【正文】 的亮點(diǎn)。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。記憶中有沒(méi)有讓你留下深刻印象的人、事或物，對(duì)你現(xiàn)在的生活造成了影響。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意選取一個(gè)給你留下深刻印象的人、事或物，對(duì)你現(xiàn)在的生活造成了影響。句型：such…that…；so…that…引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句；whenever…引導(dǎo)的從句；used to do。作文要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。t make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my 【答案】Once, I couldn39。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。貴州遵義十一中中考模擬）親愛(ài)的同學(xué)們，初中生活即將結(jié)束，,名城中學(xué)九（1）班的學(xué)生。要求：1. 文章包含以上提示內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。此處go by, e to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。注意：1. 要點(diǎn)齊全，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 2. 從思維導(dǎo)圖Sayings部分，選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)母窈侠砝迷诙涛闹校?3. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右； 【答案】例文 Travelling is one of the best ways for learning. You may have read or heard about something, but you can never get an exact picture of it until you see it yourself. Seeing is believing. If you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit. You can also create great memories for your lifetime. Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends. No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如one of the best ways，learn much，an exact picture of，a careful observer，seeing is believing，no matter，a lot等。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。近期各校都在開展學(xué)習(xí)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化活動(dòng)。：例文采用三段式；用第一人稱來(lái)敘述講成語(yǔ)故事活動(dòng)；因?yàn)榛顒?dòng)已經(jīng)舉辦，所以時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過(guò)去時(shí)；對(duì)參加活動(dòng)的過(guò)程描寫完整且條理清晰。黑龍江中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你是Jack，中學(xué)英文報(bào) WARM HEART專欄的編輯，近期你收到一封署名為 Asking的求助信，該同學(xué)在信中訴說(shuō)了自己當(dāng)前焦慮的情緒，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息，給他寫一封回信。（2）盡管準(zhǔn)備了很長(zhǎng)時(shí)間，對(duì)成績(jī)?nèi)詻](méi)有把握。3. 字跡工整、語(yǔ)言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如hear from sb, get good grades, as far as I’m concerned, the+比較級(jí)，the+比較級(jí)，as long as, first of all, what’s more, make sb do以及only+狀語(yǔ)放句首，用半倒裝。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。初寫短文。修改潤(rùn)色。浙江中考模擬）書面表達(dá)A small thing提示：請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給題目“A small thing”寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，記敘一件你經(jīng)歷過(guò)的小事。It was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a ，詞語(yǔ)at first，However,…. After one hour,的使用使整篇文章渾然一體。必要時(shí)要適當(dāng)使用連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢，文章最后注意對(duì)整個(gè)故事進(jìn)行總結(jié)，最好能夠從故事中得出自己的感悟，在敘述故事的同時(shí)使文章具有思想性。某英文雜志社正向九年級(jí)畢業(yè)生征文，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇題為“Thank you, My ________”的短文，將你對(duì)你的父母、老師、朋友或同學(xué)的感謝表達(dá)出來(lái)。s helped me a lot. Once, I failed my English exam. When she found I was very worried, she encouraged me to study harder and promised to help me. After that, I turned to her for help every time I had questions. She was always patient to make me understand every single question. With her help, I39。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。此處would like to, encourage sb to do sth, promise to do sth, turn to sb for help, make progress等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：People celebrate……，People hold……，We can watch……，We wele to……等句式的應(yīng)用。開頭介紹了今年端午節(jié)慶祝時(shí)間，接下來(lái)介紹端午節(jié)的由來(lái)以及慶祝活動(dòng)，最后歡迎大家一起體驗(yàn)這個(gè)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。一直以來(lái)，同學(xué)們對(duì)作業(yè)持有不同的觀點(diǎn)?！敬鸢浮緿ear students，I39。s all. Thanks.【解析】寫作分析：審題之后能明白寫作任務(wù)是要寫出一篇小論文，討論每日的作業(yè)到底是不是必要的。其次，開始具體陳述觀點(diǎn)，陳述的時(shí)候要適當(dāng)使用實(shí)例，相關(guān)用到的短語(yǔ)有have some difficulties in doing在做…的時(shí)候有困難，review the knowledge復(fù)習(xí)知識(shí)，think over the difficulties來(lái)回思考難點(diǎn)，Little by little一點(diǎn)一點(diǎn)地。安徽中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你是華,你的英國(guó)筆友對(duì)中國(guó)文化很感興趣,想到中國(guó)旅行感受中國(guó)文化。短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。但為提升文章檔次，也應(yīng)穿插一些并列句結(jié)構(gòu)或復(fù)合句，以及使用一些復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，如非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)等。全文敘述清晰，層次清楚，主次分明。13．（t climb trees, don39。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。天津中考模擬）根據(jù)聯(lián)合國(guó)教科文組織的統(tǒng)計(jì)顯示，北歐國(guó)家國(guó)民每年讀書24本左右,美國(guó)人年均閱讀7要 點(diǎn)讀書好；,帶來(lái)快樂(lè)；好（h224。Nowadays,reading is being more and more popular amongs be active readers and enjoy reading．【解析】這是一篇材料作文，行文之前，把表格里的要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容通讀一遍，做出框架，開始寫作時(shí)，把表格里所列內(nèi)容全部表述到文章中，并且自己適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)，詞形的變化。江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)76. 連云港開展了“真閱讀”工程，為了讓閱讀進(jìn)校園，為了營(yíng)造一種“多讀書，讀好書”的良好氛圍，你班將舉行一次主題班會(huì)，要求以 “A good book that influenced me a lot ” 為題作演講，向同學(xué)們介紹一本自己讀過(guò)的好書（the book’s name, the time you read, the content, the reason…），并談?wù)勛约旱母形?。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：A good book can……，My Life Story by Helen Keller is……，It is about……，we should……，we are supposed to……，let’s read……等句式的應(yīng)用。開頭介紹了我讀過(guò)的一本好書的名字，接下來(lái)介紹我讀這本書的時(shí)間，所讀的內(nèi)容以及閱讀這本書的原因，最后鼓勵(lì)大家多讀好書。要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。靈活運(yùn)用各種句式，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各個(gè)要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。17．（As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in . From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in . From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bring people closer , they can make more friends .Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives. About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They don’t have enough munication with their family members .They may feel a little lonelyPersonally, there39。s worse, it may lead to the crime.【解析】這篇作文要求我們對(duì)學(xué)校進(jìn)行的關(guān)于春節(jié)搶紅包這件事的調(diào)查結(jié)果進(jìn)行總結(jié)，并談?wù)勛约簩?duì)這件事情的看法。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不要逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，穿插并列句和復(fù)合句。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。文章以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，特別注意了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。文章中也出現(xiàn)了一些語(yǔ)法上的小錯(cuò)誤，總的來(lái)說(shuō)，不影響整篇文章的質(zhì)量。2. 表格最后一欄中省略部分須用12句話展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)