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有選擇的背誦一些范文,這樣應考時就會有法可依。7.(山東中考模擬)書面表達今天早上你目睹了一起事件(下圖),你想以Mother Stops Him為題寫一篇短文,向你校英語報社投稿。短文內(nèi)容如下:1. 描述亊件。2. 發(fā)表你的想法。要求:,以使行文連貫。 、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。3. 100個詞匯左右。參考詞匯:lift…up扶起, knock…down撞倒,trust信任Mother Stops Him_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】This morning, my mother took me to school. On the way, I saw a car knock an old man down and the car ran away. The old woman fell to the ground and could not move. I saw this situation and immediately went over to help the old man lift up, but my mother stopped me saying, Don39。t lift him up, or he 39。ll say you hit him. But I think helping others is what we should do. That old woman will certainly appreciate me, so I trust that as long as everyone gives a little love, the world will bee a better place.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇看圖作文,所給材料較為詳細,邏輯清楚,我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。根據(jù)要點內(nèi)容可知短語主要應用一般過去時態(tài),主要是第一人稱,句型以簡單句為主。寫作時要靈活運用,注意主謂一致,單詞拼寫正確。【點睛】本文在寫作中使用了很多固定句式,如:The old woman fell to the ground and could not move. I saw this situation and immediately went over to help the old man lift up。所以在學習中,我們應注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.8.(廣東中考模擬)近年來,我國校園欺凌事件屢有發(fā)生,而遭受校園欺凌的學生容易情緒抑郁、焦慮,不 敢去學校,甚至會出現(xiàn)心理問題等嚴重后果。 請以 “My opinions about school bullying” 為題, 寫一篇英語短文,談?wù)勀愕目捶?。提示?. What do you think of school bullying?2. What will you do if you are bullied or you see somebody else being bullied?要求:1. 所給提示信息應全部包括,可適當發(fā)揮,以 使行文連貫;2. 80詞以上。參考詞匯:心理問題mental health problems . My opinions about school bullying________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My opinions about school bullyingSchool bullying is a big problem that has got more and more attention in society. Being bullied can make students feel scared or upset. Some students are afraid of going to school. School bullying can even lead to more serious mental health problems. So how should we stop school bullying?If I see somebody being bullied or I am bullied, I will tell the teachers or my parents at once. It is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文,談?wù)勀銓π@欺凌的看法。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達符合英語習慣,準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致,特別使用一些亮點詞句,如make sb do, be afraid of, lead to, mental health problem, at once, on one’s own, it is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own中it作形式主語以及“比較級and比較級”。增強邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,用詞準確,句子通順,行文連貫。【點睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起:認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求,抓住要點,詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱,我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的,而具體的內(nèi)容要求學生自己發(fā)揮,因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒,就可以動筆寫作了,在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞,使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9.(安徽中考模擬)書面表達某英文報社組織了題為“我喜歡的英語諺語”征文活動,你有意參加。請從下面兩句諺語中任選一句作為標題寫一篇英語作文,內(nèi)容須包括:1. 該諺語的含義;2. 體現(xiàn)該諺語含義的個人經(jīng)歷。a) A friend in need is a friend indeed.b) Where there’s a will, there’s a way.參考詞匯:諺語 proverb____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A Friend in Need is a Friend IndeedA life without friends is a life without sunshine! Friends try their best to help you without thinking of what they can get from it.Once I doubted the usefulness of study, losing my interests and direction, even confidence. Finally, I decided to stop studying. After knowing the news, my friend encouraged me patiently. She insisted on persuading me until I promised to give up this thought.Later, I made up my mind to study hard so as to enter my dream university.Many people will be in and out of your life, but only true friends will leave footprints in your hear. True friends always e to you when you need help.【解析】【分析】這是命題作文。二選一,第一個是“患難見真情”,第二個是“有志者事競成”。【詳解】標題都是以諺語的形式出現(xiàn),所以考生第一步做的是理解這兩個言語的意思,選擇自己較有把握的。在選擇標題之后,根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容提示,進行寫作。寫作時,先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型,在能力范圍之內(nèi),選擇句式時要賦予變化,這樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞,把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體10.(安徽中考模擬)書面表達李華所在的國際學校正在開展“My Favourite Traditional Festival”交流活動,假定你是李華,請你向來自不同國家的同學介紹中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——端午節(jié),內(nèi)容包括:1. 今年慶祝時間(6月18日)2. 節(jié)日由來:紀念(be in memory of)屈原3. 吃粽子,賽龍舟,掛菖蒲和艾草(calamus and Ay Tsao)……4. 歡迎大家一起體驗這個傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日注意:1. 詞數(shù)80~100;,以使行文連貫;;,不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear fellows, The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】Dear fellows, The Dragon Boat Festival, also