【正文】 what they can. At school, I respect teachers, care for classmates, and try to be civilized students. In society, I obey traffic rules, love flowers and trees. I try to be a civilized teenager.I am going to study harder in high school. I will meet new challenges and enter my dream university. I will make greater contributions to society in the future. Yours,Jack【解析】8．（ 狀況水污染，大氣污染...... 應(yīng)對(duì)措施立即阻止此類活動(dòng),治理環(huán)境（至少兩條）...... 感想建議環(huán)境能夠變得更好......Change for a better China________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We all know it is being more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.【解析】【詳解】環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一，請(qǐng)以Change for a better China為主題，結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文緊扣要求對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)做了簡(jiǎn)單介紹，內(nèi)容完整，用了表格中的信息。銜接自然，順暢。1. 上周日，你的好友Lisa，弄丟了你最心愛(ài)的圖書(shū)，這是媽媽送給你的生日禮物；2. 但是Lisa并沒(méi)有因此而道歉，你很難過(guò)；3. 你喜歡閱讀，認(rèn)為讀書(shū)可以開(kāi)闊眼界，所以你很珍惜自己的每一本書(shū)籍；4. 接下來(lái)你打算……參考詞匯：cherish珍惜open up one’s eyes開(kāi)闊眼界 要求：1. 字?jǐn)?shù)80100個(gè)；2. 開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3. 要點(diǎn)齊全，行為連貫，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。第二部分：文章主體——具體介紹這件事情的始末。10．（請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。）You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in the process of my growth.【答案】You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in the process of my growth. You give me life and take care of me all the time, when I have problems with my study and life, you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me. In order to let me in a pleasant life and receive a good education, you always work hard from morning to evening every day.You are ready to help people in need. You teach me to be a kind person. In the past, I never said I love you to you. But today is your birthday, I want to say it to you loudly. I will study harder to get better results. I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如in your life，take care of, all the time，have problems with，in order to，work hard，from morning to evening，be ready to，in need，in the past，get better results等。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。請(qǐng)你以足球迷的身份，根據(jù)下列表格中的要點(diǎn)提示，用英語(yǔ)向同學(xué)們介紹足球這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)并談?wù)勛约旱膲?mèng)想。短文須包括所有 要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；3。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。此處have a very long history, all over the world, take place, take part in, what’s more, be good for, have a gift for等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。談一談生活中你遇見(jiàn)美的一次經(jīng)歷，主要內(nèi)容包括你什么時(shí)候在哪里遇見(jiàn)了美，經(jīng)歷了什么事情以及你為什么覺(jué)得它美。上海中考模擬）In 60 to 120 words, write about the topic“ ..and I”.（以“我和……” 為題，寫(xiě)一篇60120 個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）【答案】My friends and IBefore I went to school, I felt so excited, because I was so curious about the campus life. Now I have been in middle school, after seven years’ study, I feel the bitter and happiness. The bitter is that there are always exams, and sometimes I can’t do well. Every time I get the low mark, I will be afraid of disappointing my parents. The happy thing is that I make many friends here. We play and study together. They are just like the brothers and sisters to me. This is the process of growing up, which mix pain and happiness. I am so lucky to have these friends in my life, they mean so much to me.【解析】 這是一篇要求介紹自己和他人、社會(huì)或自然 之間的故事，并談?wù)勛约旱捏w驗(yàn)或感受。英語(yǔ)作文要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，注意提供的觀點(diǎn)、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過(guò)渡。要點(diǎn)如下：表示歡迎：有利于家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)展等；感到擔(dān)憂：造成環(huán)境污染等；希望了解有關(guān)環(huán)保措施及更多信息。m looking forward to hearing from you.Yours faithfully,John【解析】這是一篇提綱作文。要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的正確性；文章必須涵蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱要點(diǎn)，不要遺漏。15．（建議內(nèi)容包括：不要到陌生的河流湖泊游泳；不允許擅自結(jié)伴游泳；不會(huì)游泳，不要下水救人……要求：1．語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫，符合邏輯。參考詞匯：alone without permission（未經(jīng)許可） allowask for help cherish（珍愛(ài)）Going Swimming Safely 【答案】Summer vacation is ing. Many students like going swimming in rivers or lakes. But how to swim safely? Here is my advice: Don’t swim in strange rivers or lakes. We shouldn’t go swimming alone. We can’t swim with other students without permission. We are not allowed to swim without a parent. If we can’t swim, we mustn’t get into the water to save a person. Sometimes it is dangerous for students to swim.We live only once，we must cherish life.【解析】這是一篇談?wù)勀銓?duì)安全游泳的建議。16．（價(jià)格較便宜。具體來(lái)說(shuō)，每個(gè)觀點(diǎn)在陳述的時(shí)候要注意表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。連詞的使用也是亮點(diǎn)，besides意為“除此之外”。17．（觀點(diǎn)理由不想有弟妹，愿意當(dāng)獨(dú)生子女（21%）不愿意與別人分享父母的愛(ài)，父母會(huì)很辛苦，......想要弟妹，不愿意當(dāng)獨(dú)生子女（62%） 渴望有伴，有更多的親人，有人分享......不介意，都可以（17%） ……你的觀點(diǎn)……要求：文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和學(xué)校名稱，100字左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，做到語(yǔ)句通順。本文恰當(dāng)使用了had a discussion about，share parents’ love with，because of，play with, however，also, be good to等詞（組）。自雙創(chuàng)以來(lái)，我們的生活環(huán)境得到了很大的改觀，人人積極參與雙創(chuàng)活動(dòng)，讓人點(diǎn)贊的文明行為隨處可見(jiàn)。題目中并沒(méi)有規(guī)定具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，而是用圖表的形式，列出了寫(xiě)作的提綱。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，寫(xiě)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語(yǔ)和句型，以常見(jiàn)的主謂賓或者主系表構(gòu)成的簡(jiǎn)單句為主，穿插使用并列句或者復(fù)合句，改變文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。文章條理清晰，有層次。浙江中考模擬） 書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你