【正文】 弊。如：利：get useful knowledge and information，get relaxed，弊：being crazy about playing games。第二段介紹了幾條規(guī)則，恰當運用“we should”，“we mustn’t”，“it’s impolite of us to…”等句型。最后結(jié)尾提出了倡議，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，段落清晰。13．（山西中考模擬）書面表達請將短文寫在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。學(xué)會分享很重要。你有哪些東西要分享？可采取哪些方式分享？請結(jié)合自身的一次經(jīng)歷，寫一篇短文，并闡述分享的意義。要求： 80；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名?！敬鸢浮縄t39。s very important to learn to share with each have many things to share in different example，I can share some beautiful pictures，my favorite music，different ideas with others face to face or by ， which are widely I39。d like to share one of my unforgettable experiences with you.Emily was lonely and I found her crying alone for some made me worried about her，so I hoped to cheer her first，I tried to share my favorite books and chatted with her on study after we knew each other better，I began to talk more about my everyday life with time went by，she gradually opened her heart and became used to sharing her feelings with we are good friends.In a word，sharing is not only interesting but also helpful and it makes us grow can learn a lot from sharing and enjoy our lives more.【解析】本文屬于話題作文，結(jié)合自身的一次經(jīng)歷，闡述分享的意義。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容?！玖咙c說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如share with，in different ways, for example, face to face, one of +形容詞最高級+名詞復(fù)數(shù)，make sb+形容詞，chat with， as time goes by, gradually, in a word, not only...but also...等。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。點睛：寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。14．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達假如你是李磊，中考（Senior High School Entrance Examination）在即，你在英國的筆友Andy給你發(fā)來電子郵件，想了解你近階段的學(xué)習情況。請認真閱讀下面的郵件，根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容及你的實際用英語回復(fù)。To: lilei@From: andyblack@Subject:School lifeDear Li Lei,It is nearly two months since I last received your . I hear the Senior High School Entrance Examination is ing in Wuxi! How is everything going with you? What do you think about your English classes? Who would you go for help when you have some trouble? Wish you good luck! Write to me soon.All the best,Andy要求：1. 詞數(shù)90左右。開頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2. 回復(fù)須符合郵件話題，結(jié)合自己情況適當發(fā)揮，使全文連貫通順；3. 不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。Dear Andy, Thank you for your . I am very glad to tell you something about my school life._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________How about your school life? I’m look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerelyLiLei【答案】Dear Andy, Thank you for your . I am very glad to tell you something about my school life.I am busy preparing for the Senior High School Entrance Examination these days. I’m working harder than ever before so that I can enter my ideal senior high school. All of my teachers are willing to devote themselves to helping us. Of all the subjects, Engligh is always my favourite. In class we practise listening and speaking . My English teacher is patient enough to explain English grammar to I have some trouble, I often go to my Engligh teacher, she can always help me with my trouble, and cheer me up.How about your school life? I’m look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerelyLiLei【解析】這是一篇回復(fù)書信類的提綱作文。內(nèi)容為根據(jù)郵件的內(nèi)容及自己的實際情況回復(fù)郵件。時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱。寫作要點包括：你一切都好嗎？你覺得你的英語課怎么樣？當你遇到麻煩時，你會找誰去幫忙？在動筆前，要認真審題，根據(jù)寫作要點列出每個要點中可能要用到的表達，然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。在寫作時，需要注意書信體裁的格式，要符合英語的表達習慣；注意表達的條理性、連貫性，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡符合邏輯關(guān)系；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。最后要細心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。15．（北京中考模擬）交流可以化解矛盾,增進友誼。當今交流方式很多，但人們之間的情感似乎越來越淡。學(xué)校英語專欄征文，主題是“Ways of Communication Today”。假如你是李華，你對此很感興趣，準備投稿，談?wù)勀闳粘５慕涣鞣绞郊澳愕母惺?。提示詞語： face to face， chatting on line， discuss，appear 提示問題：How many ways do you know to municate with others?How do you usually municate with your friends? Which is the best way and why?【答案】There are some ways to municate with others, such as talking face to face, singing songs, using body and sign language, writing a letter, chatting on line, sending text messages. My friends and I usually have a talk face to face because we live near each other. We often send text messages, too. We can discuss our homework, talk about our interesting games. Sometimes we make phone calls. I think the best way to municate is the mobile phone. It is one of the most wele and useful inventions. After mobile phones appear, munication bees easier and rapider. With the help of the phones, people can keep in touch with anyone at any time and in any place. （118） 【解析】這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如municate with others，such as，face to face，body and sign language，chatting on line，have a talk，each other，text messages，talk about，the best way，one of the most wele and useful inventions，easier and rapider，with the help of，keep in touch with，at any time and in any place等。而My friends and I usually have a talk face to face because we live near each other./ I think the best way to municate is the mobile ，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達流暢，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容可知用一般現(xiàn)在時，可把提示的內(nèi)容逐詞翻譯并拓展成不同的句子，最后把這些句子連在一起即可。16．（廣東中考模擬）書面表達假如你是九年級一班的李新，你們的新外教Peter想去北京參觀故宮博物院，希望你能給他作一個大概的介紹。請根據(jù)以下要點提示，用英語給他發(fā)一封電子郵件。要點內(nèi)容：（the Forbidden City）的基本情況（又名……； 建于14061420；古代皇帝emperor 寢宮；……）（1987年UNESCO World Heritage；世界上最大的古代宮殿；……）。寫作要求：80詞左右；條理清楚，意思連貫，語句通順，標點正確。Dear Peter, I’m Li ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________