【正文】 and try their best to make the world more fortble to live in.What I think the most great change is the attitude that we hold .As long as all of us have a right attitude to our life ,our society will be more beautiful and great.【解析】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如as we all know，in different aspects of our life，more and more morden，a lot，all of you，first of all，in our hometown，one of the most meaningful things，what39。s more，help with each other，live in，as long as等。而First of all, The roads in our hometown have been broadened and they are more safer than ever before, which I think is the one of the most meaningful things for our local people./ What’s more, it costs little to use them. / As long as all of us have a right attitude to our life ,our society will be more beautiful and ，豐富了習作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。16．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達在英語課上，同學們就自己喜歡的旅游方式展開了討論。請你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文，匯報討論結(jié)果，并談談自己的想法。團隊旅游◆有導游，不會迷路；◆不必自己找食宿◆結(jié)識朋友，互相幫助個人旅游◆自由安排時間；◆選擇自己喜歡的旅游景點；◆學會照顧自己你的想法……注意事項：1．文章必須包括表中全部內(nèi)容，可適當增加細節(jié)；2．想法至少在兩句以上；3．詞數(shù)90左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：團隊旅游travel with a group 個人旅游travel aloneRecently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．With a guide39。s help, they won39。t get lost and they don39。t need to look for hotels or restaurants by themselves．Besides, they can make friends and help each other while travelling．However, other students prefer to travel alone． That39。s because they can arrange their time freely and choose to visit their favourite sights．What39。s more, it39。s a chance for them to learn to look afterthemselves．For me, I39。d like to travel alone．I want to spend enough time visiting the places I like． In this way, I can enjoy my vacation better．【解析】這是一篇圖表，要求談談自己對不同的旅游方式的看法。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。17．（長沙麓山國際實驗學校中考模擬）書面表達 75. 初中生活馬上就要結(jié)束了，三年的初中生活一定給你留下了很多揮之不去的回憶。請你給大家講一個最值得你回憶的故事。包括時間、人物、事情經(jīng)過和事后你的感想要求：（1）應包含以上全部的信息，可適當增加細節(jié)，以使條理清楚、行文連貫；（2）詞數(shù)：80字左右（3）短文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名、學校名和地名。_____________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve bee interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to bee one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others。【解析】英語作文寫出的句子要達意，完整，語法正確，合乎習慣，特別是句式，謂語動詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。英語作文要注意人稱和時態(tài)，注意提供的觀點、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文，要忠實于材料，不必擴展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯句。get on well with相處融洽；help each other and learn from each other互相幫助，互相學習；with one’s help在某人的幫助下；in the future. 在未來；e true.（夢想）成真18．（四川中考模擬）書面表達現(xiàn)在越來越多的人在網(wǎng)上購物，網(wǎng)購已成為流行趨勢，二網(wǎng)購的利弊也成為人們討論的焦點，請參考下面的信息，并結(jié)合就的觀點些一短文，談談你的看法。，可以在家買東西，不受時間限制。，可以買到當?shù)貨]有的商品。價格較便宜。；實物和圖片有差距。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Now Internet Shopping is more and more popular in the world.It’s a new way of shopping. It has lots of advantages. The most important is convenient. You can shop whenever you like because the online shops are open 24 hours a day. It is easy to buy goods and it is also easy to find the things that you can’t buy in the shop. And they are cheaper. Besides, we can learn lots of information about goods.Every coin has two sides. So is Internet shopping. You can’t see the material objects or check their quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and don’t like them, they sometimes are not easy to give back. What’s more, it’s not safe to pay through the internet. We should be careful when we shop on the internet.【解析】寫作分析：本文需要寫一篇小議論文，主題是網(wǎng)上購物，需要討論到網(wǎng)上購物的利和弊，注意合理分段，使得文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，可以先總起陳述，然后用一段來描述優(yōu)點，再用一段描述劣勢和不足，最后一段收尾，這樣的作文就會條理清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。具體來說，每個觀點在陳述的時候要注意表達準確。寫作亮點：首段總起介紹，挑明這篇作文的主題Internet Shopping。第二段開始描述優(yōu)勢，這里用到了“無論什么時候你喜歡/想要”（whenever you like）