【正文】 teachers some flowers to show our thanks and respect. We thank them for helping us when we are in will put up the thanknotes on the that we put on performances for our teachers.What do you usually do to thank your teachers? I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹以“感恩老師”為主題的活動。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Our school will hold……，On the day we will……，We thank them for……，I am……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我們學校舉行了一個感恩老師的活動，接下來介紹我們的活動內(nèi)容，最后表達我的感觸。此處give sth to sb, thank sb for doing sth, be in trouble, put up, put on, look forward to等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。15．（四川成都外國語學校中考模擬）Writing.In the past, most Chinese families have got one child in them. But recently, the government has relaxed the family planning policy, which means each couple are allowed to have two children. Would you like to have a brother or a sister who grows up together with you?Now please write a passage of about 80120 words to introduce your opinion. The following points should be included:1. Is it necessary for a family to have more than one child? Give at least two reasons for it.2. What’s the situation in your family? Are you the only child or not? List what makes you happy and unhappy.3. Give at least two suggestions to the families with two children.【答案】First of all, twochild policy is the gift for some only some families. maybe the parents are only child and they can also have only child. Put aside the loneliness of their child, when their child grows up and they grow older, their child may marry with an only child girl accidentally, the burden on their child and his wife is unimaginable heavy. Their child and his wife have to take care of two old couples.In my family ,my parents have a only child. I also have some happy can enjoy some delicious food by myself. But I have no playmate in my family. Sometimes. I may feel lonely.If parents have two children, they can share the burden of taking care of their parents. It would be much better. Also, twochild policy can guarantee the number of Chinese population.【解析】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如first of all，grow up，grow older，marry with，burden on，have to do， take care of，by oneself，have no playmate，the number of等。而For some families. maybe the parents are only child and they can also have only child. / when their child grows up and they grow older, their child may marry with an only child girl accidentally,/ It would be much ，豐富了習作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。16．（北京中考模擬）作為初三畢業(yè)生，你們首次參加了“英語聽說機考”（the English Listening and Speaking Online Test）。你應(yīng)邀為初一初二的學弟學妹們做聽說機考的經(jīng)驗介紹。請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勀銓τ⒄Z聽說機考有什么認識，在考試中需要做什么以及你想對他們提出哪些建議。提示詞語：necessary, answer questions, take notes, retell, read a passage aloud提示問題： What do you think of theEnglish Listening and Speaking Online Test? What do they need to do in the test?What suggestions do you want to give them?Good morning, everybody. I’m glad that I can share something about theEnglish Listening and Speaking Online Test with you.Thanks for listening!【答案】Good morning, everybody. I’m glad that I can share something aboutthe English Listening amp。 Speaking Online Test with you. I think it is necessary for us to take the listening and speaking test. In the test, you need to listen and choose the best answer and you will listen and answer the questions. Next, you’ll listen and take notes and then you will listen and retell the passage according to the notes. Finally, you’ll read a passage aloud. If you want to improve your listening and speaking, you should listen more and read aloud. At the same time, you’d better pay more attention to your pronunciation. What’s more, you can practice retelling. It is a good idea to retell the passage that you’ve just learnt. Practice makes perfect. Wish you success. Thank you for listening.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，為初一初二的學弟學妹們做聽說機考的經(jīng)驗介紹。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，人稱為第一，二人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I’m glad that……，I think……，If you want to……，you’d better……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我對英語聽說機考的認識，接下來介紹你們在考試中需要做什么，最后給出一些建議。此處share sth with sb, need to do sth, take notes, want to do sth, at the same time, pay attention to等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。17．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達同學們，三年的初中生活就要結(jié)束了，在我們的成長過程中，既有快樂，也有煩惱。請用英文寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：1．你在學?；蚣依镌?jīng)遇到的最大問題或煩惱；2．你解決問題或煩惱的過程；3．你的感想。要求： 1．詞數(shù)80～100，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名與人名。My middle school life is ing to an end .During the three years， ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My middle school life is ing to an end. During the three years，not only did I have happy time, but I had kinds of problems. My biggest problem was too much homework. Homework seemed endless for me. It made me stay up late and feel very tired every day，but I knew the teachers were expecting us to do better，even the best in my lessons.How can I deal with the problem？On the one hand，I concentrated more on my study in class. On the other hand，I did the homework as quickly as possible instead of being slow or absent minded. As a result，I spent less time on homework，and I wasn39。t frustrated any more.As we all know，practice makes perfect. Complaining or waiting can39。t help. Instead we should be active to face our problems.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞三年的初中生活展開敘述，寫作前首先要確定三年中遇到的最大問題或煩惱是什么，一件事情即可，然后圍繞這件事情展開敘述，三個寫作要點要面