【正文】 do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．現(xiàn)在智能手機（smartphone）越來越普及，很多中學生都有智能手機。請你根據(jù)下面的提示，寫一篇不少于80詞的英語短文，談一談你對智能手機的看法，可適當發(fā)揮。提示：在生活中你用智能手機做什么？智能手機對你的生活產生了怎樣的影響？你對中學生使用智能手機有什么看法？______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：The smartphone is being more and more popular nowadays .I also have a smartphone .I usually use it to send text messages, play games,watch videos, listen to music and learn English .It is very useful and convenient. In fact,the smartphone makes my life colorful. However ,every coin has two I spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams. So I think we students should use our smartphones properly and don’t use them too much .We should pay more attention to our studies.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，要求根據(jù)內容提示，寫一篇英語短文，談一談你對智能手機的看法。文章時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要用第一、第三人稱。首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。10．為了吸引外國游客，杭州旅游網希望對杭州茶文化進行宣傳。請你根據(jù)表格信息，用英語為其寫一篇介紹，詞數(shù)80左右。What is Longjing Tea famous for?Good tasteWhat is it used for?Keep healthyHow is it produced?Grow on the sides of mountains ...What’s the best place to learn about it?Why?Hangzhou National Tea Museum ...Longjing Tea____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Tea culture is one of the most famous cultures in China. Longjing tea is one of the famous Chinese traditional teas and famous green tea. Why is Longjing Tea famous for? Because it taste good. It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking longjing tea. Longjing tea grows mainly on the sides of mountains. People are very strict about the picking of Longjing tea.Longjing is a famous tea in China, which is related not only to the climate and soil environment of Longjing, but also to the production technology of Longjing. Hangzhou is the resort where Longjing tea is produced. So Hangzhou National Tea Museum is the best place to learn about Hongjing tea.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料類介紹型作文，所以我們必須要結合所給材料再適當補充內容。時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。亮點詞匯短語：one of．．．，．．．之一；green tea綠茶；be famous for．．．，因…而出名；keep healthy保持健康；be strict in sth對…嚴格；not only．．．.but also．．．，不僅．．．而且．．．。亮點句型：It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking Longjing tea. 喝龍井茶對人們保持健康有好處。It is+adj.（for sb.） to do sth. （對某人來說）做某事是怎樣的。Longjing is a famous tea in China, which is related not only to the climate and soil environment of Longjing, but also to the production technology of Longjing. 龍井是我國著名的茶葉，它不僅與龍井的氣候、土壤環(huán)境有關，而且與龍井的生產工藝有關。Which引導的限定性定語從句。Hangzhou is the resort where Longjing tea is produced. 杭州是龍井茶出產的勝地。Where引導的定語從句。