【正文】 ow the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner、More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life、There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every 。9． 書面表達請將短文寫在答題卡相應的位置上。一直以來，同學們對作業(yè)持有不同的觀點。在你班的主題班會上，同學們進行了“Is daily homework necessary？”的討論，請你根據(jù)提示和要求，并結(jié)合自己的實際經(jīng)驗，發(fā)表你的觀點。YesNoHelp us understand what we have learned；Practice makes prefect；...Take up too much time；Make us less interested in studying；...Your opinion：要求：1．80詞以上。2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名。【答案】Dear students，I39。m glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it39。s necessary for us to do daily homework.Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice makes perfect”．In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. But it shouldn39。t be too much. It can improve our skills. Daily homework should be different and colorful. It might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. We should be left enough free time so that we can do things we really like to do.That39。s all. Thanks.【解析】寫作分析：審題之后能明白寫作任務是要寫出一篇小論文，討論每日的作業(yè)到底是不是必要的。首先需要陳述正反兩方面的觀點，其次結(jié)合自己的實際經(jīng)驗，發(fā)表自己的觀點。寫作過程中要注意邏輯準確，注意正確使用連詞，借助實例、實際經(jīng)驗來佐證自己的觀點。寫作亮點：首先用一個自然段來闡明寫作的主題，表達出自己的觀點（認為作業(yè)是很必要的），可以借助it is necessary for sb to do…這樣的句型。其次，開始具體陳述觀點，陳述的時候要適當使用實例，相關用到的短語有have some difficulties in doing在做…的時候有困難，review the knowledge復習知識，think over the difficulties來回思考難點，Little by little一點一點地。恰當?shù)闹V語也為文章增色不少，例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧這個諺語。最后可以用說理的方式來介紹做作業(yè)的必要性，例如用到了improve our skills提高我們的技能，在這里也有一點亮點，就是說作業(yè)也要有變化性，要豐富多彩，體現(xiàn)了作者的深度思考，總體來說出色地完成了既定的寫作任務。10． 書面表達共享單車（shared bikes）在蘇州投入使用以來，給人們帶來了諸多便利，受到人們的追捧，改變了人們的出行方式，但同時也遇到了一些挑戰(zhàn)，是國民素質(zhì)的‘“照妖鏡”，請你根據(jù)表格中信息的提示，給《21世紀英文報》寫一篇關于共享單車看法的稿件。社會現(xiàn)狀自從出現(xiàn)，飽受贊譽。諸多優(yōu)勢，出行方便，減少污染 ，負擔得起存在問題 你的觀點我認為……（考生自擬，至少2點）注意事項：，要求語句通順，意思連貫?！澳愕挠^點”一欄用2―3句話展開合理想象。作適當發(fā)揮。，文章的開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. 【答案】Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it39。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.But there are some problems too. Some people can39。t return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it39。s a way of living a green life.【解析】這篇作文要求我們給《21世紀英文報》投稿，談一談自己對共享單車的看法。題目中利用表格的形式給我們列舉了短文的主要內(nèi)容，包括：共享單車的優(yōu)勢；存在的問題以及你自己對這件事情的看法。前兩個內(nèi)容我們需要根據(jù)表格的提示用正確的英語表達，而自己的觀點則需要學生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，組織語言，并表達出來，要求至少兩點。通過審題可知，這篇短文應主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第三人稱來敘述，短文可以分成兩段或者三段，一個內(nèi)容一段或前兩個內(nèi)容合到一段。寫作時，應注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，而應從句子的整體考慮，簡單句、并列句和復合句交叉使用，改變文章句式節(jié)奏，使用不同的句式，避免單調(diào)。語句之間注意使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使整篇文章意思連貫、表達流暢。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息。短文分成了四段，第一段引出話題共享單車；第二段講述了共享單車的一些優(yōu)點；第三段介紹了一些問題；最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。分段敘述使文章的結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，主題明確，有層次性。其次短文中使用了恰當?shù)臅r態(tài)和人稱，文章以第三人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主，語法規(guī)范，用詞準確，句式富于變化。例如They can be seen everywhere so that it39。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford ；另外文章中還使用了恰當?shù)倪B接成分，如Also, What’s more, But, sometimes, After all等等。正確文章行文連貫、語句通順、表達流暢。