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ll in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】【詳解】每年春節(jié),每個孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢(luckymoney)。隨著生活水平的提高,大部分孩子得到越來越多的壓歲錢,有些甚至通過微信(WeChat)或支付寶(Alipay)收壓歲錢。同學(xué)們該如何管理自己的錢,讓自己的錢用得更有意義?這是一篇給材料作文,本題所給材料比較詳細(xì),寫作中注意將所給內(nèi)容表達出來,不能逐字翻譯。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱,時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),注意謂語動詞的變化。動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱,寫作中注意語義通順,符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞?!军c睛】文章使用了很好的短語和句子:In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video 。6. 近年來霧霾天氣在中國許多城市頻頻發(fā)生。霧霾天氣引起大家極大的關(guān)注。請你用英語寫一篇有關(guān)霧霾的短文向??坝⒄Z角”投稿,內(nèi)容包括:1. 霧霾的危害 2. 霧霾產(chǎn)生的原因(2個) 3. 應(yīng)對霧霾的措施(3個)提示:霧霾 smog poisonous 有毒的注意:1. 詞數(shù)110左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫; 3. 開頭語已為你寫好(不計入總詞數(shù))。In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people. Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks. How does it e about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly e as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on. What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear pletely. 【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示來介紹有關(guān)霧霾的情況,題目中給出了寫作的內(nèi)容,我們應(yīng)將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達出來。首先應(yīng)注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息,不能遺漏要點,并注意表達的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時態(tài)和人稱,通過分析可知,這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),謂語動詞用原形,特別要注意謂語動詞形式要變化,這是一個寫作的難點。最后要注意英語的表達習(xí)慣,英語句式與漢語在語序和詞性上的使用是不同的,要注意不能逐詞翻譯,寫漢語式的英語。應(yīng)從句子整體考慮,使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型來表達,語法規(guī)范。還應(yīng)使用一些較好的句型或者短語,增強文章的表現(xiàn)力。7.書面表達每個人都有自己心愛的物品,相信你也擁有一個自己心愛的物品吧!請以“A(n) _____ I have”為題,描述一個或一件你心愛的物品,并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿?,以及它存在的意義。要求:1. 請在題目空白處填上你心愛物品的名字;2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。3. 語言表達準(zhǔn)確,短文連貫通順,80詞左右。A(n) _________ I have_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________