New Inventions” Let me tell you about are highspeed railways,electronic payments,shared bicycles and online travel by highspeed are very use electronic payments when we use online shopping,When we want to go somewhere by bike,we use shared use our mobile phone to unlock the shared is convenient and is no pollution and oil can also keep healthy when we ride will be the Science Festival in our will show all kinds of models that students hope you will e to visit them.YoursLi Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示來介紹中國(guó)的新四大發(fā)明，題目中給出了具體的寫作的內(nèi)容，我們應(yīng)將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達(dá)出來。首先應(yīng)注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，并注意表達(dá)的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確