【正文】 omething meaningful, plan to do learn more knowledge等等。整篇文章表達流暢，意思連貫。14．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達 Hey Li Ming,I will move to your munity and stay for two months. I want to know something about your munity. What is your munity like? What activities do you usually have? How can I get along with your neighbors?Write soon!Yours,Ben假如你是Li Ming，請用英語給筆友Ben回復(fù)郵件。注意：；，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；，郵件的開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Ben,I’m very glad to know that you will e to our munity. Yours, Li Ming【答案】Dear Ben,I’ m very glad to know that you will e to our munity. My munity is in the northern part of the city. It’s not a big one, but it’s quite beautiful. You can see a garden with different flowers when entering it. You can breathe fresh air every morning because of many trees in it.Besides, we also have different activities. For example, people in Helping Hand Club always do some shopping for the old who live alone. Every weekend, college students always help us with our homework.All the people in our munity are kind and easy to get on with. You’d better say “Hello” to greet them. If you bump into someone, it will be polite to say “sorry”.That’s all about our munity. I hope you will have a good time here.Yours, Li Ming【解析】試題分析：本文是要求寫一封電子郵件，寫作時注意要寫信的格式。假如你是Li Ming，請用英語給筆友Ben回復(fù)郵件。動筆前要認真閱讀電子郵件，寫作時需回答郵件內(nèi)所提問題，可適當發(fā)揮。仔細閱讀本的電子郵件，找出他的問題（我想了解一下你們社區(qū)的情況。你的社區(qū)是什么樣的？你通常有什么活動？我怎樣和你的鄰居相處？），然后根據(jù)問題做出回答。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時。寫作時，列好提綱，注意使用連詞，句型、句式，使文章整體意思連貫，表達流暢。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無拼寫，語法錯誤（時態(tài)，主謂一致等）。（一）列提綱：1. 社區(qū)是什么樣的in the northern part of the city/ big but quite beautiful/ a garden with different flowers. 2. 活動do some shopping for the old who live alone/ college students always help us with our . 怎樣和鄰居相處kind and easy to get on with./“Hello” to greet them. /If you bump into someone, it will be polite to say “sorry”.（二）根據(jù)提綱連詞成句，然后連句成篇，注意連詞的使用。（三）寫完以后，在閱讀一遍，檢查單詞拼寫，語法，動詞時態(tài)，語序，大小寫，標點符號，主謂一致等是否有錯誤。點睛：這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，語言表達要符合英語習(xí)慣，準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，用詞準確、句子通順。（1）學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。（2）注意給出的起始句（這就給出了時態(tài)），學(xué)生運用正確的時態(tài)，運用所給或所學(xué)的詞語，盡量運用熟悉的句型。（3）列好提綱和要點，及需要的重要短語或句型。（3）切忌堆砌詞語，句子，注意運用適當?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢，連貫。注意表達的順序。 （4）注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫，標點符號等的正確運用。 （5）注意檢查：單詞拼寫，語法，動詞時態(tài)，語序，主謂一致等。15．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達假如你的筆友 John 將作為交換生在中國家庭生活一周，他寫了一封 注意：；，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范； 80 左右，郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear John,向你求助。請根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容寫封回信。Dear Li Hua,I will e to Nanjing in July and stay with a Chinese family for a week as an exchange student. To get along well with my host family, should I prepare any gifts? How can I help with the housework? What else should I do?Please write back soon.Yours, JohnDear John,I’m glad you will e to China. ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ I hope you will enjoy your stay in China.Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear John,I39。m glad you will e to China. We Chinese people are kind and friendly. You don39。t need to worry about it.If possible, you can prepare a small gift, like a key ring or a hat with the symbols of your country. It39。s not necessary to buy anything expensive. Also, you can help with some housework, such as washing the dishes, making the bed . The family members will be very grateful for that.In addition, I suggest you learn a little Chinese that means Nice to meet you, Thank you and so on, which may play a useful role during your stay. What39。s more, read some books about Chinese customs before ing here. Try not to make any misunderstandings.I hope you will enjoy your stay in China.Yours, Li Hua【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，回信給約翰，建議他在中國家庭生活應(yīng)注意的事項。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，二人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I39。m glad……，We Chinese people are……，you can…….，It39。s not necessary to do sth, I suggest……，I hope……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭告訴他不必擔心，接下來回答他的問題以及建議他如何做，最后希望他在中國玩得高興。此處need to do sth, worry about, the symbol of, help with, such as, be grateful for, in addition, play a role, what’s more等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。16．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達假如你是李磊，中考（Senior High School Entrance Examination）在即，你在英國的筆友Andy給你發(fā)來電子郵件，想了解你近階段的學(xué)習(xí)情況。請認真閱讀下面的郵件，根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容及你的實際用英語回復(fù)。To: lilei@From: andyblack@Subject:School lifeDear Li Lei,It is nearly two months since I last received your . I hear the Senior High School Entrance Examination is ing in Wuxi! How is everything going with you? What do you think about your English classes? Who would you go for help when you have some trouble? Wish you good luck! Write to me soon.All the best,Andy要求：1. 詞數(shù)90左右。開頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2. 回復(fù)須符合郵件話題，結(jié)合自己情況適當發(fā)揮，使全文連貫通順；3. 不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。Dear Andy, Thank you for your . I am very glad to tell you something about my school life._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________How about your school life? I’m look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerelyLiLei【答案】Dear Andy, Thank you for your . I am very glad to tell you something about my school life.I am busy preparing for the Senior High School Entrance Examination these days. I’m working harder than ever before so that I can enter my ideal senior high school. All of my teachers are willing to devote themselves to helping us. Of all the subjects, Engligh is always my favourite. In class we practise listening and speaking . My English teacher is patient enough to explain English grammar to I have some trouble, I often go to my Engligh teacher, she can always help me with my trouble, and cheer me up.How about your school life? I’m look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerelyLiLei【解析】這是一篇回復(fù)書信類的提綱作文。內(nèi)容為根據(jù)郵件的內(nèi)容及自己的實際情況回復(fù)郵件。時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱。寫作要點包括：你一切都好嗎？你覺得你的英語課怎么樣？當你遇到麻煩時，你會找誰去幫忙？在動筆前，要認真審題，根據(jù)寫作要點列出每個要點中可能要用