【正文】 閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等?！军c(diǎn)睛】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。如At this time, a big sister saw that he helped him turn on the water pipe and fill the water給文章增色不少。15．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)追星是青少年中普遍存在的問題。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，同時說明你自己的觀點(diǎn)。贊同，學(xué)習(xí)他們的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，嚴(yán)格要求自己。，想到偶像會很開心。不贊同，浪費(fèi)時間、金錢和精力。，整天夢想成為明星。你的觀點(diǎn)…… （發(fā)揮12點(diǎn)）注意：1. 詞數(shù)90左右。短文開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。2. 條理清晰，語義連貫，句式規(guī)范，字跡工整。3. 短文中不得提及真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。4. 以…為榜樣： follow a good example of sb. 面對現(xiàn)實: face realityNowadays, lots of students bee star chasers. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】Nowadays, lots of students bee star chasers. especially many university people think teenagers should learn from stars and find their strengths and then they are strict with they are sad,it is fun to think ,they forget the pressure of learning.However, others think it is a waste of time and energy to chase stars. And it also affects their studies. They can’t face the reality and always dreams of being a famous star. In my opinion, having idols is not a bad thing. However, we should make it clear who are the real “heroes”. As far as I am concerned, the real heroes are those who are making the most contributions to our society, such as teachers, doctors and scientists. As students, we should learn from them. Only in this way can we bee useful persons in the future.【解析】【詳解】寫作思路：根據(jù)所給提示可知，本篇作文可以分三步進(jìn)行，首先分別列舉正反雙方的觀點(diǎn)，然后擺出自己的看法，并總結(jié)作為青少年的我們應(yīng)該怎么做。列舉觀點(diǎn)時要思路清晰，具有條理性。本篇作文，首先以Nowadays, lots of students bee star chasers. especially many university ，接著Some people think….When they are sad, .... Also,…列出一些人贊同的觀點(diǎn)及理由，中間用到when以及also 這樣的詞使表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，且具有連貫性。However, others think…用however轉(zhuǎn)折之后接著列出不贊同的觀點(diǎn)及理由。然后In my opinion….巧妙運(yùn)用過渡語，列出自己的觀點(diǎn)。 We should….針對我們青少年應(yīng)該怎么做，給出自己的建議?？偨Y(jié)流暢自然，渾然天成。16．（黑龍江中考模擬）話題作文：根據(jù)漢語提示和要求寫一篇短文。（A和B兩篇，可任選一篇）現(xiàn)在有許多新的購物方式，網(wǎng)上購物就是其中的一種。越來越多的人熟悉和喜歡網(wǎng)購，但是網(wǎng)購有利有弊，請根據(jù)下面提供的信息用英語以“Online shopping”為題寫一篇短文，描述網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶?。?yōu)點(diǎn)：可以在任何時候購物；只需要一臺電腦和鼠標(biāo)；方便比較同類產(chǎn)品的價格，可以省錢；無論何時何地都可以收到所購物品。缺點(diǎn)：網(wǎng)上付款有時不安全；看不到實物，也不能試穿衣服。注意：語意連貫，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確；詞數(shù)80－100。字跡工整，語法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮?！敬鸢浮縊nline shoppingThere are many new ways of shopping, and online shopping is one of them.Online shopping has several advantages. First, you can shop at any time. Second, to shop on the Internet you only need a puter and mouse. Third, you can pare the prices of the same product and save money. You can also receive it anywhere in the world at any time!But shopping on the Internet also has some disadvantages. Paying over the Internet isn’t always safe. You can’t see the product or try the clothes on.I think our life is changing because of online shopping. One day no one will go to the shops any more, because you’ll be able to buy almost anything on the Internet.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，要表達(dá)網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物的利與弊。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如advantage, at any time, the price of, disadvantage, try on, not...any more等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。17．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假定你叫John，最近從報紙上得知英國某公司將在你的家鄉(xiāng)建一座工廠，請給該公司寫封電子郵件。要點(diǎn)如下：表示歡迎：有利于家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)展等；感到擔(dān)憂：造成環(huán)境污染等；希望了解有關(guān)環(huán)保措施及更多信息。適當(dāng)提出一點(diǎn)你的建議。注意：1．詞數(shù)80—100；2．請不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮以使行文連貫；3．郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Sir or Madam,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours faithfully, John【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,I am a middle school student. I have recently learned from the newspaper that you are going to build a factory here in my hometown. There is no doubt that it is good for the development of my hometown and it will provide us with more jobs. Most of us stand by the program. However, some of us are worried that the factory will make much noise and pollute the environment of the area. I would like to know whether you have any plans for the environment protection.Would you please offer us more information about it?I39。m looking forward to hearing from you.Yours faithfully,John【解析】這是一篇提綱作文。內(nèi)容是針對英國某公司將在你的家鄉(xiāng)建一座工廠這件事，寫一封電子郵件，表達(dá)歡迎和你的擔(dān)憂。注意電子郵件的格式，時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一人稱?？忌枰紫葘徢逯黝}，圍繞主題展開作文。要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性；文章必須涵蓋所提供的各個提綱要點(diǎn)，不要遺漏。行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句。作文完成后，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏需要表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)。本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：1．表示歡迎：有利于家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)展等；2．感到擔(dān)憂：造成環(huán)境污染等；3．希望了解有關(guān)環(huán)保措施及更多信息；最后，適當(dāng)提出一點(diǎn)你的建議。18．（湖南中考模擬）暑假即將來臨，許多學(xué)生喜歡下河游泳。為預(yù)防游泳溺水事故的發(fā)生，你們班將舉行以“珍愛生命，預(yù)防溺水”為主題的班會。請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勀銓Π踩斡镜慕ㄗh。建議內(nèi)容包括：不要到陌生的河流湖泊游泳；不允許擅自結(jié)伴游泳；不會游泳，不要下水救人……要求：1．語言通順，意思連貫，符合邏輯。2．內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名。4．詞數(shù)：70詞左右。參考詞匯：alone without permission（未經(jīng)許可） allowask for help cherish（珍愛）Going Swimming Safely 【答案】Summer vacation is ing. Many students like going swimming in rivers or lakes. But how to swim safely? Here is my advice: Don’t swim in strange rivers or lakes. We shouldn’t go swi