【正文】 該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；切忌堆砌詞語、句子，注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢，連貫。注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號等的正確運(yùn)用；最后注意檢查：單詞拼寫，語法，動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)，語序，主謂一致等。15．（湖北中考模擬）學(xué)會(huì)自我保護(hù)是青少年需要具備的一種意識和能力。請根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合自己的觀點(diǎn)，以＂How Can We Protect Ourselves?＂為題，寫一篇不少于80詞的短文，談?wù)勗谏钪星嗌倌陸?yīng)該怎樣自我保護(hù)（selfprotection）。提示：1. never swim alone。2. be careful to make friends。3. call the police when you are in danger。4. eat healthy food。5. don’t crowd（go upstairs and downstairs）. 要求：1. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，要點(diǎn)齊全，內(nèi)容合理，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫；2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名、地名。How Can We Protect Ourselves?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How Can We Protect Ourselves?Selfprotection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how can we protect ourselves? Here are some of my suggestions.First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthy. Besides, we shouldn’t crowd each other when we go upstairs and downstairs at school. Last but not least, summer is ing, we must remember it’s dangerous to swim alone.In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.【解析】這篇作文要求我們以How can we protect ourselves為題，談一談青少年在日常生活中應(yīng)該如何保護(hù)自己。這是一篇話題作文，文章中只給出了寫作的題目，而未給出具體的內(nèi)容，因此首先學(xué)生們應(yīng)結(jié)合自己的日常生活，發(fā)揮想象力，先列出文章具體內(nèi)容的提綱，然后根據(jù)題綱來組織語言，最后成文。這樣的題目是有點(diǎn)難度的，但也一定程度上放開了學(xué)生的思維，學(xué)生們可以根據(jù)自己所想來寫作，而不用受到內(nèi)容的限制。寫之前，要注意確定文章應(yīng)使用的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，通過分析可知，這篇作文應(yīng)以第一人稱we為主，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來敘述。注意謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語句式表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，以主謂賓和主系表的結(jié)構(gòu)為基礎(chǔ)，寫出正確的句子，然后為提升文章檔次，使用幾個(gè)較復(fù)雜的句型，如復(fù)合句、非謂語動(dòng)詞、被動(dòng)結(jié)構(gòu)等等。還應(yīng)注意語句之間的連接，使用一些短語、副詞等，使整篇文章意思連貫。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容符合題目要求，并且內(nèi)容充實(shí)、完整，表達(dá)清楚、明了。作者從三個(gè)方面講述了自己的看法，這幾個(gè)方面都非常符合實(shí)際，所提建議很合理。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)、第一人稱為主，語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。文章里還使用了一些較好的短語和句型，如First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. 和Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves ；再如In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.中非謂語動(dòng)詞的使用。文章各部分之間使用了較好的連接成分，如First, Second, Also, Besides, In short等等，這些詞匯和短語的使用讓文章具有連貫性。16．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)保護(hù)環(huán)境是每一個(gè)人的責(zé)任。假設(shè)下面是你閱讀了有關(guān)環(huán)保的書之后的變化，請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)所給內(nèi)容寫一篇短文。過去現(xiàn)在 ，并回收利用 你認(rèn)為作為中學(xué)生應(yīng)該如何做才能保護(hù)好環(huán)境?（至少兩點(diǎn)）要求：，意思連貫。，做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。，不計(jì)入總同數(shù)。It is our duty to protect our environment. After reading a book about the environment, Ihave changed a lot. 【答案】It is our duty to protect our environment. After reading a book about the environment, I have changed a lot.In the past, I went to school in my father’s car because it was easy and fast. I always threw away the things which were old. And I used to ask for plastic bags when shopping in the supermarket.However, after reading the book, I have realized the importance of protecting the environment . I go to school on foot or by bike now. And I try to use things as long as possible and recycle them they are old. And I always remember to take my own bag when shopping.I think as students we should do something to help protect our environment. We should save water. And we should turn off lights when we leave the classroom.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我閱讀了關(guān)于環(huán)保的書后的很大變化。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：It is our duty to……，I went to……，And I used to……，And I try to……，I think……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了保護(hù)環(huán)境是我們的職責(zé)，我閱讀了關(guān)于環(huán)保的書后有很大變化，接下來介紹我過去和現(xiàn)在在環(huán)保方面有什么樣的變化，最后作為中學(xué)生我們應(yīng)如何保護(hù)環(huán)境。此處in the past, throw away, used to, on foot, try to do sth, remember to do sth, turn off等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。17．（重慶市育才中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。上周的一堂英語課上，老師就“二孩政策（ twochild policy ）”展開了全班調(diào)查。請你以“ Do you want to have a brother or a sister?” 為題目用英語寫一篇短文，先匯總班上同學(xué)的觀點(diǎn)，再陳述自己的想法。觀點(diǎn)理由不想有弟妹，愿意當(dāng)獨(dú)生子女（21%）不愿意與別人分享父母的愛，父母會(huì)很辛苦，......想要弟妹，不愿意當(dāng)獨(dú)生子女（62%） 渴望有伴，有更多的親人，有人分享......不介意，都可以（17%） ……你的觀點(diǎn)……要求：文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和學(xué)校名稱，100字左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)。Do you want to have a brother or a sister?Do you want to have a brother or a sister?Last week,__________________________【答案】Do you want to have a brother or a sister?Do you want to have a brother or a sister?Last week,we had a discussion about twochild students think they don’t want to have a brother or a sister. Because they don’t want to share parents’ love with , parents can be tired because of two children. However,others think they want to have a brother or a sister. Because they are eager for a person to play can share their happiness and sorrow.17% of students think they can’t mind having a brother or a should be decided by their parents.I think it is good to have a brother or sister to grow up with, I can share everything with him or her.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇以“Do you want to have a brother or a sister?”為話題的調(diào)查報(bào)告，介紹同學(xué)們對“二孩政策（ twochild policy ）”不同的觀點(diǎn)，并闡述理由。動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)主題組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)表達(dá)。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，做到語句通順。為了使意思更加連貫可適當(dāng)使用連接詞。還要注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表