【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 3。吉林省實(shí)驗(yàn)中考模擬）B）初中生活馬上就要結(jié)束了,三年的初中生活一定給你留下了很多揮之不去的回憶。請你給大家講一個(gè)最值得你回憶的故事。包括時(shí)間、人物、事情經(jīng)過和事后你的感想。要求：。，過渡自然，語法正確，富有邏輯性。3. 注意時(shí)態(tài)的正確使用，80100詞。提示詞語: three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve bee interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to bee one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.【解析】【分析】本文一篇話題作文?！驹斀狻坑⒄Z作文一般分為三個(gè)部分：第一部分：交代寫作目的：即將畢業(yè)，想和大家分享這三年的經(jīng)歷。第二部分：具體介紹三年中最難忘的經(jīng)歷：別人幫助我的經(jīng)歷。第三部分：總結(jié)全文。我愿意幫助別人。9．（浙江中考模擬） 為響應(yīng)我市全面創(chuàng)建國家文明城市的號召，麗水市中小學(xué)開展“文明城市，健康生活”為主題的英語征文活動(dòng)。請你以“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”為題，根據(jù)表格中的圖片及文字提示，簡要描述并適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)，寫一篇英語短文。Subject The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeWays of doing ride bikes, reduce air pollution, throw rubbish into the bins, keep the city clean, plant more trees,…Your opinion……（至少2條）注意：（1）詞數(shù)80100左右，短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；（2）文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己的姓名。The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeAs a citizen of Lishui, it’s our duty to____________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeAs a citizen of Lishui, it’s our duty to help build a civilized city so that we can live a healthy life. We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles. It’s better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin. In this way, we can keep our city clean. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the natural environment.In my opinion, I’ll try my best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful. Firstly, I can save water by taking shorter showers. Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room. In a word, everyone can do something to make a difference.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。話題是“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”；并給了一些提示和注意事項(xiàng)：（1）詞數(shù)80100左右，短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；（2）文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己的姓名。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，要用上提示詞，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實(shí)，最后寫出你的觀點(diǎn)。注意主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。注意單詞拼寫，不要犯單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤，字?jǐn)?shù)要符合要求?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫；語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，沒有單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤，字?jǐn)?shù)符合題目要求。10．（浙江中考模擬）書面表達(dá)A small thing提示：請根據(jù)所給題目“A small thing”寫一篇英語短文，記敘一件你經(jīng)歷過的小事。要求：，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔，詞數(shù)100左右；2. 文中不得使用你的真實(shí)姓名，校名，否則以零分計(jì)。 【答案】A small thingIt was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a bike. I was so happy at first. However, I fell down on the ground. I cried loudly and wanted to gives up. My father smiled and said we should be a person who never give up. He encouraged me to stand up and continue. After one hour, I could ride the bike without the help of my father. This is one small thing that I will never forget. It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up. 【解析】【詳解】本文要記述自己經(jīng)歷過的一件小事, 在時(shí)態(tài)上用一般過去時(shí)。本篇文章,首先開篇點(diǎn)題,指出事情發(fā)生的時(shí)間及所經(jīng)歷的事件。It was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a ，詞語at first，However,…. After one hour,的使用使整篇文章渾然一體。最后一段是從這件小事中得出的感悟，It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up. 對這件小事進(jìn)行了總結(jié)，更使文章在思想上得到了升華。文章時(shí)態(tài)使用正確，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，事件本身思路清晰，是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章?！军c(diǎn)睛】認(rèn)真審題，看清題目要求，在描述事件時(shí)，要注意清晰表達(dá)事情發(fā)生的開端，內(nèi)容及結(jié)尾。必要時(shí)要適當(dāng)使用連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢，文章最后注意對整個(gè)故事進(jìn)行總結(jié)，最好能夠從故事中得出自己的感悟，在敘述故事的同時(shí)使文章具有思想性。寫完文章后注意檢查有誤單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤，語法使用錯(cuò)誤，字?jǐn)?shù)是否達(dá)到要求。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)無錫被評為內(nèi)地最宜居城市。假設(shè)你班對此進(jìn)行了一次班級討論，請你根據(jù)討論主題并結(jié)合所給信息，以“Be a Beautiful City”為題寫一份發(fā)言稿，號召廣大學(xué)生為建設(shè)美好城市作貢獻(xiàn)。內(nèi)容提示如下：1．政府修建了很多新路、大橋，甚至還有地鐵；2．新添了很多露天開放公園，每到周末和節(jié)假日，人們常常去那里野餐，游玩；3．私家車越來越多，停車已成了大問題；4．城市變化有利有弊；5．你的希望：……注意事項(xiàng)：1．發(fā)言稿須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順、意思連貫；2．第5個(gè)要點(diǎn)須用2至3句話展開合理想象。作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3．詞數(shù)90左右，發(fā)言稿的開頭已在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4．發(fā)言稿內(nèi)容必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上。Be a Beautiful CityThere have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years．________________________________________________________________________________________________