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pend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it39。s important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It39。s good for us to do some sports.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文,本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點,動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點,然后圍繞要點適當(dāng)發(fā)揮.寫作中,應(yīng)注意描述的全面性,盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上;結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容,可知本文主要是第三人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進行敘述.語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣.適當(dāng)使用連詞,做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系.【點睛】這篇短文用到了一些好的句型:They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go 。8.(江蘇中考模擬)三年的初中生活即將結(jié)束,你一定對初中生活留下了很多美好的回憶。下周五你班要召開畢業(yè)班會,請根據(jù)下面的英文提示,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,以“I remember ”為題,寫一篇90詞左右的短文,分享你校園生活中的一次活動或經(jīng)歷。要點如下:1. What’s the event? 2. When and where did it happen? 3. How did you feel at that moment?4. How has the event changed your life? 注意:,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。,不計入總詞數(shù)。、校名等相關(guān)信息。I remember How time flies! My junior school life is ing to an end. 【答案】I rememberHow time flies, my junior school life is ing to an end. I had a lot of memories during the three years’ study. What impressed me most is the school charity sale. When I was in Grade Eight, our school planned to hold a charity sale to help the children in poor areas. We prepared well for the activity. We made some postcards, bookmarks, and even some kites in our spare time.Finally, the big day came. The charity sale was held on our playground. We felt nervous at first, then our teachers came to join us. They encouraged us and gave us some help, so we became happy and excited. Everything went well. Our class got nearly 800 yuan in the end. Then we sent the money to Project Hope to help those poor children. It was a wonderful and unforgettable experience and I’ve learned a lot from the activity. If everyone gives a helping hand to those in need, the world will be much better.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如e to an end,plan to do,a lot of,hold a charity sale,prepare for,in our spare time,hold on,at first,e to join us,give us some help,in the end,a lot,in need等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)It was a wonderful and unforgettable experience and I’ve learned a lot from the activity./ We felt nervous at first, then our teachers came to join I was in Grade Eight, our school planned to hold a charity sale to help the children in poor areas./ They encouraged us and gave us some help, so we became happy and excited./ If everyone gives a helping hand to those in need, the world will be much ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達多樣化,是本文的亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章表達更有邏輯性,也更富有條理?!军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。9.(江蘇中考模擬)書面表達。,你最近認(rèn)識的美國筆友David給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件,向了解你進初三以來在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面的一些變化、收獲和感受。請根據(jù)下面的提示及你的實際寫封回信。 提示:less free time,much homework,more pressure,get into a good high schoolmore exercise,lose weight join the English Comer,improve English a lotcolorful and meaningful,learn more knowledge注意:1)詞數(shù)80左右,開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);2)回復(fù)須包括所有藥店,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使全文連貫、通順;3)文中不得提及真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。Dear David,Thank you so much for your mail. I39。m happy to tell you about how my life has changed recently. 【答案】Dear David,Thank you so much for your mail. I39。m happy to tell you about how my life has changed recently. In the past , I had a lot of free time. In my free time , I used to take more exercise to lose weight. My life has changed a lot since I got into a good high school. I have more pressure . I have much homework to do every day . I have less free time to do leisure activities. In my spare time , I join in the English corner to practice my spoken English. This improves my English a lot . I learn more knowledge . My life is busy but it is colorful and meaningful.Best wishes,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文是一篇材料作文?!驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)題干“假如你是李華,你最近認(rèn)識的美國筆友David給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件,向了解你進初三以來在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面的一些變化、收獲和感受?!币罂芍?,本文用現(xiàn)在完成時、一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時,人稱是第一人稱。英語作文一般分為三個部分:第一部分:開篇點題——介紹我進初三以來在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面的一些變化、收獲和感受。第二部分:文章主體——根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,依次介紹我進初三以來在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面的一些變化、收獲和感受。這里要分為三個小節(jié):小節(jié)1:過去我的學(xué)習(xí)和生活是什么樣的——有肯多課余時間做自己喜歡的事情。用一般過去時。小節(jié)2:進初三以來在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面發(fā)生了變化。用現(xiàn)在完成時。小節(jié)3:介紹現(xiàn)在的生活狀態(tài)——忙碌的學(xué)習(xí)。用一般現(xiàn)在時。第三部分:總結(jié)全文——我的生活很忙但是很有意義。10.(江蘇中考模擬)書面表達隨著中國國際地位的日益提高,越來越多的外國友人開始關(guān)注中國。假定你是李明,你最近認(rèn)識的澳大利亞筆友David給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件,想更多地了解中國。請認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件,并根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容及你的了解用英語回復(fù)。To: Li Ming@ 163. From: David@ bigpond. Dear Li Ming,How are you? Is everything going smoothly? It39。s February. It39。s very hot in Australia nowand I39。m having a long summer vacation. I39。m making a trip plan to China these days. Would youpl