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watching too much TV or playing puter games in this way. But others have a different opinion. They think that students need more time to rest. If they take too many classes, they might feel too stressed. That’s not good for their health. As for me, I don’t think taking extra classes is necessary. Learning hard in class is enough. We just need to go over our lessons after class. We can also teach ourselves as it is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability.【解析】【分析】整體分析:這是一篇提綱話題作文。是一篇議論文,第一段要寫目前,許多中學(xué)生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補習(xí)班,對此人們有不同的看法。第二段要寫中學(xué)生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補習(xí)班贊同者的觀點。第三段要寫中學(xué)生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補習(xí)班反對者的觀點。第四段要表述作者自己的觀點?!驹斀狻?,看看有哪些要求?哪些時態(tài)?人稱?,記敘文?說明文?議論文?看圖?還是應(yīng)用文?,單一還是混合。、短語、句型。,并運用適當?shù)木湫秃瓦^渡詞銜接。寫完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤色,人稱、時態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。運用自然過渡法和自然銜接法來是文章更為地道、通順、純正。用短語、句型:all kinds of ,Some others,As for me ,Some people think that They also believe thatIf they take too many classes。It is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ?!军c睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認真審題,可以分四段寫:總體簡單描述話題;贊成;反對;你的看法。注意過渡性語言的使用。做到:要點要全,表達要清晰明確,使用短語,句型要準確,注意避免拼寫和語法錯誤。8.(濟陽縣第二實驗中學(xué)中考模擬)書面表達請根據(jù)圖片提示,用英語寫一篇120詞左右的短文。內(nèi)容包括:; 。要求:;、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I can see a boy and a girl in the picture. They are ing back from school. On their way home, they find so much rubbish outside the dustbin and decide to put it into the dustbin. The boy also es up with an idea. He puts up a sign on the dustbin to remind people of protecting the environment. The city is our home. We should protect it. Therefore, when we see someone litter, we should stop them and pick up the rubbish. The environment should be protected by everybody. We should be civilized citizens.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇看圖作文。【詳解】根據(jù)題目要求“; ?!笨芍?,文章用一般現(xiàn)在時。人稱是第三人稱和第一人稱。英語作文一般分為三個部分:第一部分:開篇點題——描述圖片內(nèi)容。按順序分別描述四幅圖的內(nèi)容:男孩和女孩放學(xué)回家的路上,看到垃圾到處都是,女孩撿起垃圾放到了垃圾桶,男孩畫了一個標志貼到垃圾桶上。注意這一部分用用一般現(xiàn)在時。人稱是第三人稱。第二部分:文章主體——呼吁大家保護環(huán)境?!鞘惺俏壹遥Wo靠大家。第三部分:總結(jié)全文——做合格的市民。9.(北京中考模擬)“友善”是一種美德,它猶如陽光和雨露照耀并滋潤著美德的形成。同學(xué)們,請奉獻你的友善,為創(chuàng)建和諧社會做出貢獻。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“友善待人、快樂生活”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華,請用英語寫一篇短文投稿,談?wù)勆钪心銓λ颂峁┥埔鈳椭慕?jīng)歷。主要內(nèi)容包括:你對友善行為的認識和理解,你平時做哪些友善的事情,以及你這樣做的美好愿望。提示詞語:kind,politely, trouble, offer, proud,society提示問題:What do you think of showing kindness to others?How do you help them kindly in your daily life?What do you dream about being kind to them?It39。s our duty to show kindness to others around us. _________________________________________________【答案】It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should be kind to each other. When someone is in trouble, we’ll give a hand politely. In our munity, I try my best to help the neighbors and take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer. At school, I get on well with my classmates and help them with their lessons. I also send my books and clothes to the children who live in poor areas. I’m very proud I have made many friends by helping others in need.I believe our society will bee better and better if everyone shows kindness to each other.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文,談?wù)勆钪心銓λ颂峁┥埔鈳椭慕?jīng)歷。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣,準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致,特別使用一些亮點詞句,如be kind to, each other, be in trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。增強邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,用詞準確,句子通順,行文連貫。10.(廣西中考模擬)近幾年來,一些學(xué)校開設(shè)了一些興趣班(interest classes)或特色課(special classes), 諸如烹飪課、手工制作課以及傳統(tǒng)戲曲課等。你校校園網(wǎng)就你們學(xué)校開設(shè)此類課程的必要性廣泛征求同學(xué)們的意見。以下是你們班同學(xué)的觀點和理由。請就此并結(jié)合你自己的想法用英語寫一篇短文,發(fā)表在校園網(wǎng)的英語論壇上。觀點理由一些學(xué)生有必要1. 培養(yǎng)興趣, 并獲得更多的知識;2. 提高生活技能另一些學(xué)生沒有必要1. 浪費時間,對學(xué)習(xí)沒有幫助; 2. 給學(xué)生帶來很多壓力你……提示語:develop one’s interests。 get more knowledge。 improve one’s life skills。 a wasteof time。 cause a lot of stress要求:1. 短文應(yīng)包括表格中的信息,并適當發(fā)揮;2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名;3. 詞數(shù)80左右。開頭已給出,但不計入總詞數(shù)。Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such as cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thank you!【答案】Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such as cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.Is it necessary to offer these classes? We had a discussion in our class. Some students think it’s really necessary to do it. First, it’s good for students to develop their interests. And interests can make them get more knowledge. Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. These skills are useful for young students.However, others have different opinions. They don’t think it’s so necessary. They think it’s a waste of time and it’s not helpful for their study. And these activities can cause a lot of stress for children.In my opinion, it’s a good idea to offer these classes. They are not only good for our study but also for our growing.Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文,并且已給出了內(nèi)容提示,所以我們在寫作時要圍繞所給內(nèi)容提示展開。 根據(jù)作文要求,可以確定文章的時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時。 在表達觀點時通常會用到例如:I think, in one’s opinion 等引出觀點的詞語。另外,可以用到first, second, third, finally 等一一列出觀點,使文章更有條理,次序?!军c睛】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文。首先內(nèi)容完整,第一段擺出事實,第二段說明別人的的觀點,最后說出自己的觀點,在表達觀點時有條理有次序。 短文中使用了一些很好的詞及短語,例如such as,and so on,However等使句子更有連貫性,及好的句型表達,例如:Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. They think it’s a waste of time and it’s not helpful for their study等。11.(西安市鐵一中學(xué)中考模擬)由于父母的溺愛,現(xiàn)在許多孩子基本不做學(xué)習(xí)以外的事情,導(dǎo)致獨立生活能力不強。請你根據(jù)以下建議;自己的事情自己做; 家里得事情幫著做; 學(xué)校的事情搶著做,談?wù)勛鳛橹袑W(xué)生,我們應(yīng)該如何培養(yǎng)自己的獨立能力。要求;,意思連貫,語法正確,書寫規(guī)范2. 字數(shù)70 字左右(短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出,不計入總字數(shù)) As middle school students, it39。s very important for us to independent. What should we do to makeus independ