【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears.I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇話題作文?！驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)題干““苔花如米小，也學(xué)牡丹開?！蔽覀兇蠖鄶?shù)人雖微不足道，但也能有所作為。請以“One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of”為題用英語寫一篇短文，描述你曾做過的引以自豪的一件事情?！币罂芍?，本文用一般過去時，人稱用第一人稱。英語作文一般分為三個部分：第一部分：開篇點題——我將介紹曾做過的引以自豪的一件事情。第二部分：文章主體——具體介紹這件事情的始末。根據(jù)事情發(fā)展順序，從先到后交代事情的經(jīng)過，我做了什么，為什么引以為傲。這些內(nèi)容用一般過去時，注意動詞的過去式變形。第三部分：總結(jié)全文——我為自己感到驕傲。10．（曲靖市馬龍區(qū)通泉中學(xué)中考模擬）近年來，習(xí)近平主席提出了實現(xiàn)中華民族偉大復(fù)興的“中國夢”。學(xué)校開展了“夢想少年”的主題演講活動，假如你是張明，請根據(jù)以下提供的要點，以“I39。m a Dream Teenager”為題，寫一篇80－100詞的短文，向大家推介自己。（可聯(lián)系實際，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）注意：1．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名。提示詞語： good at ..with ...rules up popular with... to do something【答案】I39。m a Dream Teenager Good morning， dear teachers and friends， I am Zhang Ming． It39。s great honor for me to make a speech here． As a fifteenyearold boy， my dream is to be a good teacher． To make my dream e true， I study hard at school and I am good at all my subjects． Also， I am an outgoing and healthy boy who likes football very much， and I really enjoy sports． At school， I always follow the school rules， so I am popular with my classmates and teachers． On weekends， I39。d like to help people． For example， I volunteer to visit sick children in the hospital and cheer them up．In a word， I believe that the man who holds his dream will be able to achieve his dream one day． That39。s all． Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。學(xué)校開展“夢想少年”的主題演講活動，假如你是張明，要求根據(jù)圖表提示內(nèi)容，以“I39。m a Dream Teenager”為題，寫一篇短文，向大家推介自己。根據(jù)所給出的材料提示可知文章時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一、第三人稱。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。在寫作過程中，要將圖表內(nèi)提示信息用英語正確的表達(dá)出來，要涵蓋圖表中提到的所有要點，注意理順要點，防止漏寫。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)時間過得飛快，似乎幾個月前才進(jìn)入初三，現(xiàn)在中考卻近在眼前。請以“Are We Ready for the Challenge?”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容要點如下：1．你發(fā)現(xiàn)老師現(xiàn)在上課語速很快。由于有太多的作業(yè)和考試，學(xué)生沒有足夠的時間來進(jìn)行課外活動；2．有的同學(xué)以前學(xué)習(xí)不太努力，但現(xiàn)在他們已經(jīng)意識到這次考試的重要性，并且全身心投入到學(xué)習(xí)中去；3．你在這最后一個月里的打算和安排……注意：1．短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，要求語句通順、意思連貫；2．第3要點的內(nèi)容須用2至3句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3．詞數(shù)90左右，短文的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Are We Ready for the Challenge?How time flies! It seemed that we began our Grade Three only a few months ago, but the Senior High School Entrance Examination is ing soon!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I39。m sure we will do well in the ing exam if we try our best!【答案】Are We Ready for the Challenge?How time flies! It seemed that we began our Grade Three only a few months ago, but the Senior High School Entrance Examination is ing soon! I find the teachers speak more quickly than usual in class now, and we have so much homework and so many exams that we do not have enough time for any afterschool activities．Some students did not study hard enough before, but now they have realized the importance of the exam and are putting all their effort into study．During the last month, I am going to listen carefully in class and pay more attention to details, and it is also important for us to keep a balance between study and rest．I39。m sure we will do well in the ing exam if we try our best!【解析】本文屬于材料作文，要表達(dá)如今的學(xué)習(xí)和以前的區(qū)別以及你的計劃和打算。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容?！玖咙c說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如usual，so much，afterschool activities，the importance of，put ones effort into，pay attention to，it is adj for sb to do。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。點睛：寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。12．（全國中考模擬）假如你是Ivy，你們學(xué)校正在開展“愛心傳遞，從我做起”主題教育活動。請你根據(jù)所列提示問題談?wù)勀銓@個活動的認(rèn)識，用英語寫一篇短文給某英文網(wǎng)站投稿。提示問題：（1） Why do you show your kindness to others? （At least one reason）（2） What do you usually do when someone needs help? （At least two examples）（3） How do you feel?寫作要求：（1） 表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；（2） 必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； （3） 詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；（4） 不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。At my school, we are talking about what we can do to give hands to others in trouble.