【正文】 nts wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of afterclasses on weekends. I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.Less pressure makes better life. Thank you.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們針對(duì)現(xiàn)在同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象，以Less Pressure Makes Life Better為題，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ屯瑢W(xué)們分享一下自己的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。審題可知，文章中應(yīng)主要包括以下幾個(gè)內(nèi)容：首先介紹同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力這種現(xiàn)象；然后講述自己過(guò)去曾面對(duì)的壓力；最后介紹自己如何成功緩解壓力。題目中只給出了大概的提綱，其中具體的內(nèi)容應(yīng)由學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力來(lái)補(bǔ)充，并用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。學(xué)生們可以從自身的經(jīng)歷和體會(huì)出發(fā)，選取生活中常見(jiàn)的場(chǎng)景進(jìn)行介紹。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，注意根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，并變化謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，這樣的句式表達(dá)簡(jiǎn)潔、明了，易于掌握。但為提升作文檔次，應(yīng)穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句，或使用一些復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，如非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)等。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，談了自己對(duì)同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象的看法，并分享了自己的經(jīng)歷。短文有如下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，且層次清晰，文章分成了四段，每一段的中心話(huà)題也很明確。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，文章主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式準(zhǔn)確。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，敘述清晰、簡(jiǎn)潔。也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句的結(jié)構(gòu)，如賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等。短文中使用了豐富的句式，如Some students can39。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies等等。15．（浙江中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)在本周班會(huì)課上，同學(xué)們對(duì)“初中生什么時(shí)候放學(xué)比較合適？”這一問(wèn)題進(jìn)行了熱烈的討論。大部分同學(xué)認(rèn)為初中生應(yīng)該在5點(diǎn)左右放學(xué)，下表所列里大家的發(fā)言記錄。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文介紹大家的想法并闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。Time to leave schoolActivities to do after schoolat 5 o’clockat 4:45at 5 o’clock...exercise to keep healthy and read booksdo what we want, such as listening to musictake a parttime job...注意：（1）短文必須包括表格中所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；（3）詞數(shù)：80100；（4）短文開(kāi)頭僅供參考，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。短文開(kāi)頭：“What time should junior high school students leave school?” This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】“What time should junior high school students leave school?”This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 39。clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.A few think 5 o 39。clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do parttime jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.I am in favor of leaving school at five o39。clock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如hold a class meeting，talk about，the result of，keep healthy，after school，have more time to do，want to do，such as，listen to music，in favor of，clean the room，play tennis等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 39。clock./ Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化；同時(shí)Most students think…/ Some think…/ A few think…使敘述條理，層次分明，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。16．（北京中考模擬）某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“我最喜歡的中華傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀阕钕矚g的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日是什么，節(jié)日里你通常都做什么，以及你為什么喜歡這個(gè)節(jié)日。提示詞語(yǔ):festival，get together, enjoy，moon cakes，harvest time提示問(wèn)題: What39。s your favorite traditional festival? What do you usually do during the festival? Why do you like it?There are many traditional festivals in 【答案】There are many traditional festivals in China. My favourite one is Midautumn Festival and it usually es on August 15 of the lunar year. On the festival we usually go back home from other cities or places and have a big dinner with the whole family. After dinner, we often eat moon cakes, watch the full moon and talk with each other happily. I like Midautumn Festival best not only because I like the delicious moon cakes but also because it’s a family gettogether time and I really enjoy the love among the family members.【解析】這是一篇話(huà)題作文，根據(jù)話(huà)題要求來(lái)介紹一下中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。根據(jù)所提供的提示詞語(yǔ)可知，要求介紹中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日：中秋節(jié)?？梢詮哪阕钕矚g的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日是中秋節(jié)，節(jié)日里你通常都做什么，以及你為什么喜歡中秋節(jié)三個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)。注意在給報(bào)社的投稿中必須包含提示詞語(yǔ)中的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)把所給的提示問(wèn)題回答清楚就行。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縊n the festival we usually go back home from other cities or places and have a big dinner with the whole family. 在節(jié)日里，我們會(huì)從不同的地方回家，和全家團(tuán)聚，一起吃大餐。由and連接的并列句?！靖叻志湫投縄 like Midautumn Festival best not only because I like the delicious moon cakes but also because it’s a family gettogether time and I really enjoy the love among the family members. 我最喜歡中秋節(jié)，不僅因?yàn)槲蚁矚g美味的月餅，而且因?yàn)樗且粋€(gè)家庭聚會(huì)時(shí)間，我真的很享受家庭成員之間的愛(ài)。句子中運(yùn)用了not only…… but also……，還有because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句。17．（安徽中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校打算舉辦一場(chǎng)以“感恩老師”為主題的活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，給你的美國(guó)筆友Mike 寫(xiě)一封郵件，介紹這次的活動(dòng)。時(shí)間：5月30號(hào)活動(dòng)內(nèi)容： 1. 給老師獻(xiàn)花致敬；2. 把寫(xiě)滿(mǎn)感謝祝福話(huà)語(yǔ)的卡片貼在墻上；3. 為老師表演節(jié)目（put on performances）你的感觸：……注意： 1. 詞數(shù)80100；2． 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；4. 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Mike,Our school will hold an activity to express our thanks and love to the teachers._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What do you usually do to thank your teachers? I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mike,Our school will hold an activity to express our thanks and love to the teachers on May 30. On the day we will give our teachers some flowers to show our thanks and respect