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our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you. 【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also acpany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What’s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.I’m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮點說明:這篇習作的層次清晰,內容飽滿,表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如thank you for doing,I’d like to do,introduce sb. to,all of you,at home,do some washing,at a fixed time,have a chat,play chess,do exercise,deal with,a great help,in the future等。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new ,豐富了習作內容,使表達多樣化,是本文的最大亮點。點睛:書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經整理后展開思維,考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數。6.書面表達假如你是李華,你們學校正在進行課堂教學改革,經過一段時間的適應,同學們發(fā)現現在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化,請你根據所給提示以“The Changes in Class”為題目,用英語寫一篇100詞左右的文章,談談你的感受和想法,開頭和結尾已給出(不計入總詞數)。 要求:、條理清晰、段落分明、書寫工整;、校名和地名等信息;,并作適當發(fā)揮。The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in 【答案】 The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class. I like the class like think it is very interesting and lively. We can tell stories, play games and listen to music.I think it is open and free. We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class. The changes in Class are good for us.【解析】【詳解】假如你是李華,你們學校正在進行課堂教學改革,經過一段時間的適應,同學們發(fā)現現在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化,請你根據所給提示以“The Changes in Class”為題目,用英語寫一篇100詞左右的文章,談談你的感受和想法,開頭和結尾已給出(不計入總詞數)。 結合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現在時,人稱為單數第一人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結構主要為系表結構,注意一些常見句式的應用,寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關系?!军c睛】本文結構緊湊,語言簡練文中運用了一些好的句型:We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this 。7.為了宣傳和弘揚中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化, 某雙語雜志將舉辦征文活動來介紹中國的經典故事, “程門立雪(Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully)”是其中一個選題。請你根據下面的內容提示, 用英語寫一篇短文參加此活動。內容提示:1. 楊時去拜見老師程頤一老師在睡覺一楊時在雪地等一老師醒來發(fā)現楊時在門口2. 通過介紹這個故事, 發(fā)表你的看法或者觀點。要求:1. 可以適當增加細節(jié), 以使行文連貫:詞數:100左右. 2. 不得在作文中出現學校的真實名稱、老師和同學的真實姓名?!敬鸢浮縇ong long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher wok