【正文】 是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。14．（河南中考模擬）有一種愛，它是無言的，是嚴(yán)肅的，在當(dāng)時(shí)往往無法細(xì)訴，然而，它讓你在過后的日子里越體會(huì)越有味道，一生一世忘不了，它就是那寬廣無邊的父愛。父親節(jié)馬上就要到了，你準(zhǔn)備為敬愛的父親做些什么？請(qǐng)以“Warm Father39。s Day”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀銓⑷绾闻c父親一起度過這個(gè)特別的日子。要求：；；____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Father’s Day is ing and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father. Different people like different kinds of gifts.If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie. I think your father will like it. But if you don’t have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea. When your father es back from work, he can drink it.No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father’s Day. Don’t you think so?【解析】【詳解】這是一篇命題作文。要求以“Warm Father39。s Day”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀銓⑷绾闻c父親一起度過“父親節(jié)”這個(gè)特別的日子。首先我們要認(rèn)真審題，看清題意，確定文章的中心思想、主題。在寫作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；另外，可以用上一些句型、短語，較高級(jí)的語言，這樣會(huì)使文章更出色。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。要求：；；15．（山東中考模擬）寫作現(xiàn)在全世界都在倡導(dǎo)“低碳生活（lowcarbon life）”，即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低開支的生活方式。低碳生活對(duì)我們大家都有好處，請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文向一家英文報(bào)社投稿。內(nèi)容包括：你的具體做法、你的感受以及建議。提示詞語：be good for,everyone,ride a bike,think,make a difference,environment,suggest,reuse_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Lowcarbon life is good for help with the environment,I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a ,I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the think it39。s my duty to live a lowcarbon even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the I suggest we should reuse books as long as we39。d better not spend much money on expensiveclothes.If everyone does something for the environment,I believe the earth will be a better place【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，針對(duì)“低碳生活”你的做法、感受以及建議。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be good for, help with, instead of, besides, make a difference, as long as possible, had better do, it is my duty to。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。16．（山東中考模擬） 寫作假定你是李華，在一位名叫Tiger Mom的學(xué)生家長的博客上，你看到以下內(nèi)容。 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)博客內(nèi)容，寫作要點(diǎn)和要求，給這位家長回復(fù)。 I’m the mother of a fourteenyear –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ? 寫作要點(diǎn)：1. 表明自己的看法。 2. 陳述自己的理由。3. 提出至少2條建議。【答案】Hi,TigerMom,What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in idea is that it is not quiteright for you to do so.Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some allA students in school have turned out not to be as successful insociety as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.So I suggest that you take your friends39。 advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let herhave more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，對(duì)學(xué)生家長的博客進(jìn)行回復(fù)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：My idea is that……，There are……，Some allA students in school have…….，The reason is……，So I suggest that……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭表明自己的看法，接下來陳述自己的理由，最后介紹自己的建議。此處turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。17．（靖江市靖城中學(xué)中考模擬）九年寒窗苦，六月備考忙。對(duì)于即將到來的中考，同學(xué)們既有期盼也有壓力。為了讓同學(xué)們學(xué)得開心，學(xué)有信心，我校英文報(bào)刊將開展“How to Face Senior High School Entrance Examination”的征文比賽，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，用英語簡要描述并適當(dāng)表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下表：現(xiàn)狀概述由于課業(yè)繁重，學(xué)生壓力較大。更注重學(xué)生的語言能力，學(xué)生難得高分，因此有些學(xué)生可能灰心。同學(xué)建議我們不僅要勤奮努力，更要改進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)方法。應(yīng)該認(rèn)真計(jì)劃好時(shí)間，以便在學(xué)業(yè)和愛好間取得平衡。你的建議……（12點(diǎn)，做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）注意事項(xiàng)：1. 征文須包含表格中所有要點(diǎn)。要求語句通順，意思連貫；2. 詞數(shù)100左右，開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。How to Face Senior High School Entrance Examination The Senior High School Entrance Examination is ing. Are you ready for it? Although we have dreams, we may feel worried from time to 【答案】How to Face Senior High School Entrance ExaminationThe Senior High School Entrance Examination is ing. Are you ready for it? Although we have dreams, we may feel worried from time to time. Recently, because of the heavy schoolwork, many students are stressed. Moreover, more attention is paid to students’ language ability, so it is difficult for students to get high marks. As a result, some students are likely to lose heart. As to the problems, my classmates offer the following suggestions. First, we should not only work hard but also improve our learning methods. Second, we should plan our time carefully so that we can achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies. In my opinion, we should develop a healthy body by