【正文】 l e to our munity. Yours, Li Ming【答案】Dear Ben,I’ m very glad to know that you will e to our munity. My munity is in the northern part of the city. It’s not a big one, but it’s quite beautiful. You can see a garden with different flowers when entering it. You can breathe fresh air every morning because of many trees in it.Besides, we also have different activities. For example, people in Helping Hand Club always do some shopping for the old who live alone. Every weekend, college students always help us with our homework.All the people in our munity are kind and easy to get on with. You’d better say “Hello” to greet them. If you bump into someone, it will be polite to say “sorry”.That’s all about our munity. I hope you will have a good time here.Yours, Li Ming【解析】試題分析：本文是要求寫一封電子郵件，寫作時(shí)注意要寫信的格式。假如你是Li Ming，請(qǐng)用英語給筆友Ben回復(fù)郵件。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀電子郵件，寫作時(shí)需回答郵件內(nèi)所提問題，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。仔細(xì)閱讀本的電子郵件，找出他的問題（我想了解一下你們社區(qū)的情況。你的社區(qū)是什么樣的？你通常有什么活動(dòng)？我怎樣和你的鄰居相處？），然后根據(jù)問題做出回答。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫作時(shí)，列好提綱，注意使用連詞，句型、句式，使文章整體意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無拼寫，語法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致等）。（一）列提綱：1. 社區(qū)是什么樣的in the northern part of the city/ big but quite beautiful/ a garden with different flowers. 2. 活動(dòng)do some shopping for the old who live alone/ college students always help us with our . 怎樣和鄰居相處kind and easy to get on with./“Hello” to greet them. /If you bump into someone, it will be polite to say “sorry”.（二）根據(jù)提綱連詞成句，然后連句成篇，注意連詞的使用。（三）寫完以后，在閱讀一遍，檢查單詞拼寫，語法，動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)，語序，大小寫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)，主謂一致等是否有錯(cuò)誤。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順。（1）學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。（2）注意給出的起始句（這就給出了時(shí)態(tài)），學(xué)生運(yùn)用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，運(yùn)用所給或所學(xué)的詞語，盡量運(yùn)用熟悉的句型。（3）列好提綱和要點(diǎn)，及需要的重要短語或句型。（3）切忌堆砌詞語，句子，注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢，連貫。注意表達(dá)的順序。 （4）注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。 （5）注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫，語法，動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)，語序，主謂一致等。15．（北京中考模擬）假如你叫李華，最近你班里的美國交換生Lucy想要感受中國的傳統(tǒng)文化。周末你和父母商議后，打算邀請(qǐng)她去老舍茶館。你通過微信告知她：要去哪，在那要做什么以及何時(shí)何地見面。提示詞語：Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate提示問題：Where are you going?What will you do there?When and where will you meet?【答案】Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Let’s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，我通過微信告訴Lucy要去哪，在那里要做什么以及何時(shí)何地見面。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I want to……，We are going to……，We can……，Let’s meet at……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了我想要邀請(qǐng)你去老舍茶館，接下來介紹我們?nèi)ツ抢镒鍪裁?，最后指出我們要在何時(shí)何地見面。此處want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do sth, at the gate of等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。16．（湖南省岳陽開發(fā)區(qū)長(zhǎng)嶺中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)?，F(xiàn)在提倡全民閱讀，某英語網(wǎng)站正在舉辦以”reading”為題的英語征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇英語短文，向該網(wǎng)站投稿。提示：？？？要求：80詞左右，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Reading ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Reading plays an important role in our life. It’s a good way to relax. At the same time, it can also help us open our minds. So as middle school students, we should read more. In my opinion, textbooks, newspapers and magazines are all good reading materials. As for me, I plan to read one book every month. Whenever I have free time, I’ll read. As the saying goes, reading makes a full man. Let’s start reading now.【解析】寫作分析：本文需要按照要求以“閱讀”為主題寫作，要寫出讀書的好處、中學(xué)生可以讀的書、你的讀書計(jì)劃。按照要求逐條描述即可，但要注意增添相關(guān)細(xì)節(jié)使得文章連貫。寫作亮點(diǎn)：總起要對(duì)reading做一個(gè)概括，用到了“plays an important role”（扮演重要的角色）這一搭配，關(guān)于讀書的好處提到了：open our minds（開闊思維），relax（放松）。關(guān)于可以讀的書，介紹了幾種文本（textbooks, newspapers and magazine），關(guān)于介紹讀書計(jì)劃，描述了自己讀書的頻率，最后，有引用諺語，也是一個(gè)亮點(diǎn)。17．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達(dá)同學(xué)們，三年的初中生活就要結(jié)束了，在我們的成長(zhǎng)過程中，既有快樂，也有煩惱。請(qǐng)用英文寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：1．你在學(xué)?；蚣依镌?jīng)遇到的最大問題或煩惱；2．你解決問題或煩惱的過程；3．你的感想。要求： 1．詞數(shù)80～100，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名與人名。My middle school life is ing to an end .During the three years， ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My middle school life is ing to an end. During the three years，not only did I have happy time, but I had kinds of problems. My biggest problem was too much homework. Homework seemed endless for me. It made me stay up late and feel very tired every day，but I knew the teachers were expecting us to do better，even the best in my lessons.How can I deal with the problem？On the one hand，I concentrated more on my study in class. On the other hand，I did the homework as quickly as possible instead of being slow or absent minded. As a result，I spent less time on homework，and I wasn39。t frustrated any more.As we all know，practice makes perfect. Complaining or waiting can39。t help. Instead we should be active to face our problems.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞三年的初中生活展開敘述，寫作前首先要確定三年中遇到的最大問題或煩惱是什么，一件事情即可，然后圍繞這件事情展開敘述，三個(gè)寫作要點(diǎn)要面面俱到，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱，因?yàn)槲恼律婕暗膬?nèi)容是曾經(jīng)發(fā)生過的事情，所以時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般過去時(shí)來描述發(fā)，寫感想可以用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。【高分句型一】I did the homework①as quickly as possible ②instead of being slow or absent ，而不是遲鈍或心不在焉。①as…as possible盡可能…②instead of 代替 而不是，后跟動(dòng)名詞?！靖叻志湫投緼s we know，practice makes perfect我們都知道，熟能生巧。practice makes perfect熟能生巧，諺語的運(yùn)用，為文章增添了色彩。18．（河南中考模擬）書面表達(dá)我們的國家日益強(qiáng)大，人民也變得富足因而有實(shí)力在國內(nèi)外旅游。但是近來一些中國人在國內(nèi)外的不文明行為屢屢發(fā)生并被曝光。