【正文】 易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后必須認真檢查是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。15．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達保護環(huán)境是每一個人的責任。假設(shè)下面是你閱讀了有關(guān)環(huán)保的書之后的變化，請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)所給內(nèi)容寫一篇短文。過去現(xiàn)在 ，并回收利用 你認為作為中學生應(yīng)該如何做才能保護好環(huán)境?（至少兩點）要求：，意思連貫。，做適當發(fā)揮。，不計入總同數(shù)。It is our duty to protect our environment. After reading a book about the environment, Ihave changed a lot. 【答案】It is our duty to protect our environment. After reading a book about the environment, I have changed a lot.In the past, I went to school in my father’s car because it was easy and fast. I always threw away the things which were old. And I used to ask for plastic bags when shopping in the supermarket.However, after reading the book, I have realized the importance of protecting the environment . I go to school on foot or by bike now. And I try to use things as long as possible and recycle them they are old. And I always remember to take my own bag when shopping.I think as students we should do something to help protect our environment. We should save water. And we should turn off lights when we leave the classroom.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我閱讀了關(guān)于環(huán)保的書后的很大變化。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：It is our duty to……，I went to……，And I used to……，And I try to……，I think……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了保護環(huán)境是我們的職責，我閱讀了關(guān)于環(huán)保的書后有很大變化，接下來介紹我過去和現(xiàn)在在環(huán)保方面有什么樣的變化，最后作為中學生我們應(yīng)如何保護環(huán)境。此處in the past, throw away, used to, on foot, try to do sth, remember to do sth, turn off等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。16．（海南中考模擬）書面表達年1月以來，瓊海市開始推廣使用共享單車，你對這一舉措有什么看法？請根據(jù)下面的表格提示內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，談?wù)劰蚕韱诬嚨睦准笆褂霉蚕韱诬嚨慕ㄗh，以便在英語課上與同學們交流。shared bikesadvantages: save energy, air pollutiondisadvantages: park in wrong places, bike accidentssuggestions: follow the traffic rules, care for bikes, don’t bring home要求：1. 語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；2. 必須包含所給提示，但不要逐字翻譯，并做適當發(fā)揮；3. 行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、校名或地名；4. 詞數(shù)80左右。（文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think … What’s your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?【答案】Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think it’s a good idea. As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution. What’s more, it costs little to use them. However, some people park bikes in wrong places after they use them. Sometimes it’s hard to find a bike on the street. And bicycle accidents do happen once in a while, so we must be careful when riding. Never ride too fast and always follow the traffic rules. At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the bikes. Don’t bring it home or keep it your own. What’s your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?【解析】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如on the street，a good idea，as we know，help sb. do sth.，save energy，what’s more，park bikes，in wrong places，once in a while，be careful，at the same time等。而As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution./ What’s more, it costs little to use them. / At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the ，豐富了習作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。17．（靖江外國語學校中考模擬）書面表達根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇介紹我的朋友張陽的短文?；厩闆r張陽，陽光中學九年級二班學生興趣愛好1. 喜歡閱讀。每周花七個多小時閱讀各種類型的書，因為……。每年統(tǒng)計兩次鳥兒的數(shù)量，以研究鳥兒在數(shù)量方面的變化。優(yōu)秀事跡上個月把零花錢捐給了希望工程未來夢想1. 希望成為連接家鄉(xiāng)到上海路段的高鐵總工程師2. 每個人為保護環(huán)境都可以做一些改變。如：…….（舉1例）要求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫； 2）必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當發(fā)揮； 3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of highspeed railway connecting my hometown to Shanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw rubbish everywhere.【解析】【詳解】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如like reading，more than，all kinds of，spend time doing，enjoy doing，the number of，twice a year，be the chief engineer of等。而He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the ，豐富了習作